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Posted: 14 years ago
thankx alot asman for your comment
thankx a ton asma
maria
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE
GUYS today is my one of the bst buddy on IF and one of the good writers of IF bithday.Plz wish her on this link😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1788317&PID=46839888&#


Hey asma this update is specaily for you on your birthdays.This is my punishement to wish you late i hope you like this part asma.
Again happy birthday
maria
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Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello guys guys how you doing thank you soo much for the love you guys giving me
thankx a lot

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PART 2(AR VERSION)

Riddhima go to wasroom for having bath,mean while alia was takin care of ahan.Whe alia made ahan sleep,arman 2 mom came in riddhima and saw ahan in alia hands she quickly grab ahan from alia hands and say her tumhari itni himmat k tum is qabeela k sardar ko utha rahi ho,tum apna saiya ko shota sardar se door rakho warni mallik sab ko btado gi,Tum lhood to kabela ko uska ka agla sardar nahi de saki or ab tum ahan baba ko marna ki koshish kar rahi ho.Tum apni aukat ko kio bhool jata ho.Bcz of Sehbeena ahan wakes up and starts crying, hearing ahan crying riddhima come out from the wasroom and quickly pick ahan in her hand .Riddhima saw her son in very bad state so she blast on Sehbeena ap apna apko samjhti kia hai how dare you , arman se subah apse kaha tha hamra kamra mai na ana k liye,alia ne ahan ko mera kehna per uthaya.Ap jaya yah se or dubara mara kamra mai mat ai ga.Sehbeena tumahara itni himmat k tum ham se istarha bat karo gi hum se by saying this she gonna slap riddhima but arman stops her hand and say ap ko meri bat smajh mai nahi ati ap yaha se jaya warna mai,by seeing his anger alia and sehbena both left.
Arman says to riddhima tum ahan ko jaldi sula do.mujhe tumhe kahi la kar jana hai.Riddhima per mujhe tumara sa kahi nahi jana hai.This makes arman angry like hell he quickly take ahan from her hands and place him on the bed.Then he returns back to riddhima,he fisted her hairs in his hands and says why dont you understands me huh????why dont you understands that i love you.your bitter words hurt me.I love you riddhima .Plz dont make me to hurt you.Riddhima was crying due to pain,and tears roll down from her eyes when arman see that he leave her hairs and removes her tears and kiss her on her eyes.Then her cheeks he keep his lips there for some time and then slowly he kiss her lips.Risddhima dont response for sometime but after sometime she too start responding .The kiss was pasionate.Arman was trying to tell her how he love her through the kiss.
Their moment was broke due to ahan crying riddhima qucikly move away from arman and put ayan in her lap.Ahan was crying bcz he was hungry so riddhima quickly go out of the room without looking back towards arman.As riddhima went out of the room ,arman leans on the wall and smiles,they kiss after long time may be after 5 or 6 mounths.He was happy that riddhima still loves him,she dont hate,she is only angry on him and he will make sure the distance between them cover soon.
Riddhima feeds ahan and make him sleep again.She looks towards her son face and kiss him on her forehead.She was thinking about her son future,did he would be like her grand father and father.Did he also will kill others just to show his power.DID he will also behave with her like arman behaves with his mother.No she cant let this happen.She has to do something.She has to make arman ready to go to England back.If he will not go back then she will go back she is a mother and for her son she has to take this step but who will help her...In this hpuse no one can help her .She has to make arman ready frst if will not then she think about other way.
Her thoughts wer broken by a voice.By hearing this voice riddhima quickly get up .This voice is of mallik sahab.He says kasa hai hamara pota(grand son) kasa hai ha??,baho hamay hamra pota ko pakda do suah se is ka chehra dekha nahi hum na.Riddhima ahan abhi abhi soya hai jab utha ga tab dekh li jiye ga.By saying this she leeave from there and go towards her room.

