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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Hey maria:)

awesome part and omg that was sooo intresting. Armaan was allready married😲
awww I'm actually feeling sorry for both alia and riddhima, but I hope Armaan's love fro riddhima is true. con. very veyr very soon:)
take care
Edited by miss93 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Reserved.
EDited.

Thanks a lot jana for dedicating this part to me.
I'll always demand for the updates as i'm loving the concept of ur story.
Armaan has got two wives.that's quite shocking.His first marriage was forced and he loves ridz deeply.
But Ridz is not very happy with the bitter truth of Armaan.
I feel bad about Alia.
Armaan should have been honest to ridz.she is really heart broken now.
He is going to be sardar of some kabeela.That's something new again.
His step-mother was so rude to ridz.
I loved Armaan when he defended his wife in the best manner he could.
ridz is becoming comfortable with Alia slowly.
That's nice to see.
I hope riddhima may adjust in the new atmosphere soon and try to understand Armaan's point of view as well.She must be feeling very low right now..
I wish things may get better between them soon.
They have a baby now so I don't think Ridz would think about going back to US alone.She wants to live there.
Poor Armaan is rotten b/w his dad and wife..
Plz update the next part soon.
The first part written in a beautiful manner Maria.
U r an excellent writer.
love u
Asma

I'm sorry for the late reply..
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
this is specialy for crazy for kash as she requested me to update my os and she gave me a wonderfull comment,accept my best buddy miss93 you are the one buddy who love my work iam happy to have a buddy like you thanxk buddy,i dont expect that some one will request to update thankx you made my night
thankx guys
kashmayurfan, adorableaisha, akshad, zigzagway_sadi, illa8, malose, fri42911, princessrashida, munni_sheela, sweetdesire, crazy4KASH_AR, _Afrin_, m4manju, sacred shrine, KaSh-Maneet-Fan,






part one(arsh version)

