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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

I just caught up from chapter 6 I guess...am really sorry bachcha for not reading and commenting regularly..😭

The story is moving beautifully, Shyam is just total yucky yucky & aaargh🤢

He was torturing Khushi, grrr...I wish I could get my hands on Shyam

Hope Arnie takes care of his Khushi...😛

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..Anj..

@..Anj..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

hiya sanchari

OMG u write too
i read all ur 9 chapters just now
superb yaar
agar thumne pm nahi kiya hotha toh mujhe patha hi nahi chaltha
thanks
and its lovely

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Great job Sancho!!.. Finally read the parts!!.. I come on the forum regularly you see but don't stay here for long... come lots of times for short periods lol...

Shyam deserves a good solid kick in the ***... I'm loving how you are proceeding with the story... and good has to triumph over evil na?

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Hey Sanchari...where have u been?

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Asmita

@asmi4you

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

hiii. Sancho sorry dear for late reply.
thank you sooo much Khushi's nightmare is over and Arnav caught Shyaam.
waiting for your next update eagerly. love to see Arnav nursing her again after show at your FF.Awesome update sweety. hey i m Asmita223188 changed my profile name.

Edited by asmi4you - 13 years ago

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Zahra

@Minnie.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

yyyaayyy another update soorryy i took sooo long to reply to it just been very busy over the past 2 weeks now holidays are commin up got pleanty of tym on my hands lolz bless ya thanks