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..Anj..

@..Anj..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

nice one sancho
but still u could have written a bit more😉

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

lovely os murphoo!

rain rain dont go away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now im dying to see an arhi rain scene again... 😍

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Nabila

@bila_a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

wow, that was really good, i loved it

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Hey Sanchari.

I've just caught up with what I had missed out.

Fab work sugar, as always.

The last one was really great to read.

I loved the way you set the mood.

Thanks for the PMs hun, and I look forward to reading your next one!!

😊

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Loved it. Can just imagine it playing out. So beautifully written. On phone so couldn't access the song. Thanks for the pm.

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Omg Murphy!! Tht wuz amazing!! Great work hun :)

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

that was beautiful darling...i just loved it so much...so romantic...and you r always very good...😃

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Hey Sanchu...

That was cute n romantic...Loved it!

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

so sweet as ususl! luvd d rain segment!

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

Love u Sancho bacha...

this OS made my great day even greater...I love rains...and this one made me love it even more...

From the beginning...Khsuhi's feelings abt her Buaji forcing her to marry Shyam was sooo real...I actually feel bad for KKG even more now...

Then the way you desribed the falling of the 1st few drops...I wish I could get more rain in delhi...Its winter coming here...

ASRs love for his sis was written aptly ...His desire to finally take a break from his schedule made me sooo happy...Driving in the rain...Wowww tat is truly amazing...

Finally...the way they meet...The way he was stunner by her...by her serene beauty was amazing...i loved tht description os yours...

And then the ending...I loved the authority and the possesiveness with which she pulled him in rain...And the song you added here...was amazing tooo...

Loved it Sancho...🤗

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