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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm exited ... to know how will she feel after meeting her baby ... uuufff... plz update soon ... plz plz
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Posted: 13 years ago

plz join me in whishing cute-aly a very happy birthday

Dreams
part 54

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Why can't u tell me

..she blasted him.

Why r u doing this to me.. why r u behaving like this with me
why r u being so indifferent
.
He looked into her eyes puzzled. He couldn't take her blaming anymore. He just held her hand & walked her to the cab. She simply followed. The moment they reached home..maan fished his pocket for the spare key
she could hear a baby cry..her heart raised helplessly.
Maan opened the door soon Geet ran into the room.. her breast was all wet & milk was just dripping hearing the voice of teh little one. she pulled her duppat to cover herself.


She felt heavy.. her chest ached. She began to pant. She rushed in with Maan. Baby was crying continuously. Her heart cried out just looking at the little life..crying.. tiny nose whole red in pain..cheeks drenched in tears...it was instantnesous for her to almost snatch the baby from nanny's arms. She pressed her against her chest.. it soothed her more than the little life. She felt a instant warmth run through her.

Maan just stood quiet watching her like he didn't have to do anything more..he couldn't have helped better. She rocked the baby..she patted him..it all came so naturally to her.. she walked around..holding him in her arm.
The baby cried..like he was complaining..
nahi..baba...
nahi roten..
mera sona..mera baby

she kissed his shoulder softly.. he cried ...kept crying.. she couldn't take it any more...she cried & looked angrily at Maan
yeh kyun ro raha hain
why is he crying
where is baby's parents...
why is he with nanny
.
She held him close to her chest. Her heart throbbed harder..aching to feed him. She felt her blood oozing out of her ...it pricked. ..it hurt..it was awfully painful
maans heart bleed to answer her question.
Maan where his parents?
He sadly accepted...
yanhi tho hain
she looked at him in shock. Her heart stopped..its his baby.
Yah aapka baby hain
her eyes burned ..heart fighting with the emotional battle...her unknown feeling for him & this pain in her whole heart to hold this cute little angel close to her. There are times when only a mother could understand her baby.. can understand his tears..can sooth his pain..this was one of it.


But her inner ache of betrayal. She looked disappointed.. lost..lost to her heart..maan cheated on her..he lied to her..he was married to someone else. He was never hers.. then why his eyes...even they lied to her. She looked away in pain ..her only love..her first love...never was hers.. her dream was just a dream..she was wrong he was never hers.. her eyes flooded non stop..crying ..crying loud with the baby.. hiding her cry behind the baby's.
Iski mama kanha hain
Maan went mum
before the nanny could say something. Maan asked her to leave. Felt so helpless since two days..when daadi's health went down..so anni had to rush to Delhi with her. He was left alone with the little one. He had arranged for the nanny. But he couldn't have just left the baby with nanny. He had come to college only to tell Geet every thing but..seeing her angry, disappointed he didn't know wat to say now. Her eyes looked at him like he cheated her. Yes he did..he hid the truth all the while from her.. but how could he tell ...


baby cried & cried...& dossed off in her arms tired. Holding her duppata tightly. Like he knew it was his mom. Off course he knew.. her smell..her voice..those heart beat..every thing..he had been part of for months. Baby's lips were all dry..& cracking..she softly caressed ..in pain. Every tinge of the baby's discomfort tore her heart apart. The pain of her heart being cheated didn't even seem to be there now.. all she could see the little one in grief.

Maan isken lips kyun dry ho rahen hain
he has not had anything since morning & upper se ro bhi raha hain
her brows flinched in pain ..kyun?
I will set his crib
..he didn't know wat to answer...how he has managed the premature baby last 2months. He just wanted her to hold him..shower him with all her warmth. Only she could cocoon the baby..only she could take away his insecurities. He looked dearly at the angel.. how he was clinging to her.. his little fingers gripping her..not letting her go.. like he too feared she won't come again for him.

she shifted the baby a bit & he started to cry again. Maan came running back.
Geet guiltily looked at him.
Wo mujhe baby ko teehk se handle nahi karna aata
Maan felt like crying.. he turned his back to her.. hiding his tears.. I will get his feeding bottle. ..how unfortunate things have been to the little one..inspite of being in his mothers arm.. he had to crave for milk..


