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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

PART 33

Maan Geet ko baho mein lekar ghar ki taraf badhtha hai

Maahi..Maahi...

Khurana Mansion

Dadima: Kafi der ho gayi hai Maan aur Geet abhi tak nahi laute

Annie: Chinta mat kijiye Dadi Dev bhai ne kaha tha na k Maan bhai koi file collect karne k liye jaa rahe hai shayad wahi late ho gaye honge

Dev: Nahi Annie Bro waha nahi hai maine abhi client ko phone kiya tha unka kehna hai k Bro kafi der pehle file collect karke jaa chuke hai

Dadi: Najane wo dono kaha reh gaye humara jee toh bada ghabraraha hai

Annie: Dev bhai aap Maan bhai k mobile par call karke dekhiye main Geet ka mobile try karti hoon

Dadi: Haan ye thik rahega

Dev and Annie try to contact Maan and Geet

Dev: Bro ka mobile out of coverage area aa raha hai

Annie: Geet k mobile ka bhi yahi haal hai

Dadi: Maan toh itne laparvah pehle kabhi na the agar kahi aur jaana tha toh ek baar ghar pe inform karna unka farz banta tha magar unhe toh jaise humari koi fikr hi nahi hai

Dev: Dadi aap khamakha fikr kar rahi hai Bro aur Geet bus aathe hi honge

Annie: Ji Dadi Dev bhai sahi keh rahe hai

Dadi: Fikr kaise na kare Annie humare bachhe abhi tak ghar nahi laute aur aap keh rahe hai k humhe shannth rehna chahiye

Dadi: Dev kuch kijiye Maan aur Geet ka pata lagaiye

Dev: Ji Dadima main kuch karta hoon

Annie: Jo main dekh rahi hoon kya wo sach hai ya koi sapna

Dadi: Annie ye aap kya keh rahi hai

Annie: Dadi mujhe kuch ho gaya hai aajkal main khuli aakhon se sapne dekh rahi hoon janti hai mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise k Maan bhai shehjaado ki tarah Geet ko apne baho mein lekar yaha chale aa rahe hai

Dev & Dadi turn around to face the door

Dev: Sirf tum nahi Annie lagta hai k mujhe bhi kuch ho gaya hai kyunki meri aakhein bhi mujhe wahi dikhane ki koshish kar rahi hai jo k tum keh rahi ho

Dadi (smiles): Ye ek aisa haseen nazara hai jo k kisi sapne se bhi zyaada khoobsurat hai aur bete jo aap dono dekh rahe ho wahi asliyat hai Maan wakai mein Geet ko apne baho mein lekar aa rahe hai

Annie: Oh my God iske pehle ye sapna tuth jaaye let me capture this moment

Annie removes her mobile & clicks a photo of Maneet

Geet was totally captivated by Maan's charm

Maan continued walking in between stealing glances at Geet

Maan was also entralled by Geet's beauty and innocence

Geet: (thinking): Najaane aise kyun lag raha hai jaise k mujhe humesha se issi pal ka intezaar tha' inke baho mein aakar ek ajeeb sa sukun miltha hai yun lagtha hai jaise k meri sahi jagah yahi hai inke kareeb inke baho k darmiyaan

Maan: (thinking) Najaane Geet mein ye kaisi kashish hai jo k har pal mujhe uske kareeb jaane par majboor kar dethi hai. Main toh usse nafrat karta tha ...haan karta tha ab nahi' main bus itna jaanta hoon humare beech ye jobhi ankaha rishtha hai wo nafrat nahi hai'najaane iss rishthe ka kya naam hai?

Maan Geet ki taraf dekhtha hai ... Geet kafi pyar se Maan ki aakhon mein dekhthi hai

Maaneet eyelock

There were thousands of questions that were evident in their eyes

It seemed as if they were trying to find an answer through this eyelock

Maan: (thinking) Geet kya tum bhi wahi soch rahi ho jo main soch raha hoon

Geet: (thinking) Pata nahi magar aap mujhe yun kyun dekh rahe ho?

