MG[FF]Maan Proposes Geet Disposes[Thread1/Note149] - Page 37

Originally posted by: undisclosed

just read the prologue...and i'm all ready spellbound...bookmarking😉

Originally posted by: HayaShazal

thankx for the long update and its awesome👏 i loved it😳

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

Wow...6weeks of hardwork for both Maan n Geet...
Awesome update yaar...Maan's training was really pity-worthy...but our NSK is a Man nade up of his OWN WILL...
very true line in relation to a commando's life...
Nice part dear,update soon...Thnkx a lot n keep writing...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Awesome update! I can't even explain it! That
was amazing. They are opposites.

Originally posted by: sneha0504

awesome!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Eowyn

While reading through your update I was horrified by the tough training described

Enjoying Geet's antics...

Only while reading Shikha's comment did I realise that you were chalking out their contrast and similarities (sorry I am a little dumb at times😳)

Brilliant job in that respect Jazz...

Kudos for this update...👏

Originally posted by: sush1

interesting update
your story build up is intriguing 👏

What a elaborate description of commando training. Do you have first/second hand info of the same?? 😆

Maan from mars (rukha sukha) geet from venus ??
let us see the sparks fly.

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

awesome

Originally posted by: Devil-By-Birth

Saali ji here I comes... 😛
First... Saali ji I wish my JaaNu's sister was nice & caring like Geet... 🤣🤣 She dont let us Date freely... 😆😆😆
Now the update... my mid-night treat was dreamy... and Dreamy mean I was dreaming how they Both goena bear each other... Poles apart but I totally believe in opposite attracts thing.. (I studied it in school with magnets... 😆 😆 😆)
Jokes apart it was really a eye opener for the people who were taking it just another love story coz bringing two people together who are so much different in their believes is tough job and you are going to do it in your story... 👏
Eagerly waiting for Maaneet interactions before and after marriage... 😍😍😍
Update soon... 😃

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

wonderful...i read the epilogue too and I take great pleasure in telling you how much I admire your writing skills...

Thank you so much😳

You are one of the best writers - pls believe me when I say that...

😳😳

Your story is taking an amazing flow..really looking forward to reading so much more😃

Glad you liked!!