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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and too sensuous !!!!!!!!!!!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was expected but always the way u write such parts make me say wow.😳 😳 😳 It was too passionate.
☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Just love the way Sujal was teasing Sheena and in same way he was respecting Sheena's wish n didn't want to force her in to all this but soon she herself got ready for bringing their relationship to another level. 😉 😉 😉

Their lovely chasing and sweet talks were making it more horny and sensual.
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Sujal was smart enough to make the things slow and interesting for both. 😉 😉 😉

Sheena was so passionate as well and love the way u described their feelings with perfect and suitable song for the situation.
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Update soon darls.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god it was too much hot and even in his rainy season I felt hot while reading this update. 😳
Sujal was so desperate to know and to access Sheena in his own way. 😉 Sheena too wanted that but she was so shy but soon her shyness gone away when she became so bold all of a sudden.😛 The best part which I loved was Sujal's wits, he didn't want to force himself on Sheena and that's why he took it very slow and started only when she was fully ready.😊 Perfect choice of song for the situation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooo hot. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

What else is needed to say? 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

I was speechless while reading the update. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sujal and Sheena were so passionate.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Sujal was playing with her and she was just getting weak all his attempts and soon she surrendered. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I will be happy to read next part soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
update was too hot actually.😳Dont know wat to comment.😆
U write really brilliantly.👏
Finally Sujal and Sheena became one and they cherished every moment of their intimacy.They both r too much in love and this was their right time to consummate their relationship.
But wat went wrong in the end coz now they r no longer together.

Edited by suhana.dixit - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b


Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!Superb!!!!!Fabulous!!!!!!Fantastic!!!!! - thanks very much

Sheena realized that Sujal had cheated and isn't going to let him win like this!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep u cant fool this gal

But Sujal is shameless about it and wants his winnings!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - wo bhi kuch kam nahi

That was very mischievous of him but I guess all is fair in love and war!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - yep true say

Sheena is right in thinking that their first time should be meaningful and not just a challenge won!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh its mostly every girl's dream

Sujal is teasing Sheena and she is running around the hall with him after her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - thats the fun part of a healthy relationship

Sheena's dress is beautiful and very hot!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - thank you

Sujal loves her giggles and is determined never to let her go out of his life!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes she is the best thing that has happened to him

He does love her very much but has not realized it yet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm perhaps

It was hilarious when Sheena hit him with a cushion and he was stunned for a couple of moments!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - hehehe kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota hain

It was too sensual the way Sujal pasted her against the wall and made her go crazy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - it always is in their chemistry

Sheena loves being close to Sujal but she feels that she has to control herself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - after all it is her first time

Sujal is desperate to have Sheena in the way he wants!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - that he is

But when he felt that Sheena was not responding, he respected her wishes and stopped!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - because he is a gentleman and not an animal

He is ready to wait and will only take the next step when she is ready!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - yes as i said gentleman

Sujal is just too good and no wonder Sheena wanted him to be her first mate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - oh yeh the best she can find

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - thank u

You couldn't have chosen a more suitable song!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yeh it totally reminded me of them

The lyrics match their mood and their situation perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - they sure do

Sheena's shyness is gone now and she has become bold and she wants Sujal to take her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - thats because she has full confidence in him

Her black lingerie looked very hot and the colour is very much in tune with their mood!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes black is the indication of sensuality

I loved the way he carried her in his arms to his bedroom!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - well we can't have romance without this particular scene

His room is beautiful and increased the magic around them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - he had it prepared

The colours are very significant as white is for love, red for passion and black is for lust!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - hehehe u have mapped it out well

Sheena playing around sensuously with the black satin sheets reminded me of the music video of the song "Aa zara" from Murder 2!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - surely it was a big inspiration

I loved it how Sujal created the perfect atmosphere by lighting the scented candles!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - he knew how to turn her on

What did Sujal draw on Sheena's spine with his finger??😕 😕 😕 😕 - that my dear is a mystery

Sheena feels very special looking into his intense eyes as something had changed within him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - it was a like an untold feeling

