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Originally posted by: -purnima-
Awww long time no see of Sujal 😳 ...it feels so good to have him back!!! - thanks alot
Lolz these two had one hell of eventful journey to new York...felt bad for Sheena, poor girl had to go through a lot ...& i can bet days gonna get tougher for her ...wishing all the best to her... - yes it was long for sure full of a lot of activities
As for Sujal, gusse mein chuppa pyaar 😆 😆 ...wonder how long & what extent he will go to make Sheena pay for her deceive...& yes, get little easy on girl ...it was really mean of him being so inconsiderate... - hmmm lets see
Looking forward to see what Sujal has planned out for Sheena 😛 😆 - yes lets see
Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Interesting update and thanks a lot for updating it after a long time.😊 😊 😊
Just love the fire and ice effect of Sujal on Sheena.😉 😉 😉 I know that Sujal in not inhuman and he always know that only reverse theory works when it comes to Sheena.😆 😆 😆 - oh yes for sure they r a deadly combination
She was damn unwell and when he asked she even didn't reply in a good manner but Sujal himself knows the reason that he is the main reason behind all of her pains.😛 😛 😛 - yes he does and for now he is loving it
He still has some love for her which has turned in to a bit of compassion.😉 😉 😉 He know how to help her but he very well know how to don't let her forget her real place. - he can't lose control
I just don't know what's her reason to betray him but I am sure it would not have been as it Sujal thinks. Sujal is really her master sometimes when he orders in no nonsense tone all she has to do that she has to obey him any how. 😆 😆 😆 - yes for the time being he is the master
Being with Sujal on her side she still is unable to resist his aura which lead her to that dream which she didn't find unpleasant.😳 😳 😳 But we love such dreams so much for obvious reasons. 😳 😳 😳 - hehehe no matter how much both deny its still there
He never leaves a chance to irritate her.😕 😕 😕 Now he is again torturing her in his own way by giving her loads of work still knowing how her health is now.😔 😔 😔 - thats the whole plan of revenge
Finally they are at their destination.😊 😊 😊 Waiting for next...what happens. - yes let's see
Continue soon.
Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
nice update 😃
Beside your great writing skills, why do you always write about 'master-slave' type love story. Your hero is always a misogynist. I like your writings very much and the way you describe the situations between the lead characters. But you terribly lack great characters in your mind that is why they always behave in obnoxious way. Anyway this is my constructive criticism. Plz don't mind my words. best of luck for your works.
Originally posted by: RNpoint1857
Omg the story is going awesome! I didn't realize I am at the last update. N the moment I did, I was like, hell now I'll have to wait for an update!😭
You ended the last part at a perfect spot, making your readers to crave for more! Now please don't make us wait for long! 😳 I am enjoying the story thoroughly. 😳
Part 10
On the go
The whole journey had played a toll on Sheena and even after had eaten the meal, she still felt lethargic and simply wanted to spend the rest of the day sleeping. Only a few hours were left for sunset and she knew that she would have to be on the devil's beck and call.
The bed felt like royal and as she dug into the soft covers she got excited like a kid and messed around with her hands and feet as if to indulge into the luxury. It had been long since she had slept on a bed of the sort and she simply loved it.
Just when she had closed her eyes and had expected a few hours of peace, the intercom rang and she groaned. It was very tempting to have ignored it but it didn't stop. She covered her head with the pillow but still she could hear it and finally she had to surrender.
Sujal hated that she tried to ignore him. He hadn't brought her so that she could do that. Instead he had brought her to torment her to the point where she would be at his feet. When the call was answered he barked through. "Don't ever put me on hold. You're not allowed."
She mutely imitated him immaturely as he really got on her nerves. "What do you want?"
"What do you want Sir." His tone tried to scare her.
In return she made a face. "What do you want sir?"
"Much better." He cleared his throat. "Come in my room right now." And he dropped the phone. He wasn't surprised that the room was perfect because he was sure about her capabilities but somewhere he was crabbed because he couldn't get a chance to scold her.
Sheena growled and threw the phone. He was impossible and just wasn't going to let her be in peace. Then she gave a mocked laugh. Of course he wasn't since it was the biggest clause of the contract she had signed. Not to have kept her boss waiting, she left her room not bothered that she was dressed only in a house gown.
