Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89 - Page 16

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-Annu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm...its smthing related to varun only...i m sure...🤔
although it was a Bit sad Update pallu...BUT...i just luvd reading it...the Past was sooo beautiful yaar...❤️😍
Varun is Ultra Cute ...😳😆

but y i feel mayank is behaving like a jerk...😳

well i m kind of Sad for both of them...
pr they have to find sm way to solve it out na...they can't just ignore it like dat...???
well varun is BACK...😎

i hope...everything will be okay...😳

Pallu...the Update Was Sooo..Beautifully Written ...⭐️👏
the way u described every emotion ...there Feelings...God...OUTSTANDING...👏
i actually kind of felt there feelings n emotions...😳
too GUD... n so well written..👍🏼
Luvd reading it...God Bless sweetyy...n continue Soon...❤️🤗
Annu😳

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
extremely substantial update payal...though i absolutely hate to see mayur like dat, i m getting anxious to knw about the past...!! things rnt falling into place as of yet,but i m sure u r right there to make it straight in no time 😳...!!
continue soon plzzz🤗
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update dear loved varun
i really want mayur reunion soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks all for being as sweet as ever in your comments🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

@all...hope u'll like it😊

Part 7 :

After the last exam had finished well, Nupur waited for Mayank to put all his stuff in his bag before they could leave for a treat in Cafeteria with all the other students on the occasion of the last exam.

Mayank was taking too longer a time than usual and Nupur was waiting impatiently for him. She knew she was soon going to blast Mayank with her angst at his behavior with her from some time now.

All the others had already left by then.

As Nupur saw Mayank still going over some questions in his question paper deeply thinking over it, she declared, "Mayank! I am leaving now. You just don't seem to-" her words were left in between as she felt him pulling her hand and pinning her to the wall with a teasing smile on his face.

Nupur looked at him in anger while trying to catch up on her breath.

Mayank chuckled at her and she burst out, "Mayank, what's all this?" trying to make her glare stronger than what his effect of closeness was doing to her.

Mayank still smiled and asked keeping both his hands on either side of her face, "Don't you Love me Nupur?"

This question was so dirct and out of the blue that Nupur got shocked while her eyes dilated. Besides, she didn't expect this from Mayank at all. What was he trying to prove lately? Was she being a fun factor for him to look at when it all meant something else to her!

She tried to move away but Mayank held her arms very tenderly and very slowly brought his face to stare deep in her eyes which were trying hard to lower in order to lie.She just couldn't bear his closeness with that softness on his face now.

Mayank smiled his dazzling smile and said slowly in her ears, "Let's find out!"

Nupur looked up in his eyes for any clue about what he was up to while he held her wrist, highlighting that he was keeping a check on her growing pulse and slowly and lovingly looking in her eyes without any hint of playfulness anymore, "I Love You Nupur!"

Nupur sensed her heart going for a ride in a fantasy land while she knew she blushed deep when she also realized how his hand holding her wrist was actually checking on her haphazard pulses and was not at all to her advantage. On second thought, was it really not to her advantage? Who cared enough now to get into useless details now! 'Sigh'...it was her MOMENT to relish and cherish!

Mayank moved ahead and softly digging his lips in her red cheeks, kissed her, sealing the beauty of what they shared into a shared tickling to both and she couldn't help hugging him tight now.

All her anger and complaints were now out of question as she saw the whole world coming down to her feet to make her feel on top of the world with this most heavenly that now they both witnessed together and the best part was, for each other.

Mayank squeezed her in his tight grip while he teased, "My Sweetheart got all worked up for so long. Thanks for the joy ride that it blessed me with. There is no other joy when I compare it to how elated I felt to see you fall for me. Besides, you are such a good sight to look at!"

She moved back to her earlier position on the wall and hit him on the shoulders when she said, "I have got a devil of a love here. How could you play with me like that?" she made a cute face and complained, not angry any longer.

Mayank chuckled and replied, "I guess everything is fair in the game of love" and after remembering something he instantly asked, "And how did my girl like my first kiss. You almost immediately hugged me, I couldn't even see your face except for a nano – second of your smiling face's glimpse"

Nupur immediately moved away and said, "Will you stop this game now?" she asked embarrassed at his question.