Did she finally see his love for her in his eyes??😛 😛 😛 😛 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ - its possible

Sheena felt that only Sujal had the right to see her like that and so she was totally fine with her bold display!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep fully entrusted to him

It seems like she also loves him and felt that she belonged to him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm something is surely brewing

Sujal and Sheena are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes they r

It was sizzling hot!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - sujal and sheena are something else

It was beautiful and just perfect!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - thanks

Finally Sujal and Sheena became one and they cherished every moment of their togetherness!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 - yes because it was very special for them

They both are very much in love and this was the right time to consummate their relationship!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - hmmm but love is still left to be brewed

But then what went wrong because now they are no longer together??😔 😔 😔 😔 - that is the big question which wud be answered if u read further on



Edited by awaazilicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Firstly sorry for unreserving so late 😆😆😆 dats main reason why i prefer commenting simultaneously later on it gets slipped from memory 😆😆😆 ...Thanks to Shaina_b...for reminding 😃😃😃...else i wud have forgotten 😆😆😆... - hehehe its ok as it always happens with me which makes me update once in a long while

As for UD 😳😳...commenting is important ☺️ its too difficult ☺️...
Its wonderful as always & ofcourse Romantic 😳😳 ...Thats was mischevious of Sujal to cheat 😆😆 but guess All is fair in Love ❤️ & as for Sheena...It must have taken all her strength to show her resistance 😛😛 - thanks very much and yes its in the name 'Sujal'. Yep but her trust in him was strong

Hope this is not a dream for either of them 😛😛 & if its real hope either of them gona be regretting or blaming the other 1 🤔... - hmmm well for the time being its very much real and lets see what r the after effects.

Can see flashback ending soon & we coming to present...Hope they sort out things soon 😊😊😊
- yes lets see







Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Awesome and too sensuous !!!!!!!!!!!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - thanks a lot

It was expected but always the way u write such parts make me say wow.😳 😳 😳 It was too passionate.
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - aaaw i'n glad u always like my romantic parts

Just love the way Sujal was teasing Sheena and in same way he was respecting Sheena's wish n didn't want to force her in to all this but soon she herself got ready for bringing their relationship to another level. 😉 😉 😉 - after all he is a gentleman even with his mischief. yes her trust made her take the decision

Their lovely chasing and sweet talks were making it more horny and sensual.
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Sujal was smart enough to make the things slow and interesting for both. 😉 😉 😉 - their physical intimacy is totally to a different level

Sheena was so passionate as well and love the way u described their feelings with perfect and suitable song for the situation.
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 - thanks once again

Update soon darls.










Originally posted by: arpita25

Oh god it was too much hot and even in his rainy season I felt hot while reading this update. 😳 - hehehe thanks a lot for loving it so much

Sujal was so desperate to know and to access Sheena in his own way. 😉 - that he was

Sheena too wanted that but she was so shy but soon her shyness gone away when she became so bold all of a sudden.😛 - it happened due to full trust

The best part which I loved was Sujal's wits, he didn't want to force himself on Sheena and that's why he took it very slow and started only when she was fully ready.😊 - yes he was a gentleman in that

Perfect choice of song for the situation.
👏 - thanks





Originally posted by: varshita

Sooo hot. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - thanks alot

What else is needed to say? 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

I was speechless while reading the update. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hehehe well its perfectly understood

Sujal and Sheena were so passionate.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Sujal was playing with her and she was just getting weak all his attempts and soon she surrendered. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - well it wasn't easy at all and she had to give up

I will be happy to read next part soon.





Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

update was too hot actually.😳Dont know wat to comment.😆

U write really brilliantly.👏 - thanks a lot for loving it

Finally Sujal and Sheena became one and they cherished every moment of their intimacy.They both r too much in love and this was their right time to consummate their relationship. - yes it was and love is still not discovered

But wat went wrong in the end coz now they r no longer together. - perhaps because they r not in love



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Posted: 11 years ago


thanks a lot shreya
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Posted: 11 years ago


Burst of emotions pt3

It was six in the morning and Sheena's stomach crumbled. After their rather too much adventure she had almost forgotten how she hadn't eaten a morsel. It was going to be sunrise in a few minutes yet with all the curtains down it seemed like pitch dark which made both of them very lazy. She however couldn't resist the urge to grab a bite so she quietly snuggled out of his embrace and sat up.

