Dil Chahta Hain (RP) Pt10pg43 'On the Go' - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Hi Arwa

Nice update.👏
Sujal is remembering his happy times with Sheena..They both were very much in love but now they hate each other even more.
Sujal lost his temper when he saw Sheena in her working clothes but her reply more or less angered him even more.
He is trying hard to avoid the limelight and Sheena is finding it hard to believe..Wat is going in his mind??
The way Sheena and Sujal were dancing showed their inner most feelings..They still feel a lot for each other but its all over shadowed by their bitterness.Their chemistry is still very strong.
The VM was really good⭐️⭐️ and do i need to repeat this gain and again.U r just brilliant in making them.The song was also perfect...👏👏
Sheena has endured too much of Sujal's arrogance and she breaks up when he treated her like an object.
Sujal wanted this very much..he wanted her to lash out at him so that he can insult her.
Sheena and Sujal's meeting was quite filmy.both were behaving as love sick fools.😆😆😉
That kiss was quite daring when they have just met😆
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
magical vm on this awesome song👏 👏 👏 👏
ive fallen in love with it😳 😳 😊

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Great part and VM was awesome...
Sujal is remembering his past spent with Sheena, they were so happy with each other.
They both are not able to control their emotions while dancing and the song brings out their love and passion for each other.
Sujal is behaving very arrogantly with Sheena. She is completely shattered and cannot bear his insults
please continue soon
Edited by dazzling_glory - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome vm n an awesome part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
hey
nice part ...loved it!!!!
sujeena's chemistry is sizziling!!!!!!!
love thier taunt!!!!
wow they fight ALOTTT !!!!!!!!!
i still winder what sheena actually did that made sujal hate her...
plz break the suspence...its too much to handle...lol just kidding!!!!
cont soon
esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
hey really nice part i just love to read ur fic
hmmm Sujal ka gussa or should i say pyar 😍
awesome VM
plz update next part soon coz i can't wait 4 long
luv Sujal Sheena ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Nice update arwa 👏

Starting scene mein pehle to mujhe samajh mein nai aya ki ho kya raha hai phir dheere dheere samajh mein aaya ki dono apni engagement ring ke bare mein baat kar rahe the 😆😆

Flashback scene was very good , romantic and passionate of sujal and sheena 😊😉👏

But to their luck again the reality hit hard to sujal he realized that what he wants from sheena and how vulnerable he wanted to be her infront of him and when they are going into the party he again started on sheena for her dress 🤢🤢

Like sheena I also did not understand that why infront of others he saves her and while they were alone he always humiliated sheena like never before and what made sheena and sujal to break their relationship when they are going to step into another stage of this relationship😕 and now they hate one another to such an extent that whenever sujal or sheena got any chance they both did not let go off any moment to humiliate each other 😕 😕

And when sheena returned to the hospital back to her mother she just cant bear the last encounter with sujal and break down 😭

But again the flashback was awesome coz it was sujaland sheena's first meeting and their first kiss which was unwanted for sheena but needed for sujal (I think so) 😳😉

Continue soon – smile

Take care😊 and byeee 😊

Shreya😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Lovely part 😳😳...👏👏👏...
loved the way the part started 😉😳😳... with sujal's dream 😳😳...it was surely a pleasant one 😉😆...poor sujal ...his dream got over quite soon 😆😆😆...

must say sujal was literally rude & mean to sheena at the party ...felt bad for her ... but dats the way sujal is😳😳 ...cant help it 😆... guess sheena can sing for sujal..."I hate You like I love You " 🤣

aww dancing at party 😍 ... 😳...revisiting memories 😳😳...

haila 😲 slap to Mr. Garewal 😳😆...way to go girl 👏👏... somewhere he deserved that ..for being so mean & outrageous ...

FB 😍 ... loved there first meeting 😳😳... 🤣 ...sujal was really fast going for the kiss even without knowing girl's name 😆😆😆...seems ...Mr. Garewal fell at the first sight quite literally 😆 😆


overall wonderful part... 👏👏... continue soon 😳😳



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Edited by -purnima- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Awesome part
the vm is fabulous 👏👏👏👏 ..the song is perfect
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

awesome update...loved it...

oh sujal n sheena...both r awesome...dancing scene was superb...n yes nice VM...

cont soon...

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