The room was still and silent. His strong posture stood leaned against the railing of the window and he simply waited and enjoyed the slow evening breeze. He perfectly knew how tired she must have been because he himself had witnessed her health earlier. Yet if he wanted her to beg to him then he had to be as mean as possible. Either she surrendered in his bed or she simply surrendered to be his slave.
When she saw his attractive back she paused. It had been long since she had paid proper attention towards him and the way he stood made each part of his back very strong. She almost felt like a teenager drooling over her first crush. What was about him that she always forgot how much she hated him?
Just then a gush of wind hit her face and her hair blew across her face which brought temporary darkness in front of her. It reminded her of her current status and the man who was responsible for it was in front. He was just Satan disguised as a human being.
Sujal hadn't turned around but he sensed that she had arrived. "I believe you're well settled in but don't make yourself very comfortable because you've got a long list of work to be done." Not one inch of his body moved as if he was glued in position. "You will find it on the table and I expect you to get on with it pronto."
Silently, she picked up the list and saw it was five pages long. Most of the things on it were totally useless and nothing to do with the business trip but who was she to complain. "You're doing this on purpose aren't you?" She couldn't help it and she had to confront him.
It was only then that he turned around towards her and once again stood still in his tracks. Her open hair flowed in the wind and her feminine curves jutted out as she stood with her arms folded across her chest. That strict look of hers had always made her look sensational and right then he felt hard and wanted to scoop her up and throw her on to the king size bed and make hard long love to her. Half of her bust had popped out of the low neckline of the gown which made it even better for him since he realized she was practically naked beneath.
That sultry look wasn't hidden from her. She had seen it before and had been fooled. The way his dark eyes turned dangerously smoky told her how much aroused he felt. Of course she hadn't done it on purpose but as she noticed her indecency she casually covered it up and then rested her arms across her chest to secure it.
"I can see you have finally taken my heed." He came closer passionately and moved a lone strand of hair from the side of her face. She twitched yet it made no difference to him as he was in a trance. His finger slowly lingered down the side of her cheek and his intense look undressed her in his mind.
She hadn't even given it another thought as she was spell bound. The moment his touch had come in contact with her skin she had forgotten the whole world. Nothing existed but him and she wanted to drop all her inhibitions and rush into his arms and wanted him to love her till exhaustion.
Gradually he bowed his head down and lightly rested his lips onto her bare neck and her body language told him she wanted it more than he did. He continued further as his hands slipped around her waist and he held her tight against him as he sucked onto the softness of her collarbone.
Quiet gasps left her mouth as she closed her eyes and let him do whatever he desired. She was under his spell and it was almost impossible to snap out. She wanted him closer.
It was as if he read her mind and dug in deeper and pulled her closer than before. He had her under his grip and he enjoyed nibbling whichever bare part he encountered around her neck. It had been a long time yet she still smelled the same as before. Her body was enticing and it was only his right to treasure it. "I knew you would come back to me." He spoke in between but didn't let go of his pleasurable act.
Alas the enchantment came to an end as if he had said the magical words. It brought her back to reality and she realized what she had almost let him do. Her body became stiff which relayed how she had stopped to respond to his foreplay.
Sujal paused as she moved back. It vexed him and he expected her to come back to the postion and let him finish.
"I believe I've got a long list of chores and I simply can't be irresponsible in finishing them." With that she skipped back to her room and shut the door tight behind her. It was then only that she broke down and dropped to the floor have had leaned against the door. Angry tears burst out as to why she had let him do that. Why hadn't she kept a control over her? She had made a fool of herself before but she hadn't planned to make one anymore. With aggressive desperation she wiped away her tears and then busily got dressed and worked on the list.
Even though the event hadn't turned the way Sujal had expected, he sure was proud of one thing. He still had a hold on her and with further more encounters as such, she would surrender no matter what. The busy New York life outside the window helped him to think in his clouded mind and how he had to clear the traffic soon or he would be stuck in the same place forever.
Almost three hours later, Sheena had successfully finished each and everything on the list and then busily scurried amongst her bag to change into for the evening business party. It was a formal invitation from the hotel to all the entrepreneurs who had arrived for the conference from around the world. It wasn't like she wanted to dress up, but she had to find something decent enough.
