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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hiii jazz..
dil khush kar diya..
what an update...
pehle part mein hi sixer maar diya...loved it sweetie
keep writing
reva


Hey Reva!!

Glad to see you here🤗

Sixer..lolz...thanks a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

awesome start
cont soon
thanks for the pm


Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice update...continue soon...


Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

interesting update ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...


Originally posted by: hamini_yash

awwwsome update. Cant wait to read more.



Thank you so much guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Awesome update ... Sameera seems to be nice... But where is maan ...


Thank you :)

Maan...hmm...he is in a jungle right now😆 We will get to him...but first we make a stopover at Chandigarh to meet the Khuranas.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Jazzy, that was one sweet part...I loved the way Mohinder played pranks on his daughters, was so happy with his thoughts that girls are not a burden on parents. That part touched my heart being a girl myself. Parents' worries to find grooms for their daughter was portrayed so convincingly and of course I loved Geet's refusal to marry.

Each character of the story is depicted so nicely...the whole pink pillow thing had me laughing.

Can't wait for you to continue


Yup...he was a very jovial man...played and laughed with his daughters all the time.

Glad you noticed Geet's refusal to get married. Isn't that what most us do too. Promise our fathers that we will never leave them. I still keep telling that to my Dad, but mom keeps glaring at me😆😆

Ah! the fabled pink pillow!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

😭 \adorable papa-beti scenes...😭

I just dont know what to say jaz... As you said and as we have discussed many times, getting girls educated, treating them as princess and considering them as pride of family is something that God bestowed only on lucky few like us...😭 What all parents are to bear to bring us up... with relatives ready to bad mouth and discourage in every step...😭
Nice update dear🤗


Arggghh!! Yup...the idiotic relatives. And half the time its simply their jealousy that speaks😡

Thank you jee🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

absolutely loved the start...please PM me when you update now on...


Thank you...will do :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Aweee!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 2
The Pride of Savitri Swaroop Khurana


(1980...)
(Khurana Mansion...)

Savitri Swaroop Khurana was a proud woman. She knew how to keep her head high. She could care, adore, even love, provided the object of her affection met her standards. But once she decided to care, adore or love, she gave her hundred percent to those emotions. Daughter of an upper class landlord, she was raised to regard pride as the most valuable possesion a human could posses. But not everyone was worthy of cultivating pride. It came to people with illustrious lineage and exalted status in society. And this was the single factor that made her accept Chaudhary Ajaipal Singh Khurana as her husband.

Ajaipal Singh Khurana, the only son of a noble landlord, but orphaned at a very young age. His fields depressed him, reminded him of his loss and drove him away to Army. His relatives descended down on the properties left in their care like vultures and squuezed every benefit available from the Khurana name. Duty bound by the blood that ran in his veins, such degree disrespect could not be tolerated and he came back to Punjab to find lands left barren with neglect. A quiet man by nature, sheer will and determination became his tools to restore his family name.

His name caught the attention of Savitri's father, who came to be believe that the young turk was the perfect choice for his adored daughter. There was a promise of unequalled success in his calm manner and silent resolve. And Savitri Swaroop Dhanjal became Savitri Swaroop Khurana, wife of one of the most affluent landlords of Chandigarh.

Savitri, sitting opposite to her husband, looked over her brood pouring in as they came to settle at the dining table.

"Sat Sri Akal Darjee, Sat Sri Akal Chaiyyi* ji"

Nayantara, her eldest child. She was all Savitri has hoped she would be. Elegant stature, graceful manners and dignified bearings. And her husband was her equal in each of these virtues. In addition he also possesed an easy charm which endeared him to one and all.

"Paerri paono Darjee." Devender Rajgir bent down to take blessings of his father-in-law.

"Jiyunde raho*," Darjee blessed him in return.

"Chaiyyi ji," Dev spoke as he bend down to take her blessings, "is it something special today? Or do you look more beautiful with every passing day."

"Tussi mazak karna chadd do Dev ji."

"I only say the truth Chaiyyi ji," he chuckled taking his seat at the left of Darjee, with Nayantara taking the seat second seat to Darjee's right.

"Dev and change. That would be news," came a caustic voice.

Her third born, Sashi. A slight dissapointment as she possessed not pride but vanity. Savitri had sighed good riddance when she was married and no longer remained her responsibility. She was conveniently settled in her marriage with absence of a mother-in-law and a hen-pecked husband. Savitri sectrely wished that a strong mother-in-law was one presence that had graced Sashi's life. The girl needed to learn to control her tongue.

"Sashi...", Savitri began sternly...

"Sasha!! Call me Sasha, Mummyji. How many times I have told everyone of you not to call me with that old-fashioned name," she ended with a sulk.