The walk to the hall felt very cold even though it was a piping hot weather outside. Perhaps because the ac was on full speed and she was totally bare. She looked around for her dress but found his silk black shirt first so she quickly slipped it on and tiptoed towards the kitchen. The cold floor beneath her feet made her almost skip.

Sujal Garewal's kitchen was just like him; perfect. Everything was put in order and it was very clean and neat. Almost as if it had never been used. She admired everything about it and seeing the counter space brought up tons of fantasies within the deep pool of her imaginative mind. She reached towards the fridge and shuddered as the cold soft breeze touched her throughout the thin fabric.

It was mostly empty except for many beer bottles and fresh fruit. She couldn't see herself having another drop of a drink so she searched amongst the fruits and grabbed a box full of strawberries. It was her lucky day as she found a bottle of whipped cream to match with it. It was perfect.

Just nearby she sat herself on the cold stone counter and opened the box of strawberries and ate it as if she devoured the whole taste for the very first time. It was amazingly sweet and perfect for her hunger mode. She let out loud moans as if she received extreme orgasms which obviously she was unaware of. The experience doubled with whipped cream on top and as it reached her soft rosy lips she pressed onto it and her teeth bit the juice out of them for maximum enjoyment.

"So there you are." Sujal stood leaned against the entrance wall of the open kitchen. He was almost bare with only a thin silk sheet wrapped around his waist like a towel. "I was forced to think that you perhaps got too scared of me." He walked towards her on purpose showing off his sexy chest in order to tease her once more.

Of course she was no less and on purpose ate the strawberry in the exact same manner as before, showing how much she enjoyed herself. "I didn't know you were a

chocolate lover." She licked the chocolate sauce off her lips. "Want a taste?" She licked her enticing lips once again.

As soon as he reached her he pulled her tight against him by the waist and they played an ecstatic game with their eyes. "I'll tell you what I want to taste." He fiddled with the buttons of the shirt she wore with a devilish smile.

In normal circumstances Sheena would have opposed coyly but right then she was totally intoxicated on his sexual aroma. She was very curious as to what new he planned to play with her and she knew she was going to enjoy it the most.

As she became bare once more she developed goosebumps all over her body as the chill reached her spine. She knew he was up to some more mischief and soon let out a loud gasp as she felt something cold and fluffy on her bare bosom. It was followed by a soft bite on her tip which made her close her eyes. It felt amazing.

The whipped cream had been spread all over her chest and Sujal enjoyed its sweet taste along with her scrumptious body and in intervals he topped it with chocolate sauce and slithered his cold tongue upon it.

It was like being on high addiction because soon Sheena couldn't resist the taste for herself, so she dipped a handful of sauce upon his bare shoulder and devoured it with her mouth softly biting onto his manly skin. Then she poured more down his chest and licked it up and down with her tongue as the titillitaing taste couldn't be missed.

Two minutes later Sujal lay Sheena down onto the cold stone top and sprayed a good amount of cream around her navel and then shoveled through it with his hungry mouth. The luscious taste of the cream mixed in with the rich taste of her body totally put him on a high and he just couldn't stop himself. With haste he poured a lot of chocolate sauce upon her upper thigh and dug in straight away.

All the while Sheena ran her fingers through the bushel of his sexy hair as it was hard to bear the over steamed passion. She wanted him to go on and on as it was terribly enjoyable just like enjoying a roller coaster ride over and over again.

Soon she took the initiative and sprayed a whole of cream over her mounds once again and poured loads of sauce as if it was an invitation to treat himself.

Of course it was a delightful treat for him and jumped right on it. That time it was slightly aggressive than earlier because the heat had risen to the boiling point and it was impossible for it to go down anytime soon.

