MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 - Page 77

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Posted: 13 years ago




here u go my comment on

PART 23

Mishty(murmured): impt? Mujse zyada?Ha inhe to duniya ki saari cheez mujse impt hi he..aur me bechari kisi aur se baat tak nhe kar sakti,huh!

😆😆😆


However,he has landed into great trouble...angry mishty is the only thing he is scared of.




😆Apke siwa mera na koi dost he aur na hi me kisi ko dekh sakti hu.
😕😕 cant she see anyone otherthan maan? she can see naa only she cant talk right???

With that she pushed him. Dev got angry and pushed her on one of the beds angrily.She got her head hit on the iron handle of the hospital bed and fell conscious.

oh my god dont tell me something happened there...
what a twist... u kept in suspense..

PRECAP : MAAN FINDS GEET!!!!!!! 😊

wow much waited... pls update fast... waiting for this...





for the pm and part...



😕

Edited by harshdb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates
dev !!!!😡
finally maan is gonna meet geet 😊
eagerly waiting for the next update pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 22 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

this dev is sooo sick ... i really wish maan to punish him ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Updates
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful brilliant updates
wow geet save maan
waiting next
thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great parts..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry for the delay. Did some Diwali shopping yestreday and had a "diwali fair" in my apartment 😳


in advance 😊

PART 24

Mishty:uskey baad mujhe kuch yaad nhe Maan..(sobbing)..i don't remember anything..plz Maan..don't hate me Maan..me seh nhe paungi..plz don't hate me!
Maan:its not u,i am the one to be hated!

He hugged her all the while protectively. She shed continuous tears on his chest while he was burning inside. He hated himself for being the brother of such a filth! He hated his existance. The name 'Khurana'on which h took pride felt like a burden to him. The fact that his own brother was the cause of all the sufferings to his love,boiled his blood.In no way he would spare him. He didn't even think once as he promised himself to get Dev punished. He didn't care about his family,dadi..no one. All that mattered to him was Mishty! He knew he will find her soon! Before that he need to meet Dev!
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He didn't say a word.She could read his mind,the conflict,the pain in his mind...her heart cried out with him..She didn't know, Dev was his brother and she never wanted him to be in pain.But destiny had its own plans..may be thats why of all the people,he is the only one who can see her and feel her..

After hours of silence,finally he spoke
Maan: we are leaving for Delhi,early in the morning.



Next day Adi came up with a shocking news!
Maan(on phone): kya? Howz that possible Adi?
Adi: sir i have checked thoroughly.You are the owner of Maansarovar!
Maan: but i never bought it. Aur dadima ne bhi kuch nhe bataya!
Adi: actually sir,ur parents had registered it in your name. According to the will,you are the owner of Maansarovar since the day you turned 18. Your parents died in the accident when they were returning after the registration.
Maan: anyway, i am coming to Delhi. I need to meet Dev!
Adi:but Dev sir to Mussorie me he.
Maan: wat?
Adi:he came there for a medical camp. He will be staying in the guest house of St.Valley hospital.
Maan:ok Adi. I will meet him.
Mishty saw extreme anger in his face.
Mishty: Maan ap itna gussa mat..

He shot an angry glare at her,'chalo mere sath'
Mishty quietly obeyed him. She had never seen this side of him,but she couldn't help..after all thats Maan Singh Khurana!


His blood boiled as he saw Dev descending the stairs.As he walked upto his brother to greet him, Maan slapped him tight.
Dev: bro,apko ye ho kya...
Before he could complete there came the second punch..and the third,fourth,fifth...





Eventually Mishty stopped him when she felt Dev was about to die!
Maan held his brother by his collar,
Maan: kyu kiya tumne meri mishty ke sath aisa,huh? Kya bigada tha usney tumhara?
Dev: bro ap ye kya keh rhe ho?
Maan(slapped him again): ek masum ladki ki zindagi tabah karne ke baad,uskey sapno ko kuchal dene ke baad,tumhari himat kaise hui yu anjaan bankar mere samne khade hone ki? Dev, how could you still call urself a doctor,or even a human being!
Dev:bro wat..
Maan: Geet Handa! The girl whose life U ruined! Do U even have an idea what she means to me!
Dev(dumbstruck): Geet!! How do u know her?
Maan: thats none of ur business. Ab batao us raat tumne Geet ke sath kya kiya?
Dev:par apko ye sab kaise pata?
Maan: mere sawaal ka jawab do Dev! (shoutd) jawab do!