Mayank said genuinely, "What? It was my first too!"

Nupur glared at him, his own 'Peculiar Glare'.

Mayank walked upto her and asked seriously,"Do I need to?"

Nupur spoke strictly, "Hell Yes!"

Mayank made a dis-appointed face and tried to nod his head as if to confirm a 'Yes' from her and all she could mutter was, "Mayank!"

After suddenly having found each other lost in each other's eyes, Nupur indicated that peon was hovering around this empty class now, thereby threatening to lock them in it.

After the same thought crossing in both their minds, as the read on each other's face, both burst out laughing when they realized they wouldn't mind getting locked up though.

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Mayank, Nupur and Varun came back home and Varun was all lost with his grand parents for sometime. Mayank and Nupur couln't help but feel enjoyment make a return to their senses somewhat, only with an exception of 2 of them trult being a part of it.

Nupur was about to announce today what she had decided determinedly. But something stoped her from doing that. Mayank or his sheer coldness to hr or Varun's happiness, which was a new development now? Whatever it was, she needed time still to put things in order or was it just her perception.

She needed to put aside her aching heart and think with a straight mind over it. But then, how would you decide from heart when it took heart to decide matters like these?

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It was a Sunday next day and it had went off almost pleasantly with the, now usual, some hurts for both Mayank and Nupur.

Mayank's Mom and Dad did not seem to understand what were they supposed to do with them, after all they were intelligent enough themselves and were sensible enough to take decisions for themselves. Besides, they didn't bother in their matters anyways, something that had its own story…

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All the plannings for their wedding had been done as soon as they graduated. Both the families had considered all the petty matters, had argued, bitterly agreed and now were all set to give a good amount of blessings to the 'Much-in-love' couple who were so happy for their own marriage.

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Mayank was supposed to go to Gujrat for his business meeting and had informed about it to all in general at the dinner.

Varun almost sprang up from his seat asking to accompany Mayank so that he could enjoy a short holiday with his Dad and to explore a new place that he had only read of in the 'Maps of India' section of his atlas.

Mayank almost instantly agreed to Varun as he just didn't know how to not agree to his son at all. Other than that, he had a guilt in his heart for already putting him though what he was not supposed to, just like him.

So he did whatever it took to make him happy and was all smiles to his offer, though he was worried how would he manage to suit Varun alone while he attended the meeting?

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CJ had called up Nupur, CJ was Mayank's colleague and a friend of Nupur too along with Mayank. She was a strong, sensible and a great girl to be friends with. She currently worked in the same branch of Mayank's office where he worked. Ha had almost shifted his home to near that office from the last 6 months which was earlier only his rest house.

CJ informed Nupur about something which Nupur just couldn't ignore however, was the situation between Mayank and Nupur. She thanked her from heart for this piece of information and the first thing she did in the morning was to take a leave from her work for the next 3 days and walk up to Mayank and Varun who were keeping about 2 pairs of their clothes in a small bag.

She added 2 pair of her clothes too in it while she announced, "I am also coming, I have booked my tickets too at night itself when you'll booked yours, only that I have a seat away from the 2 of you"

She came and told and left leaving Mayank speechless.

What was she aiming at?, Mayank thought while Varun saw his short holiday becoming a family trip to look forward to.

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Sorry for the mistakes, if any😆

😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved it...
awesome update sis...
der past was sooo beautiful...
i loved d way Mayank proposed her...😉
it was an unique way...😆
checking her pulse n getting d answer was smthing i hv nvr seen...
bt it was too adorable...
i jst loved it to d core...
so now dey r going out together...
i hope dis meeting cum family vacation make dem like b4...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
plzzz update asap...
love u...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dilke rishtey bhi kitney ajeeb hote hain!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
but still i have some confusions hopefully they will solved when story proceed further
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
i really like nupur's determination to make things right...a lack of that is what is leading to so many failed marriages in today's world...even though mayank and nupur are leaving solely as parents to varun, i hope the 3 of them come back from their vacation as a family 😊...relationships are never meant to be easy...and when you want to make an effort to keep them, you know theyre worth it...nice update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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