Her legs wrapped around his waist as he gorged onto the fluffy white mixed with dark chocolate. He had never thought that something so small as that could have turned out to be so creative and enjoyable. In intervals he kissed her lips along with the cream stuck onto his as it just enhanced the taste further.

The time went on yet they were also not aware of how long it had been as they were so engrossed in the highly energetic activity. They simply lay beside each other over the stone top almost knackered to bits. Their heartbeats were almost doubled and each breath came out and tired them. It was fun play yet very tiring, since they hadn't slept at all the whole night.

"You really surprise me a lot Miss Sheena Khanna." He moved a tress which covered her eye. "Where do you get so much enthusiasm?" He smiled.

She held his hand and rested on her cheek. "Let's just say I've got a lot of inspiration from my surroundings." She gave a quick peck on his lips. "And a personality like Mr Sujal Garewal is an inspiration itself."

Sujal loved the sound of that and he pulled her head in to engage in a short but sensuous kiss. They just couldn't get enough of each other and the intoxication was such that the more they had the more they craved for. "It's already morning but I don't want to let you go."

"Who says you have to?" She gave a mischievous smile.

"I don't know. Sochta hu kahi tum mujhse darr na jao." The same intense passion appeared in his eyes which had come during their chess game.

Yet Sheena was also game. "Shayad me darr na chahti hu."

It was enough to move along and he jumped off the counter and carried her off. She let out immense amounts of giggles as he carried her all the way back to the bedroom yet the destination that time wasn't the kingsized bed but the luxurious bathroom instead. It was a clever idea to wash off all the left over cream and chocolate although both of them had made sure not even a spot was left on either's body. However it was just an excuse to enjoy their everlasting game of passion in a different innovative way.

Five minutes later the steamy white musk mixed in with the sweet wet buds falling off both Sujal and Sheena's bare bodies. Pasted against the glass pane under the hot steamy water totally dismissed their idea of standing in a bathroom. The fresh smell of the scented candles engaged with the honeyed odor immersed from their heated bodies.

He kissed each and every drop from her back as she stood against the glass. As his soft lips touched her skin she closed her eyes and just immersed into the emotion of being loved. He worked his way down her spine and slowly pushed his hands through the glass in front and reached upon her soft chest and rubbed his fingers against them. He loved to play around with her erect tips and right then it was a different enjoyment altogether.

The touch was enticing and electrifying. It was hard for her to decipher whether she enjoyed the sweet pain or whether it was hard for her to bear it. Gradually her hands rested upon his which lay above her mounds. There was an urge to look into his eyes as he kissed her each and every part as if she wanted to prove that she was brave enough to handle anything.

With a swift she turned around and for a few seconds just stared through the mist into his dark eyes. Then her candy coated lips touched the bottom of his neck and chased the running water all the way down his collar bone and shoulder.

With haste he lifted her up against the glass and let her wrap her legs around his waist as he munched on her lips. His shaft pushed further in as the kiss became deeper.

That position was new for her yet she loved it and rubbed her toes up and down his rear end. Even under the sizzling water she felt cold. Perhaps it was the glass pane touching her bare back or just the mesmerizing effect he gave her right then. She just enjoyed it and could feel her climax nearing up.

Sujal thrushed further and harder non stop and both their breath was all over the place. The whole glass was steamed both by the hot water as well as their intense love making. His head rested in the crane of her neck as he pushed and she held on tight as if she was afraid to break entirely.

Finally the burst arrived and both rested against each other totally exhausted. Her hands were wrapped around his neck as his head rested upon her chest. It was the end and they knew they had to stop but it was almost impossible to let go.

Whenever he decided to move out she grabbed onto his neck and pulled him back onto her and when she decided that it was enough he simply didn't move an inch. The water ran and the steam increased yet it didn't make a difference to either of them. At one side the igneous water scorched their bodies and at the other side the cold glass pane gave chills down her spine. She wanted to remain in his arms for comfort.

