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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Hi Arwa
Nice part.

I really pity Sheena ..Poor girl!! she doesn't even have a single choice..Sujal is trying to manipulate he as much as he like.he is insulting her to take his revenge..
Pls reveal abt their past difference soon coz then we'll b able to justify their hatred for each other.
He is throwing so much work on her just to to see her break in front of him but Sheena will not give him a single chance.
she is working really hard and Sujal is making her life hell.He has all the cards right now.
At least Sheena's mother is fine now so all her sacrifices r worth it.she really loves her mom and cares abt her.
Even Sujal is not that bad as he makes Sheena believe.he cares for her her but his hatred takes over his concern.

Pls continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Nice update 😊
Sujal is really rude to him but somewhere he still cares for her that's y he keep all info about her. πŸ˜‰
He stills loves her and same goes for Sheena that's inspite of being angry with him she could not speak when he was closest to her. 😳 I know it's not easy to develop those feelings again but i am sure it will happen soon. πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by arpita25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Vow that was a great update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
I am now a days waiting for this fic to be updated asap. 😍 😍 😍
fantastic start with good second part, u kept ur pace the same. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
I knew that Sujal kuch aisa hi karega and his torture started in this way to insult him more and more.
Sheena knew that but her need and requirement made her silent in front of him, after all he is the only one who helped in her mother's operation by giving her money as soon as she signed the contract unwillingly. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Sheena is also not giving him any chance to shout on her but i really love their equation as it is very popular quote that The person u love the most is the one to whom u can hate the most
This is love that's why he is keeping each and every info about her and her mother's operation and didn't give her chance to reach at hospital very early. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
When Sujal offered to help Sheena i understood that he wants to be the only person who torture her like hell and in this way he wants to protect her from every evil person in the society. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
And it was really his charm and magic that inspite of being angry with him she could not burst on her but Sujal is really smart he knows very well how to control himself; but i want him to loose his control aur dekhte hain kab tak aur kitna control hoga.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Thank god Sheena's mom is safe and her operation was successful all thanks to Sujal.πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
But u know i love their this cute love, i am sure that this will sort out the misund b/w them and bring them closer soon. 😍 😍 😍
Want to see what will happen in the party and want to read some good scenes b/w them and eagerly waiting to know about their past.😊 😊 😊
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Update was too good
Both Sujal and sheena putting up a tough fight.
Sujal is being very arrogant with her, while she is determined to give him a taste of his own medicine.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Vow great update guys. πŸ‘a
to fir se ek baar dono saath hain apni nafrat k saath aur ek new game ki shuruvaat ki hai Sujal ne par mai chahti hoon ki is game k finish hone tak ek baar phir Sujal ko Sheena se pyaar ho jaaye.😍 Vaise ye sab jo ye dono ek doosre k saath kar rahe hain vo apne aap me kaafi hai ye batane k liye ki dono ki khushi aur gum bhi ek doosre se jude hue hain.πŸ˜‰ thank god Sheena's mom is safe after opertion.😊 The heartless Sujal is back but i am sure Sheena k aage us ka ye attitude jyada din nahi chalega.
πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
hi yaar

its being long time since u updated... ven will u update yaar next??

its so sad to c sujal and sheena against each other so much...

hope dat slowly n steadily their misunderstanding and hatred and anger towards each other gets reduced...

its really bad to hear dat naina's mother is so unwell...

and naina have to do all this for her mother...

hope there must be some other way out...for naina to get things solved...


dey both have still feelings for each other but i guess their hatred and anger is much more than their love...


raj is behaving like an idiot by making naina work like machine...24*7😑😑😑😑😑

she is bearing it with so much pain...

cant raj c her tears and pain...

hope that every thing between two of them gets fine soon...just hoping for the best...😭😭😭😭😭




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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
pls continue soon 😳 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much


Sheena ko aaj bhi Sujal ki saari baatein yaad hai and out of them how disciplined he was about certain things!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes she hasn't forgotten anything


Sheena has a really high opinion about Sujal which is that he is a self centered egoistic arrogant pig!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe well he is behaving like one thats why


Sujal's torture started just as I had thought from the time she reached his office to insult her as much as possible!!!! - yes those are his intentions totally


Sujal has been plotting a scheme to teach her a lesson since the time she had betrayed him!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈 - yeh he has been waiting for the right moment


But I don't think she ever did that as she had really loved him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ - well yeh but something surely had happened between them to create the hatred


Sujal's plans of what he wants to do to Sheena are seriously X-rated!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes they definitely are


Sujal had almost fallen for her at the party again but his hatred was stronger which made him set the proposal!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - generally hatred does become stronger when once it was love


Sujal wants to make her beauty go away magar isse uska kaha koi faida hoga!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - he'll just the fun he wants


Sheena knew that Sujal is doing all this on purpose but her need made her silent in front of him!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh she is very helpless right now


The ruthless arrogant businessman Sujal Garewal as always is going to be the one who is making the rules!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - as always


He had to show Sheena who was in control and ordered her as if he was some sort of a king!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe in this story he is the king


He has the contract ready with the ten nights written in it and Sheena unwllingly signed it!!!!! - ab kuch paane ke liye khona bhi parta hain


I loved his comment about marriage agreement and well I wish it was indeed their marriage agreement!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - well that has a long way to go yet


He is showing so much attitude to her and actually ordering her to do chores like making coffee for him!!!!! - it's his plan to torture her as much as possible


Poor Sheena!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She doesn't have a single choice and her soul is not agreeing to give him the ten nights!!!!! - haan buri tarhase phasi huwi hain