when she enters in the room she saws arman combing his haris as soon as arman eyes met with her,she remeber their kiss few hours ago.She felt currents in her body(i find this line funny not know why hehehehe).She quiclky looks down.She puts a sleeping ahan on the bed carefully,and kiss his forehead with affection and love and looks at him for sometime.Then she fekt arman sitting beside her on the bed.Riddhima whisper looking at ahan face "he looks very cute while sleeping,same like you.Arman smiles and says hmm so you wacth me when i sleep.But riddhima not reply to him and kept looking towards ahan face.Arman "riddhima asa kio dekh rahi ho ahan ko".Riddhima whisper iam thinking about his future.What will be his future arman.Will he be like his father and grand father,iam his mother arman i wont let him to kill someone like you and baba to show his power.Then she moves towards arman and cup his face arman am ready to love you back i will do what ever you will say to me i promise i will never talk to you rudly i promise but plz lets go back to england plz arman.Arman became angry by lisetning this but somehow control his anger and says listen iddhima why dont you understands me i cant leave my father.He give me birth me and ari...i mean iam the only son of him.He loves me,how can i leave my parents riddhima.Listen riddhima this is last time iam warning you we both will never go back ot engalnd.I told you to get we both are going to see me kabela.My village is very beutifull,i remeber you told me you love to wacth crops iam gonna show you the paradise,get ready quickly we will leave ahan to ma,she wil tookk care of him.Riddhima"arman i am..but arman cut her and says in anger iam going to tell ma to take care of ahan till we came back and when i came back you should be ready.By saying this he left from there.Riddhima look once towards ahan and then go to washromm to ready herself.Arman took ahan and give him to his ma and says ma take care of him.


