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Posted: 13 years ago
Kitna khoobsurat likhti ho tum meri jaan? 😍
First off... the song you dedicated to this OS - Marvellous! ⭐️
It was so romantic! ❤️
Its so sweet and beautiful how there is is always some distance between them! 😳 I mean even in the show, when he sat next to her and comforted her, he sat just one chair away from her! And here too you highlighted that!!!
It feels so pure and divine!
Because there is so much emotional connection, comfort level, love, care, concern... yet the physical gestures are next to nothing! And even then, it oozes romance and creates magic. It's so beautiful!!!
I absolutely loved the ending of your story! ❤️
Bauji - the one man whose senses are the strongest, has gauged their feelings, and gives his daughter's hand to Arnav! Bauji, the one who is the all knowing person, understands that this is the man who will perhaps be harsh with his words (which he no longer is) but will forever protect his daughter.
Simply fab Morphee! Loved this one!! ⭐️❤️
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Edited by mohini4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
murphooo 🤗

dont know how but i somehow missed ur work. tnx heaps for da pm cuz now im gonna ready everything!! loved 'unknown feelings', gonna complete da rest soon!

omg ur a fabulous writer sweetheart! keep it up angel mwaaah
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Posted: 13 years ago

Woo hoo moi phirshttt... 😃

Just finished commenting on pg 28 😳
ab going and reading this one
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Morpheus, WOW ⭐️❤️
The first para sounded so poetic. I visualized the whole scene and it was so pretty. Your writing morphi, its so magical! 😍
And just on that note, quite disliked the second paragraph! 😆😲 Just kidding morphi!!! Arnav should take care of himself and eat properly no? 😛 even if it's for his sister's sake! 😳 Aww poor Arnav! Kitna kaam karta hai na bechara! 🤔 I loved how the raindrops soothed him. And he took a drive for some more peace of mind. 🤗
WOW the next part ... sooo romantic. ❤️ The emotions in Arnav's heart when he sees her letting herself free in the rain, engrossed in herself, without worries of the world and fears of her surroundings... soo mesmerizing. 😍😍😍
His protectiveness!!! Too much!!! 🤢 romantic scene main bechari ko daat diya 😆
But the ending... Magical... 😍
They felt like two carefree little kids letting go of all the world's burdens and cherishing this beautiful moment, which I bet they will remember forever in their hearts. ❤️❤️
The SONG: PERFECT! 👍🏼
The VIDEO: 110/10! 👏
This was just a complete package! ⭐️
I feel so dreamy right now!!😍
P.S. Such are the ways of the world na... Arnav as a person is instinctively so protective of his dear ones, but at the same token, so poor at taking care of himself! 😒 So bittersweet! 😳
Edited by mohini4u - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Loved this os . Fantastic , Absoutely love the ending and I really like your take on Khushi's thoughts on marriage to Shyam . 👍🏼

Love the rain , setting magical,especially Arnav's reaction when he sees Khushi standing in the rain 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
really lovley setting at atmosphere.
xxx
Posted: 13 years ago
Just read part two of 'And there was someone for me' OMG I loved it!!! Gosh you're an awesome writer!! Loved how u described the weather and then the last part with Bauji i just loved it!!! Thanks a ton for the PM sweetie🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow awesome sancho...

really cute yaar😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow.. Loved the OS... 😍
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing OS Sancho...loved it❤️
Arnav in so caring, he asked so many questions when he saw Khushi...😳
i loved how u described everything...👍🏼
outstanding work...keep it up...!!👏

and enjoy the rain!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
sanchi mucchi 😲

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yur os is so romntic 😍

thnk u fr wrting mre nd mre

I jst lve tht khushi fnally drgged him out in th rain ❤️

its a lvely OS!

u r an amzing wrter! so talnted⭐️

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