A girl sitting on a floor, sleeping her head is on the bed near a baby.Someone enter the room with a tray of food in hands and remove the curtons from the window,sun rays hit the girl face.With gr8 dificulty she open her eyes.Guy say good morning to her and place food infront of her ,then he kisis the baby on his forhead.Girl spoke arman plz yaha se chala jao,mujhe ab tumahri shakal se bhi nafrat hai.Arman shilpa!!!! kio karti ho tum mujhe se nafrat ha mai na kia hi kia hai.Shilpa kia hi kia hai tum ne mujhe dhoka dia,meri life destroy kar di.Arman saw shilpa from head to toe,her eyes are red due to crying and their are dark cirles around her eyes.Her lips were swollen due to constant crying.He felt bad for her but what could he do she dont understands his situation.Arman hugg shilpa tightly and hid his face in her hairs.Shilpa dont hugg him back,she always felt gr8 when arman huggs her but not now.Every thing has bees change from past one year when she got to know why arman marry her,he dont love he just use her.But why he use her not any other girl.The thing which make her more sad is this he is not only her he is someone else tooo.She being a only child of her parents dont learnt the word sharing.ANd now she is sharing the most important person pf her life with another women tooo.Arman after long time felt gr8 how he missed the comefort her arms,how wana just live in her arms till eternty.He knows what he had done is very bad infact worst but he can be forgiven.He just lie to her that he is not mariied,well tehnicaly it is true he marry to that girl bcz hhis father wana that.But when his fathers wishes not come true he allow him to marry the girl he wants,He met shilpa in new york and for the firat time in his life he likes a girl in that manner.He only marry her bcz he loves her and yes she can fulill his father desire too .He wana make her happy but her hapiness lie in US.He cant live in US bcz his father wanted him.But she dont understands him,why she dont understand him????he loves her and she loves him tooo.They both were happy,they marry and have a baby tooo.
He stills remembers how after her first day in university he use to thought of a chance to meet her to see her.How slowly slowly they became good friends??how he use to help her in her projects??How he use to stay with her at her parents home and whole night they chat and complete her projects.Her motther and father like him alot,they care him as their own son.He remebers arnav,Her SO called best friend came and how she hugg him and he felt jeolous.How once she goes with arnav on coffe cum date,and he felt too much jeolous that in anger he dont talk to her for 3 days and when she asks why he angry with her then...(thats the past,you will know son what happen then???)
Shilpa and ARman train of thought broken with a loud cry of their son.Arman quickly broke the hugg and try to put him uo but shilpa stops him and put her son up and try to sooth him and says to arman dont you ever dare to touch my son,i dont wana he become like you.I want to make him a nice person.This make arman angry and he was already to blast on her but a women in 30 voice stops him and arman baba ap yaha kia kr raha ho.or ye chota baba kio ro raha hai.She points towards shilpa ae angrazy mam to is kabela k sardar ki ma hai,ye bacha tera kam or is kabela ka ziada hai.is ka khial rakh or ye mat bhool k tu agar zinda hai to is bacha ki waja se warna to to ab tak,before she could say anything arman grab her haris from back side and say zuban band kijie apni agar ap mera baba ki dosri biwi na hoti to ab tak apko mai mar chuka hota.Apko koi haq nahe hai meri biwi se asa bat karna ka.Ap jaiya yaha se iska pehla k mai kuch bora kar do.Sehbena(armans choti mama present sardani hehe od their qabela obviously his father second wife) says hamey maff kardo amran baba hum to bas,acha tum gusa choro sardar sab apna pota ko dekhna k liye hum ko yaha bheja hai wo apna pota kodakhna chahta hai.Arman ap jaya yaha se mai AHAN ko la kar ata ho or dubara yaha ana se pehla or shilpa se asa bat karna se pehle yad rakhiya ga k jasa hi AHAN 16 ka ho ga shilpa is qabela ki sardarni ho gi to tamwwz se bat ki jiye us ka sath.Sehbena theek hai arman baba.
And she left!!!!!!Arman shilpa listen one thing remember i love you no matter what you have to live with me in this house, with our son.I am leaving ri8 now Ahan ko bad mai la kar jao ga baba k pas,saying this he kissed her and ahan on their forhead and left.Shilpa hav a headache he wana take a shower but not no what to do with ahan.fisrt she change his clothes then try to make him sleeo but he was not sleeping.When shilpa was trying to make ahan sleep a girl of nearly 29 or 28 in simple words more than 25 enter in the room.Shilpa saw her and and give her a smile,this and her mother in law are the only persons whom she like or talk in this house,yes she is her husbands 1 wife but she dont hate or dislike her bcz her condition is more worst than her.She was respected in this house bcz she gav this family a son,a new sardar but alia(armans 1 wife) she is treated like garbage in this house,she felt bad for alia.Alia smiles back and says shilpa tum kaho to hum ahan ko sula de.Ma to hum ban nahi sakta lakin ahan ko apni god mai utha kuch der k liye hi sahi per ma ka sukh to mahsoos kar la.Shilpa give her a tery smiles and say alia tum ahan ko jab chaha utha skati ho.Alia smiles and take ahan from shilpa hands and hugg him tightly ,shilpa smiles a bit and says tum iska dhyana rakho mai naha kar ati ho mera sir mai dird ho raha hai subha se.


okay guys plz give me your prcious comment it meant alot
maria
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

woohooo

nice and interesting concept dear...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
hiii
awesome update
loved it
interesting
da concept is sooo different
poor alina
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
hey Ria
awesome concept! just loved it!
very interesting nd unique!
wanna read next part soon...
cont super soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
sorry for the late comment...
awesome concept, just loved it...
very interesting nd unique...
waiting for the next part...
update soon & keep smiling...
thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
The story is getting really really interesting...😃

Really loved the part...👏

Why armaan is behaving that way??? 😡

Shilpa his second wife...😲

Eagerly waiting for the next part!!!!

Thanks for the pm...


Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Hey sweety ... 😊😊
the part is so much unpredicteble...Armaan was been married before!!!!!!😲😲😲😲..this is sooo not fair...😡😡
i know he loves Riddhima, but he can't do this to the another girl.. I don't like the way he threatens Riddhima😡😡😡...he should free that girl before getting married to Riddhima...
I am not in favour of armaan...😕😕
I hope Riddhima can break herself free form this situation...
do continue soon..😊
😊
love 😊
Roshni
how r u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Hey dear
Awesome update
Loved it
o continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
GEET

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