With a lazy hand he reached over to the shower gel lying on the glass shelf nearby and dabbed some on his hand still with his head stuck amongst her hair. Then without notice he smeared it on her waist which developed goosebumps all over her body.

It sure surprised her but soon she fell in love with its sweet smell and wanted him to scatter more all over her body and give her a light massage.

The play continued for further ten more minutes where both took turns in caressing the gel over each other and then a fun filled water rinsing took over where they almost became teenagers.

Finally the beau exited the bathroom with his flame wrapped carefully into a snuggly towel. Of course he didn't want to let her go so he slipped her inside the bed covers of his royal bed and he joined her soon and even though it was a new day they felt super tired and wanted to do nothing but just go to sleep in each other's arms.

The excitement that had taken place that night and morning had simply been beyond his imagination. Sujal had never thought that he would finally find someone with whom he could think of spending the whole life sleeping in one bed. Then it struck hard to him again that it was true and he really had fallen for the beautiful creature lying beside him. It was confirmed that he was in love with Sheena. Yes it was love alright and he couldn't wait to share it with her and the whole world.

Yet when he turned he saw she was fast asleep and he didn't want to lose the opportunity of staring at her pretty face without any interference from her. She looked like a sweet baby wrapped up in her cuddlies. Something he had seen for the first time and right then he prayed that he could see it for the rest of his life.

He made several calculations in his mind and decided he would call his agent later and re schedule some things. He was satisfied and he kissed her forehead and closed his eyes holding her close enough to hear her soft breath.

Several hours later

A shot of rays sprang upon Sujal's face which made him moan and with irritation he opened his eyes. The curtains had been moved so he thought perhaps Sheena had done it on purpose. With a broad smile he lazily turned to the other side on the bed in order to embrace her yet was a bit disappointed to see that it was empty. He hadn't expected her to have gotten up that soon, or perhaps she had just woken up.

Given that thought he slowly got out of bed and walked towards the bathroom. "Sheena? Sheena?" He knocked playfully. "Ok I'm coming in sweety even if you don't want me to." He silently laughed and opened the door slowly and then just burst in but once again was left disappointed because it was empty. The only thing left in it was the remaining essence of the left over scented candles.

Then it struck him that perhaps she was in the kitchen preparing something special for him so he tiptoed over there through the hall. He knew the wooden floors would give him away yet he tried to be as silent as possible in order to surprise her.

As the kitchen neared up he initially hid behind the wall so that he wasn't caught. The stone wall froze his bare back yet he controlled the sentiment and sneaked over his shoulder yet he saw nothing. Perhaps like that morning she had devoured something from the fridge so with a cheeky grin he took one step after the other silently and landed all the way inside only to have his smile vanish immediately. She was no where to be found which desperately irked him and also put him in tension.

After a quick search around each corner of the flat he came back to his bedroom and took out his cell phone and dialed her number. It came not reachable. He cursed and then dialed again yet it came as not reachable. He cursed once more and threw the phone on the bed. Something was wrong. She couldn't have just left like that.

Sujal quickly changed into a pair of casuals and then grabbed his wallet and car keys as well as his phone and left his apartment. She would have been at her house so he would get his answers. He tried her cell once more yet it still came not reachable. It was frustrating and the journey towards her flat had become agonizing. All sorts of ideas and reasons emerged in his head yet he didn't want to believe anything until he found her face to face.

Just as the bend came leading towards her street he skid the car round which figured that he was on full speed. He screeched on the breaks and rushed towards the building and it didn't take much time since her flat was on the ground floor. He was about to ring the bell when his gaze fell onto a medium sized golden lock wrapped around a heavy weight chain. It was hung on the door which bemused him further. Her house was locked so then where was she?

Another alarm struck him when he saw a notice stuck on the door which clearly stated that the house was SOLD. It made no sense. How could she have done that to him? Had she never lived there in the first place and made a fool of him? How could the world have changed overnight?

He tried her cell once again but it came unreachable. He hated it. He hated everything related to her which included himself. She had deceived him and he had fallen for it.