Maan: (thinking) Tumhari aakhon mein apne sawalo k jawab dundne ki koshish kar raha hoon

Geet: (thinking) Kya aakhein saare sawalo k jawab de dethi hai

Maan: (thinking) Aur kisi ka toh pata nahi Geet magar tumhari aakhein bina bole hi sab kuch bol dethi hai

Geet: (thinking) Achha toh aapko aakhon ki bhasha padni aathi hai

Maan: (thinking) Nahi magar seekhna zaroor chahunga

Geet: (thinking) Maan aaj jobhi humare beech hua '

Maan: (thinking) Kya wo galat tha Geet' Bolo Geet

Geet: (thinking) Shayad nahi magar '

Maan: (thinking) Magar kya Geet?

Geet: (thinking) Magar aisa kyun hua Maan aakhir humare beech ye kaisi dor hai jo humhe nachahakar bhi humesha jode rakhthi hai

Maan: (thinking) Iss sawal ka jawab toh mere paas bhi nahi hai Geet

Geet: (thinking) Magar jawab toh dhundna hogana Maan aakhir humara rishtha kya hai...main toh bus aapki secretary hoon

Maan: (thinking) Rishthe ka naam toh nahi pata magar itna zarur hai tum sirf meri ek secretary nahi ho balki usse kayi zyaada ho... tum mere liye khaas ho Geet bahut khaas

Geet: (thinking) Kya wakai mein?

Maan: (thinking) Haan Geet tumhe main kabhi kisi takleef mein nahi dekh saktha tum mere liye kafi anmol ho mere rehthe hue tumpar kabhi koi musibat nahi aa sakthi

Geet: (thinking) Issilye aapne Arjun ki aisi halat ki haina?

Maan: (thinking) Maine uske saath jo kuch bhi kiya wo kafi kum tha

Maan: (thinking) Geet agar tumne uss din mujhe nahi rokha hotha toh wo waha se zinda nahi jaata

Geet: (thinking) Jaanti thi issiliye maine aapko apni kasam dehkar rok diya magar...

Maan: (thinking) Magar kya Geet?

Geet(thinking): Aap meri kasam tukhrabhi toh sakthe the na

Maan: (thinking) Pata nahi Geet aisa pehli baar hua tum aisi pehli ladki ho jiske kehne par MSK ne apna faisla badla maine aisa kyun kiya ye shayad main bhi nahi jaanta

Geet: (thinking) Aap kafi achhe ho

Maan: (thinking) Tum bhi badi pyari ho Geet

Both of them were completly unaware that Dadi, Annie and Dev were watching them

Annie: Hmm... aakhon hi aakhon mein baathein ho rahi hai Dadi

Dadi & Dev started laughing

But still Maneet were engrossed in their own thoughts

Dadi goes and stands besides Maneet

Dadi: Huh huh

Eyelock breaks

Maan: Dadi aap?

Dadi: Haan bete hum

Dadi: Aap pehle ye bataiye k aap dono ko itni der kaise ho gayi aur aapki car kaha hai?

Maan: Dadi wo humari car beech raste mein kharab ho gayi

Dadi was constantly smiling

Maan: Dadi aap itna muskura kyun rahi ho?

Annie & Dev come out

Annie: Bhai aapne Geet ko itne pyar se apni baho mein utaya hai k muskurane ka bada dil kar raha hai

Geet: Ji mujhe neeche utariye

Maan: Nahi Bilkul bhi nahi

Dadi, Annie andDev were surprised to hear this

Maan: Mera matlab hai k tumhe chot lagi hai main tumhe tumhare kamre tak chod detha hoon

Geet was feeling embarrased

Geet: Main chali jaaungi

Maan: Nahi main tumhe chodkar aata hoon. Dadi main bus abhi aaya

Dadi: Ji bete

Maan carries Geet to her room

Annie :Dadi main toh kehthi hoon k Maan bhai ki car ko humesha yuhi kharab hothe rehna chahiye

Dev: Wo kyun?

