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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz join me in whishing cute-aly a very happy birthday

Dreams
part 53


A tear escaped his eyes when he slowly opened his eyes coming back to harsh reality watching their little love. He just didn't realized when he slipped into deep sleep by rocking him.. telling him how his mom kept his promise but now even sleep wasn't with Him. All will come back to him only if His Princess is back...His DREAM...!!!!!!!!he smiled

The sun had started rising slowly over the horizon
It was silently blessing him with its presence
The dark clouds were slowly drifting away from him
Taking away his suffering day after day.

She walks into his class room as a breath of fresh air
Her mere presence fills his life with enthusiasm
His heart starts its pumping by just looking at her
Her stolen glance at him awakens him from within
Her shy smile takes his breath away
Her musical voice sends shivers down his spine
Her touch soothes each and every cell is his body
He feels like he is in heaven, a blissful heaven.

He had started dreaming..dreaming again
The possibility of having her in his life
The possibility of her falling for him
His life is a mere instrument of her hands
Dancing to the tunes of the music she creates
He is just a follower and she his lead
He bows down at her even before the words leave her lips

She was all that they needed, the baby and him
She was all that they wanted
She was their life and their soul
She was the essence of their being
She was the princess, the princess of his dreams.

BY

RACHNA

Next day Geet was in college earlier than usual. She probably couldn't even sleep the whole night. All she could think was Maan. His face..his eyes..she turned around on her bed holding the pillow.
Brij was so worried seeing her restless like this. He went to rano's room & sat beside her.
Rano slowly caressed his head
brij '
mama yeh sab kya hogaya humri behen ke saat
she looked happy in the college yesterday..
he sighed
lekin kal raath phir se she was restless..he said as he buried his head in her lap
rano '
ussen thoda time dedo.
Wo bhi ek ma..hain..mamta ki bechani tho rehge na
tears flooded both their eyes


Geet restlessly paced near the gate waiting for Maan. It was just 8.30am
every passing min was getting impossible to wait. She knotted her duppata & kept looking at the main gate. Piya walked in around 9.
piya '
yaar it is 9; tu yanha kya kar rahi hain
Geet '
kuch nahi
piya ' tho class chal na, we r already kate
Geet ' mujhe kanhi nahi jana
she twisted her lips & went to the garden
piya '
kya huwen tujhe
Geet ' kaha na kuch nahi.. she was furious.
Piya was taken a back. Never had she seen her raising her voice. She thought it was better to leave her alone. Geet had no idea why she felt so irritable or should muskan say she didn't even know she was actually raising her voice. Even the spot where they sat didn't seem to please her. She was getting wild & annoyed.

When he didn't come to college at all. She got mad & went back home.. after waiting their until 8pm. It was dark as the car drew through the lanes..lit with the street lights.
He doesn't even care abt me..main hi pura pura din unka wait kar rahi thi
ek call nahi kar sakten the
she just walked straight to her room skipping dinner.
Rano & brij were taken a back.
When the servant went to her room with dinner. She actually yelled at her.
The whole palace has never heard talk so loud.
Brij marched straight to her room '
Geet yah sab kya hain. Tum aapni tehzeeb tak bhol gayeen ho
Geet didn't say anything..just kept her head down. Her eyes where spitting fire..but still the fear of her veerji ..didn't let her cross her limits in anger. She clenched her fist & stood quietly.
Rano came in & calmed brij. they let her alone. she just changed & crashed on the bed.


Geet rolled restlessly on her bed...her breast kept lactating.. she took a shower at that hr & felt horrible with was is happening to her.
She closed her eyes..
kanhi unhe kuch..nahi nahi
she quickly went to the temple in the palace & prayed to her babaji. She spend the whole night sitting infront of the babaji's photo & praying. Why was it so impt to know how he was. Did he even care abt her..she couldn't even think otherwise. She felt so hopelessly longing for him.


She reached the college yet again early to the college. Maan came late..9.30am.
Geet rushed to him.. & held is collar..
yeh koi time hain college aane ka?
Her eyes were agonized & she looked really annoyed. He had never seen her getting angry like this. She shook him
where were u yesterday
can't u call & let me know
I was so
..she paused..looking at his eyes that looked like they haven't slept the whole night.
His heart looked helplessly at her. Pleading for something she couldn't make out. She searched his eyes.
Why r looking so tensed she asked immediately forgetting all her anger
Maan straighten himself & cleared his throat '
why were u looking for me
he directed the question back to her trying to hide the turmoil that played with in him.


She was caught off guard .. she fumbled & looked down immediately then sternly answered
i had to work on the project thats why.
He didn't even hear her ..when he heard his phone ring. He immediately answered the call & caressed his temple. He yelled over the phone..
wat the hell
& smashed the phone on the ground
Geet looked at him in shock. She picked up the phone from the garden & looked at him

her eyes searched his eyes..that looked so tensed
Maan
she shook him
he couldn't look at her
Maan aap kuch bolten kyun nahi?
Wat is bothering u so much?
Why can't u tell me..she blasted him.
Why r u doing this to me.. why r u behaving like this with me
why r u being so indifferent.


Geet meeting the baby

-PREV PART 52 NEXT PART 54-
Thanks a lot for all the support & love
plz..plz.. comment & like
muskan waiting
love u lots
uuma


Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved how Geet questioned Maan... like she owned him...

Edited by febinyusuff - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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She is Restless all the night Just because of HIMeven raised her Voice which she never did BeforeBigad gai ha Bachi MAAN k sath reh reh keGussa on her small cute NoseShe was angry on him bcz he didn't inform her abt his absence Di don't tell me k BABY ko kuch ho gaya hai
thats y he wasn't at college???




Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
superb dream maan ka kaash sach ho
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful...hope the baby si fine...i am gettin tension
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh awsum.is baby sick. I think so.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update hope nothing happened to baby precap is very intresting geet meeting baby continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ossum
now we can see mother and baby love didi
pls update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love u musky.. wonderful update!
am waiting for speechless to express feelings for this update...
as am not a good commentor!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
your updates are becoming shorter day by day 😒😭 pls post the next part soon

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