The walk back towards the car felt burdened as he couldn't believe she just left him like that without a trace. He had thought they had shared so much together yet it felt just a joke. He felt used.

A passing by beggar requested for some change since he was really hungry. Sujal stopped and took out his wallet to relieve the poor soul but the horror wasn't over for him. His eyes stuck in one position as it was unbelievable. Twenty thousand rupees were missing from his wallet. It couldn't have been true. It just couldn't and he didn't want it to be true. However circumstances forced him to think that it was correct. Sheena had ran off with his money which meant she was only with him for his money? Then why had she taken only so little? Twenty thousand were just peanuts. Nothing made sense and he was highly disturbed. He just walked away without a glance at the beggar and just drove off yet he knew he would never get any peace anymore.

END OF FLASHBACK

The morning rays shot through the huge windows of the farmhouse and Sujal scrounged his eyes together as the light disturbed him. Last night had been too heavy, emotionally as well as physically. The fall had been bad but his heart break was far worse. His head felt as if a big rock sat on it and his whole body ached since he fell asleep in the shivering cold.

With support from the adjacent chairs he stood up and gently walked towards one of the bedrooms on the ground floor. Whatever had happened in the past couldn't come in the way of his present.

First of all he splashed a bucket full of cold water on his face as if he tried to wipe away the horrid memories yet it didn't work that well. Then a quick cold shower followed which gave him some relief from the hammering headache.

As he got dressed in front of the dressing mirror the flashes couldn't leave him at all and he dwelled in misery.

Khawaabon ka kab tak loo sahara, ab to tu aabhi jaa khuda ra

Meri yeh dono paagal aakhen, her pal maang tera nazaara

Samajhaao inko kistarha

Inpe mera bus nahi chalta haaa

The melody played in the background as each and every part of his memory ran through his head. In the end he became utterly enraged and just punched his hand into the mirror as if the flashes were a movie and he wanted to break the screen.

When she had left him it had torn him apart and for some instance he had stopped and thought that he would enquire about her further but then his male ego came in between which screamed out at him to forget about her.

Yet he couldn't. He couldn't forget about her at all and after one year when he saw her again at the socialite party everything was revived. All his pain and agony came back to him like a lightning flash. Of course he had planned a meeting with her sometime or the other and right than he felt he gained a trump card.

He had all her recent background information and knew exactly how he needed to teach her a lesson and hurt her just the way she had done to him. "What did I lack Sheena that you did this to me?" He asked his reflection. "I offered you the world yet I guess it just wasn't enough for you." He tied his handkerchief on his wounded hand. "You've hurt me bad Sheena but when I'm finished with you, your pain will be nothing against it. I'll make you beg me to take you back."

After one last look in the mirror he left the room and was ready to go back into his co operate world. The world, in which, he was the boss and Sheena was his puppet.

Edited by awaazilicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
☺️ lolz it took too much efforts to get back normal 🤪& comment 😛😆... whom to blame more Mr.Garewal or You 😆😆😆 anyways long time no see of Mr.Sujal 🤗 welcome back to him ☺️

Now dat flashback is over dont know shud be happy or sad 😆😆
coz was so loving the romantic Sujal ...but also wanted Fb to over soon & Sujal Sheena sort out the matter sooner 😊😊...Ending of FB also means more difficult days ahead for Sheena God bless her 😛😊 from fury of Mr.sujal 😛😛...

For sure, Sheena must have a very strong & valid reason to leave 😕... hope Sujal remains a little human & considerate & doesn't get too harsh in teaching her a lesson ...hope the heartbroken lover inside him gives a chance to Sheena to explain herself & understands the reason behind of her sudden vanishing 😕...

& yes our "Dil Chahta Hai" to have more frequent appearances of Mr.Garewal

Continue soon☺️ 😃😊
Edited by -purnima- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kuchh zyada hi romance ho raha hai!!!!!😳😳☺️😳☺️
Nice part Arwa.It was actaully really hot..😉

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