Annie : Taaki roz bhai Geet ko aise hi ghar lekar aaya kare

They all start laughing

Outhouse

Maan: Geet tum thik toh hona mera matlab hai k tumhe dard toh nahi ho raha?

Geet: Ji main thik hoon

Maan: Geet tum kafi bheeg chuki ho tum issi waqt change kar lo main tumhari madat karta hoon

Geet: Ji kya matlab?

Maan: Mera matlab hai main tumhe sukhe kapde nikalkar de detha hoon mere jaane k baad change kar lena

Geet: Ji

Maan removes one of her night suits

Maan: Geet ab main chaltha hoon koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe call kar dena

Geet: Ji

Maan bahar jaane lagtha hai

Geet: Ji suniye

Maan turns

Maan : kya hua Geet koi takleef ho rahi hai

Geet: Nahi main bus aapko Good night kehna chahthi thi

Maan : (smiles) Good night Geet

Meanwhile,

Rathore Villa

Arjun: Maan Singh Khurana tumne mujhse dushmani mod leke achha nahi kiya aur wo bhi uss ladki Geet k liye

Arjun: Bahut bharosa hai na tum dono ko ek dusare par ab yahi bharosa mere kaam aayega mere bina kuch kare hi tum dono ek dusare k khilaf khade ho jaaoge

Arjun: Aur iss plan ki shuruwat kal se hogi... kal se kyun aaj se hi tumhe shayad uss project k baare mein abhi tak information mil chuki hogi...MSK tum khud Geet ko dhake maarkar apne office se nikal bahar karoge

Arjun: Maan aur Geet ab bahut hi jald tum dono ek dusare se dur ho jaayoge

Khurana Mansion

Maan: Adi tumne iss waqt kyun call kiya?

Adi: Sir ek bahut hi important project k baare mein aapko information deni thi ye constructions ki duniya ka sabse bada project hai

Maan: Kahi tum Chopra and Son's k project ki baat toh nahi kar rahe

Adi: Ji Sir wahi project

Maan: Jaanta hoon Adi aur haan ye project wakai mein kafi important hai hum iske baare mein kal office mein discuss karte hai

Adi: Fine Sir. Good night

Maan: Good night Adi

Call ends

PRECAP: Maan: "Iss project mein Geet mere saath kaam karegi"

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love-Piya

PART 34: PAGE 97

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

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yiepeee
m first after a long time
huh thank god caught u updating...!!

well loved the update
maaneet thinking wala part was too too good yar
mazza aya
m sure maan wont confess ki vo geet se pyar karta hai
upar se ye devil arjun..😡...problems create karane aa gaya
loved the update
awesome

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

edited

awesome👏

arjun😡

cont soon

keep writing

Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

dear pls dont part them

u said that the ll be frds then love

so pls make maan to think about that

pls dont break there trust dear

plzzz

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

after a long time a good update

continue soon

thanks for pm

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Monali

@monika1992

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

awesome👏
i luved all dialogues of maaneet (while thinking) wid pics

arjun😡

cont soon

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Lovely update dear. And yes I also don't want MU to arise between Maneet. that Arjun...Grrr...😡... Continue soon pls...Thanx for pm dear...

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#478

loved the update...

loved their ankhon - ankhon se baatein...

the pics u select r always awesome...

so arjun trying to split them...

i hope that their trust is stronger than wat he thinks and they stay close...

pl cont soon

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

wow Piya...their eye talk was really romantic...i wish they were able to undertsand and give a name to their relationship...but now Arjun is there to create MU...waise bahut intelligent hai Arjun...he knows he can't harm Geet till Maan is with her...

I will reserve my comments on will he be sucessful temporarily or not...dil to yahi cahta hai aisa na ho but then don't know what your story demands...