MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

This was truly romantic part. Now waiting for the marriage. I hope Jai doesn't do anything stupid now. Pia and Jais encounter was really nice to read. Where Jai couldn't explain himself to her.

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nizza

@lakshyasss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: anuraag111
it was a very nice part
u described pia'a emotions very nicely
update super soon can't wait for it

😊thanks ..a lot..😃

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
woh very nyc n romantic update... waiting 4 d next part... dere marriage cant wait cont soon...

😉thanks akshi...its good u liked it..and i was able to stand on ure expectations😆

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
thnx for d pm
gr8t 👏👏

😊glad u liked it

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
It was great Jazz... 👏 👏 i loved Jeh - Piya convo... and how you explained Piya's emotions.. and lolz... white top and rain... inspired by Hema di kya? 😆 Send it to her...khush ho jayegi 😆

😭tanzie...hema dii ko pm bheja hai...pichlii baar she had liked it and commented too...😃and i hope this time i do get the same

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nizza

@lakshyasss

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: peehu24
jazz...too good...just loved it..fab...waiting for abhiya marriage..and rain sequence...my dream...plz continue soon..eagerly waiting for next update...thanks for pm...

😊thanks peehu..will update soon

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

wow, very nice yaar, its amazing

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

outstanding update
truly loved it
abhiya romance was superb
thanks for pm and please continue

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Awesome update! I really liked how Piya described what Abhay means to her when she was conversing with Jeh! It was so sweet yet meaningful! And Abhiya romance in the rain was simply beautiful! 😳 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