MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 20

Originally posted by: janu1610

Jazz finally u removed his jacket.Dushman humari.😉
well loved the way he saved her nd the way she felt herself secure in his arms, ready to give up herself for him. i loved it when she described the inner most feeling to jay nd he listened it calmly nd approached her in the Rain. you know i am imagining his smirk. . i think now this rain 'd be there to calm down our desires. i loved it when he claim her his nd jay was their all burnt ,fuming in anger.
nice part dear . nd take care of urself . take medicine properly nd don't dare to come OL till u feel alright.okies.

take care.
love n luck
ritu

ure awesome replies always provide energy to me rituthanks a lot..glad u liked it

Originally posted by: priya_1234

I loved the update. awesomly romantic,... :):):) Great job hun. I have made my sissies read it too. We are quite a suckers for romantic stuff. 😆😆😆

Kash show mai vi ye sab hota.i want jeh to realise he was wrong.
Very nice update dear.do continue soon.

Originally posted by: luvd

Kash show mai vi ye sab hota.i want jeh to realise he was wrong.
Very nice update dear.do continue soon.

😊thanks dear

woh very nyc n romantic update... waiting 4 d next part... dere marriage cant wait cont soon...

thnx for d pm

jazz...too good...just loved it..fab...waiting for abhiya marriage..and rain sequence...my dream...plz continue soon..eagerly waiting for next update...thanks for pm...