THIS is for now,
hope you like it,
for arsh version scroll down
maria,😊
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello every one hope you guys doing well😊
thankx alot for your apreciation:)
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PART 2 (ARSH VERSION)
Shilpa go to wasroom for having bath,mean while alia was takin care of ahan.Whe alia made ahan sleep,arman 2 mom came in shilpa and saw ahan in alia hands she quickly grab ahan from alia hands and say her tumhari itni himmat k tum is qabeela k sardar ko utha rahi ho,tum apna saiya ko shota sardar se door rakho warni mallik sab ko btado gi,Tum khood to kabela ko uska ka agla sardar nahi de saki or ab tum ahan baba ko marna ki koshish kar rahi ho.Tum apni aukat ko kio bhool jata ho.Bcz of Sehbeena ahan wakes up and starts crying, hearing ahan crying shilpa come out from the wasroom and quickly pick ahan in her hand .Shilpa saw her son in very bad state so she blast on Sehbeena ap apna apko samjhti kia hai how dare you , arman se subah apse kaha tha hamra kamra mai na ana k liye,alia ne ahan ko mera kehna per uthaya.Ap jaya yah se or dubara mara kamra mai mat ai ga.Sehbeena tumahara itni himmat k tum ham se istarha bat karo gi hum se by saying this she gonna slap riddhima but arman stops her hand and say ap ko meri bat smajh mai nahi ati ap yaha se jaya warna mai,by seeing his anger alia and sehbena both left.
Arman says to shilpa tum ahan ko jaldi sula do.mujhe tumhe kahi la kar jana hai.Shilpa per mujhe tumara sa kahi nahi jana hai.This makes arman angry like hell he quickly take ahan from her hands and place him on the bed.Then he returns back to shilpa,he fisted her hairs in his hands and says why dont you understands me huh????why dont you understands that i love you.your bitter words hurt me.I love you riddhima .Plz dont make me to hurt you.Shilpa was crying due to pain,and tears roll down from her eyes when arman see that he leave her hairs and removes her tears and kiss her on her eyes.Then her cheeks he keep his lips there for some time and then slowly he kiss her lips.Shilpa dont response for sometime but after sometime she too start responding .The kiss was pasionate.Arman was trying to tell her how he love her through the kiss.
Their moment was broke due to ahan crying shilpa qucikly move away from arman and put ayan in her lap.Ahan was crying bcz he was hungry so shilpa quickly go out of the room without looking back towards arman.As shilpa went out of the room ,arman leans on the wall and smiles,they kiss after long time may be after 5 or 6 mounths.He was happy that shilpa still loves him,she dont hate,she is only angry on him and he will make sure the distance between them cover soon.
Shilpa feeds ahan and make him sleep again.She looks towards her son face and kiss him on her forehead.She was thinking about her son future,did he would be like her grand father and father.Did he also will kill others just to show his power.DID he will also behave with her like arman behaves with his mother.No she cant let this happen.She has to do something.She has to make arman ready to go to England back.If he will not go back then she will go back she is a mother and for her son she has to take this step but who will help her...In this house no one can help her .She has to make arman ready frst if will not then she think about other way.
Her thoughts wer broken by a voice.By hearing this voice shilpa quickly get up .This voice is of mallik sahab.He says kasa hai hamara pota(grand son) kasa hai ha??,baho hamay hamra pota ko pakda do suah se is ka chehra dekha nahi hum na.Shilpa ahan abhi abhi soya hai jab utha ga tab dekh li jiye ga.By saying this she leeave from there and go towards her room.
when she enters in the room she saws arman combing his haris as soon as arman eyes met with her,she remeber their kiss few hours ago.She felt currents in her body(i find this line funny not know why hehehehe).She quiclky looks down.She puts a sleeping ahan on the bed carefully,and kiss his forehead with affection and love and looks at him for sometime.Then she fekt arman sitting beside her on the bed.Shilpa whisper looking at ahan face "he looks very cute while sleeping,same like you.Arman smiles and says hmm so you watch me when i sleep.But shilpa not reply to him and kept looking towards ahan face.Arman "shilpa asa kio dekh rahi ho ahan ko".Shilpa whisper iam thinking about his future.What will be his future arman.Will he be like his father and grand father,iam his mother arman i wont let him to kill someone like you and baba to show his power.Then she moves towards arman and cup his face arman am ready to love you back i will do what ever you will say to me i promise i will never talk to you rudly i promise but plz lets go back to england plz arman.Arman became angry by listening this but somehow control his anger and says listen shilpa why dont you understands me i cant leave my father.He give me birth me and ari...i mean iam the only son of him.He loves me,how can i leave my parents shilpa.Listen shilpa this is last time iam warning you we both will never go back ot engalnd.I told you to get we both are going to see me kabela.My village is very beutifull,i remeber you told me you love to wacth crops iam gonna show you the paradise,get ready quickly we will leave ahan to ma,she wil tookk care of him.Shilpa"arman i am..but arman cut her and says in anger iam going to tell ma to take care of ahan till we came back and when i came back you should be ready.By saying this he left from there.Shilpa look once towards ahan and then go to washroom to ready herself.Arman took ahan and give him to his ma and says ma take care of him.

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it

plzzz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Buddy ...😊😊😊

That was an awesome update...😃😃😃
To say the truth i am not liking Armaan Character here...😕😕
though he loves riddhima but that did not give him the right to treat her like that...😡AngryAngry she is his wife for heavens sake...
I hope riddhima can free her band her child from their clutches...
Take care dear...
Love
Roshni...
Edited by roshni_A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor shilpa
sooo sad
why is armaan being sooo angry
hope shilpa escapes
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing...
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey dear...The Part is just too good...Loved it...SO Riddhima still Love Armaan...But why Armaan is not ready to go England?..waiting for more so try to update soon...Thanks for the PM..Take care

PS: Wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY ASMA?..🥳

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyya

it ws js awesome yaar

srry din cmnted on ur ff n al

cos m lil bit busy dese days

bt do pm me i'l definitely try to cmnt

thnx fr d pm

cont soon

luv

Bipin

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