However much to her annoyance she was interrupted by the knock on her door. She just cursed under her breath because he was impossible and she literally wanted to strangle him.
Rather to her surprise, it wasn't him but his servant. A bell boy had arrived at her doorstep with a very pretty gift box in his hands. "Good evening madam." He interestingly looked polite. "Mr. Garewal has ordered this for you." He handed it over and then left.
The boss left her perplexed but she knew what was inside. He had always done that before any parties she had attended with him and right then she felt insulted to the core. He had done to demean her but she wasn't going to let him win. She threw the packed box onto the bed as didn't even feel the need to have opened it. Instead she fished around her wardrobe and took out a very simple and boring outfit. It was her payback.
One hour later
Apparently she had to make her own way downstairs as per the instructions she received from her monstrous boss. The jet leg had kicked in and she wasn't allowed to sleep earlier so she was very cranky yet she was left with less choice. Perhaps Sujal was used to the frequent time changes because of his travelling but she wasn't.
Down the lobby she searched for the dinning hall and all the time hoped she could just retire back to her room, give her tired feet a rest and enjoy a good night sleep. Yet it was impossible.
Meanwhile, inside the hotel restaurant it was a different atmosphere altogether. The gathering of business personels from around the world had filled the air with discussions, casual chats and over the top praises just to give their reputions an extra notch up towards success.
Long ago Sheena had enjoyed it but at that particular time she felt suffocated and cried out in her mind to be let free or she would choke. There wasn't one real person present to whom she could turn to for good company.
Sujal's eyes had scanned the hall repeatedly since he had arrived an hour ago and yet she was no where to be seen. If she had defied him then he was going to make it difficult for her the next day. It was her job and it wasn't going to take him much time to remind her once again.
With another sip of his drink his eyes moved around and stopped at a spot as his target was located. However he was disappointed that she had appeared rather inappropriately on purpose. How dare had she rejected his command? He dropped the glass rather agressivley onto the bar top and made his way towards her through the busseling crowd.
She was entirely unaware of his presence and simply looked bored. The conversations around her made her smirk here and then as she enjoyed their hypocrisies. It had become very stuffy in the hall and she begged to get out but she was stuck. Anytime soon her incorrigible dictator was going to pounce on her.
It was only a matter of thought before she felt her upperarm being nudged and grasped tight. "You deliberately disobeyed me which will have drastic consequences." Sujal dragged her to a near by corner where he made sure no one was around.
However she was amused, "I see my boss is angry. Then what do you suppose I do?" She gave a satisfactory smile. "Perhaps you should let me go back as I would rather not stay and embarrass you."
The hint in her tone gave away her intentions and Sujal knew she was capable of doing several things in order to get back at him. Yet he wasn't going to make it that easy for her. "Let me remind you that you're my personal assistant who is required to be on the go whenever I command it." He sighed. "Very well it hardly matters what trash you wear as it is this party is for the more classic and sophisticated culture." He came closer to a scary distance. "Your types only belong under the snub of our shoes that we can shove around however we like."
Sheena held herself strong even though the harsh insult tore her. It didn't matter anymore what he thought of her because his value in her life had disappeared. She was only there to do her job and she was hell bent on completing it on her terms and not his.
"Now make yourself a bit presentable before you actually do embarrass me." He ordered and then made sure she followed him around like a pet dog. "And let me remind you that you're here on my business. I better not find you getting busy in finding your customers." It was really the anger within him which made him say such bitter things. Once upon time he had high respect for her but after she left him he had become more stone hearted.
The rest of the evening carried on like a drag and Sheena felt wasted. Not only hadn't she eaten anything for sometime but also hadn't been able to sit and her soles had already given up on her and felt like heavy logs. On purpose Sujal had made her do things and she knew it was on purpose. She also was ready to play the game the hard way and wasn't going to give up.
Many clients had been met and Sujal had gained several business aspects and was very proud of it. Yet whenever his eyes fell on Sheena, his heart turned a bit melancholic and many times he had felt a tinge bit of sympathy but then he remembered how she had just used him for his money and had fled after her dirty business was complete.
"Sujal Garewal." A posh female voice sounded from behind where he stood.
As his eyes turned swiftly a smile took over his handsome face and his eyes reflected a genuine sparkle as if he was delighted. "Nikki Agarwal."
Originally posted by: awaazilicious
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