Dev fell on his feet!
Dev: i am sorry bro! I am a sinner and my sins are gettin deeper with each passin day.I don't know how you met Geet,but i can guess how much you love her
from your words...trust me bro,i jst got carried away that day..i..i..
Maan:shut up Dev,where is Geet? What hapnd on that day..
Dev explained how he pushed Geet and hurt her...
Dev:i didn't mean to harm her. It was an accident. She fell unconscious. That brought me back to reality. Guilt overtook me.. The doctor in me couldn't leave her in that state.I took her to my room secretly and treated her.But the wound was too deep.There was too much blood loss.I knew i couldn't hide her in my room for long.Moreover my conscience urged me to give her all possible medical aid.I needed a secured place where people wont suspect me.
Maan: and U took her to MAANSAROVAR!
Dev: yes bro.I got the papers of the mansion from the archive.I had already planned to visit there.
Maan: so no one suspected U.
Dev:hmm.so far i am trying my best to save her! Still,guilt is eating me each and everyday. I am cursing that weak moment..
Maan:If only u had this 'so-called' conscience before you tried to harm her,she would have fulfilled her dreams and lived a normal life!
Dev: bro..i am really sorry for watever i had..
Maan: i don't have time for your drama. I need to find her...

He left.

Mishty: Maan are u sure i am alive yet?
Maan:ofcourse mishty,bas kuch hi pal aur tum hamesha ke liye meri ban jaogi!

Tears welled up her eyes. Maan patted her back.They went to Maansarovar in the boat.Mishty held his arms tighter as they approached the old mansion.This time he broke those barriers around the
fence.Finally Maan got into the house.Mishty accompanied him.She was a bit restless though.Maansarovar was a typical ancient Indian haweli.It lukd aborted and ruined.Still the mansion had the royal look with classy ancient arts on the ceiling and a grand chandlier reminding the past glory.It had a number of rooms.They didn't know where she was.Mishty had mixed feeling about meeting herself while Maan never felt excited this much as he was today.His eyes searched for the love of his life.You meet a person and then know his soul,and here he fell head over heels in love with Mishty who is the soul and now is goin to meet the person Geet! They reached near a small doorway which led to a flight of steps.As they reached upstairs they found a door which was a bit alike from others.Maan immediately understood where she should be,as it didn't luk old or unused like the others.He slowly opened the door.It lukd a princess' bedroom.The windows were opened letting in enough light and wind.There was a king size bed at the centre of the room.It was covered by a netted curtain. Inside that he saw some life-aid equipments,ecg monitor,oxygen cylinder. He moved closer.




Then he saw a slender body lying on the bed.His eyes moved up to meet hers,but they were closed as if she was in a beautiful dream! He then scanned her face. She looked pale,yet there could be nothing more pure,more beautiful more serene that he had ever seen.
'Gee..t',he gasped.
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PRECAP:Mishty has to leave Maan...forever???? 😒

HOPE U LIKE THIS.


I am still trying to manage my new schedules and provide you with frequent updates. Its not workin though but i will try to be more frequent...

Thank U sooo much for your support.


PS: Special thanks to my special friends who are still detailing each comment even if i am not replying. 😳 It motivates me a lot...

THANK U all... 🤗

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Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
madhu love u for the update dear
omg im famished with love of maan towards geet no doubt in that
yaar i love this ff
its stored in my heart like the other ff
thanx for update and pm dear
love❤️ u a big hug🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

madhu love u for the update dear
omg im famished with love of maan towards geet no doubt in that
yaar i love this ff
its stored in my heart like the other ff
thanx for update and pm dear
love❤️ u a big hug🤗

Thank U for the very first lovely comment...

Luv U too... 🤗🤗

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