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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Awesome update...loved the mother and son bonding...geet should

come to know that the child is hers and maans..

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nehaagarwalv

@nehaagarwalv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Loved ur update. The bond between baby and Geet just gr8888 😊

Words beautifully used to express the relation/bond between the mother and child👏 loved it was awesomee.

Finally i think she would kind of make out that this is her son. Probably now Maan would tell her who she is and in what circumstances they got married slowly. Lets see how she reacts once she knows about MSK. Before she could not do anything because of circumstances,Now lets see how she reacts since now she is not in some unknown place 👏 She now is hell gonna be angry on MSK who dared to rape her😲 or ... Lets see what u have in store for us 😊 Waiting for ur next update. Make it sooon

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Restlesness...

I am restless, my soul is parched,

My arms ache to feel you close,

My eyes crave to stare at yo all day long,

But, for you and our baby I have to be strong!

Its all my fault, I am to blame,

So, this restlesness makes its claim...

You are so close, yet so far,

All the joy, all happiness seems marred!

the baby is here, our dream fulfilled,

yet for his mother, its eyes keep getting filled,

The little life craves for you so bad,

i feel like dying for making him sad!

The love he needs the most has been denied,

The warmth he deserves the most has been snatched,

I am sorry, how should I apologise?

Just like you, the baby is a blessing in disguise...

He is my heart, the reason for my existence,

If not for him, there wasn't any chance of sustenance!

He laughs with me, with me he cries,

With you mention he jumps and smiles!

In front of my eyes you now exist,

Within you is my life's gist,

You don't know me, but your eyes do recognise,

Deep down your heart's wish is revealed through your eyes.

Its tough to stay away, even tougher for our child,

the guilt, the pain makes me go wild!

This pain, this guilt, this longing is driving me to an abyss,

All I can feel now is extreme RESTLESNESS...

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

awesome updts
geet baby bonding was so natural
aww poor baby loved each of his gesture
poor geet was so hurt knowing maan was married
loved angry geet too
maan was a lot silent
congos 4 new thrd
cont soon

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

amazin part..vry touchin..luvd d moment btw geet & d baby..n i so pity maan's helplesnes..hope evrythn gets fyn soon..

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aksn

@aksn

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Last part was awesome. Baby need her. Are u going update more parts? I want to see Maan reaction.

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

love you dear muhhha thnx yr akhir mu$ki ny baby ko a ki mama ny milva diya loved all three part$ fabulous update
awesome superb update cont soon

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

all three parts are awesome. omg geet's restlessnes for maan and waiting for him was sooo nice. then her burstout on maan and omggg geet meeting the baby was one of the most lovely moment. her making baby comfy and baby sleeping in her arms. and at last she feeding the baby is like the mosttt natural motherhood thing. no matter what a mother recognize the her kid anyways.

wowww muskaan👏👏👏👏. most beautiful written updates and especially the last bit of 54 part took my heart away. kudos to u.

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nihatri

@nihatri

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

u made me cry u bad girl.

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