Romesh quitely took his blessing from both his in-laws and was proceeding to sit next to Dev as Sasha let out in her shrill voice. "Not there Romeo!! Sit next to Darjee on the right..."

"Sashi, that seat does not belong to him. You very well know that." Darjee's voice shut her up instantly.

Frightened, but foolishly undeterred she mumbled, "But he is the son-in-law of the family too..."

Fearing her husband's anger Savitri hastened to difuse the tension that Sasha reveled in creating, "Romesh ji, please sit here," pointing towards her left, "I too should get a chance to serve my son-in-law." She gave a warning glance to Sasha to stay silent as Romesh meekly complied, embarrased at being the centre of the argument.

"Here comes rest of the kids." Nayantara quipped diverting the topic. The table was instantly surrounded with cheerful voices as the younger Khuranas poured in.

Sitting next to Sashi, Savitri encountered another dissappointment of her motherhood. Tisha. An air-headed beauty who sadly sought Sashi as her role model. Her choice of inspiration had long before made Savitri give up on her case.

Her twins, Yash and Amrit, were her pride and joy. It was the birth of the twins that had truly turned the fate of their family wealth, when Chaudhary Khurana's success translated to power in agricultral society and local political circles.

Yash Singh Khurana, sitting at her immdeiate right, was her favorite son. The boy stole her heart with his charms, smiles and open adoration he held for her. His wish was her command. For his happiness she always turned a blind eye to his spendthrift ways, partying and oft whispered rumors about girls. The boy did posses a heart of gold, a friend in need, and that made her believe that once the youth trancends to maturity he would sober up and be more responsible.

Amrit, though not a head turner, possessed a wise head on her being. The quite, silent, obedient daughter. She never questioned, asked or sought. And ideal daughter in Savitri's eyes.

Adored by her eldest brother to limits, Baby was yet to reach the same level of appreciation in her eyes as Nayantara and Amrit held. She was way too much spirited for Savitri's liking. Being docile was not an easy task for her. Spoiled by her eldest brother too much. He and his modern ideas. Even her name was of his choosing. Iqbal. It sounds more like a boy's name. But with his father's support, she had had least say in this matter.

Sitting next to javai jee, was her last born. Vikrant Singh Khurana. He resembled her in many ways. He carried pride as his right even though he was mere thirteen years of age. He expected the best to come his way. Just like Him. He aspired to be like Him too, in fact even more so. But he did not wish to do so out of inspiration. It was out of competition. Everything was a match he had to win against his eldest brother. Only he was still way behind in all respects to ever gain that win. But compete he would. And she gave in to shim and fancy of his. She could never refuse him his wishes.

For that matter Savitri Swaroop Khurana could never refuse any son for her's anything. Sons were the pride of any family. They took the family name forward. They brought society's respect for a woman who has borne them. With three sons of her own, her five daughters were never questioned at all.

This is how Savitri Swaroop Khurana saw and preceived her life and her children. Nothing could change her opinion about it. Nobody could dare challenge her opions without it.

Except him. Maan Singh Khurana.

Her second-born but eldest son. The fact that he was her eldest son always diffused the anger that would rise at his more than obvious attempts to rebel against her dictates. But the emotion remainded simpering beneath all the maternal love she had for him. Often the anger turned to dissappointment and resentment, wishing for him to be a lesser man than he was. We have name, fame, wealth. It warrants a certain amount of attention. It's his father fault to allow independent thinking in him. It was my mistake to let the father-son indulge in all these waste notions of theirs. Logic!! Reasoning!! Education!! Shunning the society norms we live in. They lived in a bubble of their own principles refusing to budge even an inch in any direction.
She looked at the empty seat next to her husband's. The seat would remain empty for a long time. I should never have let him go to that military school when he was six. Mere munde nu badalta khotteyan ne. She had such hopes from this child of her's. The scion of the Khurana clan. The one who would have ruled like a prince, commanding all the respect that the family name brought with it. Yet he chose the route of the pauper. Serving under others in name of patriotism. The fact that it was the noblest of all proffessions, a devotion, a dedication was lost on Savitri's conscience. All she could see that her eldest son was not with her. He would rather not let her chalk out his life for him, be the much sought after Chaudhary Maan Singh Khurana, but he coveted an independent existence as Capt. Maan Singh Khurana.

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*Chaiyyji - means mother in Punjabi
*Jiyunde raho - jeete raho in Punjabi.

Note - Wherever the word him is in italics it referred to Maan.
And I will be using matching colors for every husband-wife pair, except Sasha. I doubt if Romeo would ever get to say anything😆

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Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow what an update?
I feel like saying online wah wah.
Keep updating
oh i just realised I am 1st to comment. yippie😃
Edited by hamini_yash - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
nice intro of khurana family

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