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maghalakshmi

@maghalakshmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

nice one... awesome👏

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

hi dear

lovely os ((and there was some1 for me))👍🏼

i loved the end, i found it soothing😃

i didnt know u have other os's, will definately read them soon

thanks for the pm

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Girl! That is some amazing writing! I am not even kidding. I totally loved this second part! This is how I would have wanted it to be in the show but I am not complaining. Love how you add those tiny little details about the surroundings. Makes it SO easy to picturise everything. Fab work hon. Update soon =)

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

loved the babuji moment. really heart warming.

xxx

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Wow.. Wonderful.. Loved it.. 😍

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

U deserve to be punished very badly...

how long have we known each other ????/// And when do you send me the PM for the OS...

u srsly are paagal ladki...

But what to do you've written the OSs so fably...I cant punish you or get angry at you...

I just loved them alll...

Dont worry : I loved the way you expressed ArHi's emotions...for a moment I felt like I was watching those epis all over again...

Sometimes : Haiii...I wish they actually do make an epi over this OS of yours...It sounds quiet happenable...And I loved the walking marathon of theirs...And Arnav almost got her to play the rapid fire...which I loved tooo...

Locked for 1 day : OH man...This one was hillarious beyond belief...when you started the whole knocking saga I thought we were in for some drama...Lekin turned out the thief is a bit inspired by our KKG madam...So he ended up smuggling the food alone...🤣

And there was some1 for me : This OS was way tooo fab...i loved the way you described their hug...And the situation you built was great...Awww ASR srsly is turning out way more caring than what he was...Like in yes epi that whole chandi ka sikha 😆And the way he sneaks to take care of her...😳😳I lovved this OS...

Conclusion : Agli baar you better send me the PM on time...varna😡😡

And man...you are an amazing writer...and i love ur OS...

And thanx for making me read and fall in ❤️ with ArHi again...

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