Sujal still loves her and cares for her and that's why wants to help her and protect her from the evil society!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm perhaps


But he also wants to torture her and get his worth out of it as well!!!!! - he can't let the golden opportunity slip out of his hands


Wakai jahan nafrat hoti hai wahi pyaar bhi hota hai aur undono ke ish nafrat ke peeche kahi na kahi pyaar chupa huya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes deep down somewhere it still exists


Sujal is throwing so much work on her just to see her break in front of him!!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ - yes he wants her to give up in front of him


Sheena has to rush so much that she couldn't even have her lunch properly!!!!! - thats why it's rush hours


But Sheena is also giving a tough fight and not giving him a chance to mock her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - yes she is not quitter that easily


The tiredness is now taking a toll on her but Sujal keeps her busy all the time!!!!!! - because he doesn't care abt all that anymore


Sujal has already given the check at the hospital for her mother's treatment and so she had to reach before the operation took place!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh he is man of his word afterall


I loved the knocking scene and it reminded me of the scene in LRL!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - yeh the lrl scene was very well shown that i luved it too


Sheena sure hasn't lost that attitude which had made Sujal fall for her because she was totally different!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh different from the all the rest he had ever met


Sujal doesn't allow her to go to the hospital early to show that he wasn't that man anymore who had done everything she had asked for!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - yeh the kind and compassionate one


Sheena is very sad to see that Sujal has killed all the compassion in him and it almost melted him but not quite!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - well he has become stone hearted due to the pain he has gone through


She really should have slammed all the files on his head as he deserves that!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - are pjir bechaare ka sir koun dabaata hehehe


They both still have feelings for each other but their hatred and anger is greater than their love!!!!! - hota hain hota hain aksar pyaar main aisa hee hota hain


It is his love which makes him keep each and every info about her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - naturally i wud say


Thank God the operation had gone successfully and her mom is safe now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh as her mother is everything for her


Sheena really loves her and cares for her and cannot think of life without her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely she can't as she is the only thing left for her now


However she isn't happy about that fact that the devil was also involved in saving her mother!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh she can't stand that fact at all


It was really mean of Sujal to call Sheena from the hospital when she didn't even get much sleep!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - sure but he simply doesn't care anymore so wat else wud u expect from him


He can atleast give a moment of peace to her but he is cruel and not a bit considerate!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - cruel seems to be his middle name at present


Sheena just wants to strangle him and even I want to do the same!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - hehehe there wud be plenty of times for that


Aate hi Sujal shuru ho gaya ignoring the sadness in her eyes!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - ab kathore dil ka hain to aisa hee hoga na


When Sujal moved close to Sheena, she was lost in him as his powerful aura made her fall under his spell!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 - he still has that affect on her


Even now his charm and magic works on her but he knows very well how to control himself!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he does as he is playing all the cards in this game


I would love to see the great Sujal Garewal lose his control and lets see for how long he controls himself!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm surely let's see how long


He started to threaten her again but Sheena interrupted and sarcastically calls him Sir!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - as she knows how to keep her strong front in front of him


Sheena spent another tiresome day and wasn't even able to go when she found out that her mom had problems with her breathing!!!! - yeh she was unfortunately held back


She reached her mother's room and was relieved to see that she was alright!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - haan sab theek hee hain


Even now Sujal doesn't leave her alone and tells her to come to a party with him!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - now how can he stop when he has her in his hold now


He is making her life hell and wakai Sujal ne usse ghulaam banake rakh diya hai!!!! - he tends to do a lot more than just make her his slave


Sheena left for the party which I am sure is one more plan of Sujal to break her!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - surely now lets see how it goes


Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

nice update arwaπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘ - thanks very much


it was seriously rush hours for sheenaπŸ₯±πŸ₯± poor girl tiredness taking toll on her but our dear sujal keeps her busy all the time🀒- yes he surely is taking her maximum energy away from her

πŸ₯±πŸ₯± he does comprise of so much of atittude and throws the
stupid works like making coffee for him on the poor girl😭😭😭 - well that's his whole plan to torture her with jobs as such

how does she maintaining her cool i wonderπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ - hehehe well silence sometimes cud mean a warning of the storm

now the party is there how much wonderful will be for sheena - hmmm surely lets see if it is wonderful or terrible

waiting for itπŸ˜•πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜›

thnx for the pm 😊 - ur welcome
continue soon 😊
shreya😊





Originally posted by: rituka7

Awesome
nyc storyline


Thanks very much for loving it that much

I'm glad u liked the story line and hope u read further too
Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -purnima-

as always lovely part πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ - thanks very much

The ruthless arrogant businessman Sujal is here 😳😳😳... as always he is gona be the one who is laying the rules πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...but he got a tough competition this time πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...sheena gives a tough fight πŸ‘πŸ‘ - hehehe surely she knows how to answer back strongly

Knocking scene πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ reminded me of similar situtaion😍 πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰"maine knock nahi suna" "Maine knock kiya bhi nahi sir " πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† - wow you actually noticed t. yeh well I luved this scene thats why had to use it

dat was really mean of sujal πŸ˜† to call sheena to office from hospital ...he can atleast give a moment of peace to her ,πŸ˜›πŸ˜›... he can be a little considerate πŸ˜› but guess dats what sujal cant be πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... - nope he can't be considerate at all

Both sujal-sheena gonna be tough for each other πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...so all the best to both of them πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...waiting for their past to be revealed πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ - surely wud be coming soon

continue soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ



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