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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Sancho, purani ff ka kya?

BTW, lovely start!!

Aw, Anjali and Khushi best friends and he's cheating on both of them!! :O engaged to khushi an dmarried to Anjali :O *slaps Shyam* what an idiot!!

Poor Khushi..and even worse for Anjali

Amazing work, Sancho!

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvi7884
Sancho, purani ff ka kya?
BTW, lovely start!!

Aw, Anjali and Khushi best friends and he's cheating on both of them!! :O engaged to khushi an dmarried to Anjali :O *slaps Shyam* what an idiot!!

Poor Khushi..and even worse for Anjali

Amazing work, Sancho!

Likha toh tha I will be continuing both

I will be on a roll once the exams get over

Thanks !

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

Amazing start :) Continue soon! :)

Sorry for the short comment! Really busy! :\ Really really sorry! I feel bad! :(

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

Superb morphz! 👏

Khusi shyam face off... wow can't wait for more..! 😍

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Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

reserved! you should daydream WAYY more often .. 😳😉

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Sanch ❤️
lmaoo if someone else was day dreaming I'd probs smack them across the head, tujhe to jhappi milegi! 🤗🤗 Concept is great, loved the intro!Like always, I'm pleased. :) But somehow didn't like the level of negativity, hope jab mera hero aaye to kuch dhamaal hojaye. 😃 You're planning to introduce my hero in the next chappy right?! *please say yes* *please say yes* lol you have to promise me, when that leech gets exposed, Anjali Khushi and Arnav will beat him black and blue for what he did! Tu jaldi nahi update karegi to tujhe dande se maaroongi, and this time i won't think if it will hurt you or not! 😈😆 Samjheyyo ke nahi babua??! (lol excuse my language, my mom just made me sit through a torturous episode of 'Paartiggyeaa' 😒)

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Tasha

@elena01

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Posted: 14 years ago

Superb murphy 👏

Pls pm me when you update!

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice dear... shyam has so much lust... nice start will be looking forward for it...

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tbpsgd3hhl

@tbpsgd3hhl

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Posted: 14 years ago

interesting start ! so you have laid the cards out on the table... cant wait to see what happens next.PM me when you do the next part.BTW i love the title of your story👍🏼

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EBasso

@EBasso

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Murphy Burfy...

Hope you won't mind me calling you that! Woh kya hai na, kab tak intezaar karti tumhare naam batane ka... 🤣

Thanks so much for the PM.🤗

I read your new FF. It is haunting. But so hopeful. Because, when the start is so gloomy and heart piercing, the progression can only get BETTER! Of course with a lot of road blocks and glitches along the way! But I am so fascinated with this story. ⭐️

Two best friends... heart broken and cheated by this dirt of a man! For now Khushi runs away, to compose herself and to think things through. But she knows she won't let Anjali stick around with this monster for too long! 👏

absolutely lovely start. So sad but... Arnav ki entry abhi baaki hai mere dost! 😍

Toh - will be looking forward to reading more of your work with bated breath!! 🤢

Keep writing and inspiring us!! 😳

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