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@Flame.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

wooaah that was amazing!! Shyam kidnapped her? ewww that idiot. how dare he. I hope Arnav saves her. Shheesh man how can anyone stoop so low? Dirty man.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Can that Shyamwa get any badder and meaner? Please several kicks from my side for that perverted creep in the next update! Can't bear to see Khushi tortured like this! Arrnie, my boy, you are my only hope to save Khushi and Anjali from this mess!

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Wait, khushi is still in her room? At anjali's place? Right next to arnav's room? Oh cant wait for arnav to find her, esp after been angry at the man who locked her up.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

If you give me Shyam I am all set to make bartha out of that jerk😡

How dare he ill treat some one like this..

Sadistic moron...

Aaargh! I hate him even more now...

I was giving him all the galiyas while watching the show todaye...

Right now I surely wanna kill him...

After reading two of your updates Sancho...

My poor Khushi😭

Hope everything gets well soon...

Good job Sanch🤗

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

loved the update.really nice n interesting.

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-floragrace-

@-floragrace-

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

it was nice 😊'

Edited by FLORAGRACE - 14 years ago

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tbpsgd3hhl

@tbpsgd3hhl

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

girl! i kept my promise and i read all the parts.. back to back.. back to back.. back to life!!!you have a thing for drama, suspense and pain!it showed right through your story since each part had all these elements in abundance!

but i liked the idea of how Arnav had already made a place in Khushi's life although Shyam was always running in her thoughts.. it was as though to say, you loved so much that it hurt, and today what you loved so much was ready cause hurt to you for their own gain!I have never hated Shyam anywhere in any of the stuff ive read as much as i have hated him here.

i am waiting to see how arnav and khushi meet and how the truth would come out!!

well done!well done!

-Mira

Edited by JalebiBai - 14 years ago