Geet couldn't take it anymore.. baby crying ..in her arms.. & his lips searching for milk.. licking the wetness on her dress. The pressure was on her breasts which were filling up rapidly. She needed him to release the pressure as much as he needed her..it was like symbiosis at its very best.

She closed her eyes & lifted her dress & placed him slowly close to the base of her curves to feed him. She was feeling so nervous thinking her nipples looked enormous infront of his tiny rosy lips.. she didn't even have to try to get his tiny mouth near..he automatically sort for it. When his little lips softly settled..she felt all her restlessness vanish in that moment..her heart suddenly felt light. He was rapidly sucking.. like he was hungry.. craving.. his little hand rested on her curve & the other one went around..though could barely reach her back.. like.. holding her close.. like he was making sure she never left him.

-PREV PART 53 NEXT PART 55-


Thanks a lot for all the support & love


plz..plz.. comment & like
muskan waiting
love u lots
uuma


Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme updates... :) waitng for next... :)

just noticed you have updated next... beautifully expressed... :) loved it... 😊
Edited by prajee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Di em speechless right nowSachi wala speechlessi have no words to describe my feelingsem feeling emotional, sad , happy all mixed

Maan's helplessness, Geet' Pain and Baby's restlessness u wroteall in the bestest way


Today u gave us Triple Treat Thanku so much MUSKAN DI

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzzy


ohh hello...sab faint ho jayenge toh update kaun padhega ???
chalo lets start wid me...i fainted first ...so i will revive 1st...hehe

WAITING DI...!!!



I am trying to revive... woh kya hai na... aaj 2 updates of dream and maaneet in maha epi have totally made me crazy... isiliye hosh mein aane ke liye thoda waqt lagega
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Posted: 13 years ago

Just read parts 52 ,53 and 54

Loved them totally
Maan tell everything about his day with Geet to their little baby was so sweet
And also telling baby that his Mumma is a little bit mischevious also was so cute
and that dream of Maan's actually mere rongte khade ho gayee the reading it
It was just Awsome Muski Di
And in the next part Geet's restlessness on not seeing Maan at college and Her restlessness at night shows how she couldn't sleep peacefully when her little one was not well as if she could feel the baby craving for her
The way Geet confronts Maan the following day was awesome
I just hope the baby is fine and nothing much serious
Oh gr8 Di u updated part 54 also
I just can't explain how happy I am now Muski Di
You just made my day today
Baby Aur Mamma ko finally miladiya
Oh thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u sooo much Di
My heart is at peace now since baby is in his Mumma's arms now
And oh gr8 she did feed him
Now Di let Geet forget about Maan not telling her the truth and just crave for Baby's one glance
All the updates were just fabulous and beautifully potrayed.
Continue soon
Edited by krndr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
today toh it was awesome

first the maha episode which was mindblowing

n now three back 2 back to back updates...

n the last update was so much like beautiful...geet breastfed her baby,,,,,,,,,,,,i am loivng this👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
muskaan i cried thats all i can say after readiing it
my hand r trembling to type the message also
very touching.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Restlessness
Restlessness-heard of this emotion, but haven't felt it more than now;
What are you doing to me, changing me how?
I don't know you-you are a stranger,
Yet without you, why do I feel like a lone ranger?
This feelings unfelt, these wmotions unknown, this yearning so new,
How did you enter my world that spanned just a few?
Your name-thats all that I know about you,
But, why does it all seem so immaterial?
Like, I know you since ages...
Like this heart knows knows your each beat...
Like this soul has your imprints,
Like this being is JUST yours...
I am not me, I am someone else,
Still restless, hours on you I dwell!
I am not me, why are you in my dreams,
I am still restless, why are you in my prayers?
Sheltered, protected, cared for,that is how I have been,
But, why does your pain seems much more my own,
Your eyes-they speak to me in their own tone!
Each moment, each day away from you leaves me restless,
And your proximity leaves me utterly breathless😳
Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭 Such an emotional update... Me in no state of commenting...!!!!

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