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roshni_A

@roshni_A

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Wooohooo...u r back with another one... 😃😃...i am really happy..😊

Well i loved the concept...😊

u have pointed out so many critical problems of our socity...and thats really remarkable..👏👏👏

But yaar why Riddhima is crying???????😲😲...i hope Armaan hav not done anything bad to her...Or if he had he must hav a good reason behind it...😕

I really don't wish to see him in negetive shade...😕

I liked the starting of the ss very much...👏

pls do continue soon with it...

take care .😊

lots of love.

Roshni...

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

hiii

congrats on da new ff

interesting start

poor shilpa

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Magical_KaSh

@Magical_KaSh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

hey ria

d concept ws js awsome yaar

luvd it plzzz do cont it soon

m really excited to read d further parts

cont soonnn

luv

Bipin

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

hey nice one...is that baby shilpa and armaan's ?😲 want to knw more... cont soon 😊

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

great concept!!!!

very interesting!!!!!!!

i wonder what happened between ARSH.

please continue soon.

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Reserved...

Edited..

OMG !! The prologue is just amazing...
It was quite shocking as well.U've highlighted the societal restrictions on a girl sooo wonderfully...
I just don't have enough words to praise u for that Maria..

Coming to AR's part,I guess Armaan was the guy who helped Riddhima..
The last lines again surprised me.
Ridz has a baby..

This ff seems to be very interesting.
Plz add me in ur pm list and update the first part as early as possible.

luv ya...

Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 14 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
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OMG !! The prologue is just amazing...
It was quite shocking as well.U've highlighted the societal restrictions on a girl sooo wonderfully...
I just don't have enough words to praise u for that Maria..

Coming to AR's part,I guess Armaan was the guy who helped Riddhima..
The last lines again surprised me.
Ridz has a baby..

This ff seems to be very interesting.
Plz add me in ur pm list and update the first part as early as possible.

luv ya...

okay ji thank you jii
loved your comment ji
maria

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Really really liked the concept...😊
its awesome...👏
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
Thanks for the PM😊
Continue soon!!!
Take care⭐️

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MaNaLoVeKaSh

@MaNaLoVeKaSh

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

nice concept arsh
love it
continue soon
add me in the pm list

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

this is specialy for crazy for kash as she requested me to update my os and she gave me a wonderfull comment,accept my best buddy miss93 you are the one buddy who love my work iam happy to have a buddy like you thanxk buddy,i dont expect that some one will request to update thankx you made my night
thankx guys
KSGforever08, roshni_A, miss93, Stupidcupid1234, sweetdesire, meeru_s_armaan, crazy4KASH_AR,

part one(AR VERSION)
a girl sitting on a floor, sleeping her head is on the bed near a baby.Someone enter the room with a tray of food in hands and remove thecurtons from the window,sun rays hit the girl face.With gr8 dificulty she open her eyes.Guy say good morning to her and place food infront of her ,then he kisis the baby on his forhead.Girl spoke arman plz yaha se chala jao,mujhe ab tumahri shakal se bhi nafrat hai.Arman riddhima/shilpa!!!! kio karti ho tum mujhe se nafrat ha mai na kia hi kia hai.Riddhima kia hi kia hai tum ne mujhe dhoka dia,meri life destroy kar di.Arman saw riddhimafrom head to toe,her eyes are red due to crying andtheir are dark cirles around her eyes.Her lips were swollen due to constant crying.He felt bad for her but what could he do she dont understands his situation.Arman hugg riddhima tightly and hid his face in her hairs.Riddhima dont hugg him back,she always felt gr8 when arman huggs her but not now.Every thing has bees change from past one year when she got to know why arman marry her,he dont love he just use her.But why he use her not any other girl.The thing which make her more sad is this he is not only her he is someone else tooo.She being a only child of her parents dont learnt the word sharing.ANd now she is sharing the most important person pf her life with another women tooo.Arman after long time felt gr8 how he missed the comefort her arms,how wana just live in her arms till eternty.He knows what he had done is very bad infact worst but he can be forgiven.He just lie to her that he is not mariied,well tehnicaly it is true he marry to that girl bcz hhis father wana that.But when his fathers wishes not come true he allow him to marry the girl he wants,He met riddhima in new york and for the firat time in his life he likes a girl in that manner.He only marry her bcz he loves her and yes she can fulill his father desire too .He wana make her happy but her hapiness lie in US.He cant live in US bcz his father wanted him.But she dont understands him,why she dont understand him????he loves her and she loves him tooo.They both were happy,they marry and have a baby tooo.
He stills remembers how after her first day in university he use to thought of a chance to meet her to see her.How slowly slowly they became good friends??how he use to help her in her projects??How he use to stay with her at her parents home and whole night they chat and complete her projects.Her motther and father like him alot,they care him as their own son.He remebers arnav,Her SO called best friend came and how she hugg him and he felt jeolous.How once she goes with arnav on coffe cum date,and he felt too much jeolous that in anger he dont talk to her for 3 days and when she asks why he angry with her then...(thats the past,you will know son what happen then???)
Riddhima and ARman train of thought broken with a loud cry of their son.Arman quickly broke the hugg and try to put him uo but riddhima stops him and put her son up and try to sooth him and says to arman dont you ever dare to touch my son,i dont wana he become like you.I want to make him a nice person.This make arman angry and he was already to blast on her but a women in 30 voice stops him and arman baba ap yaha kia kr raha ho.or ye chota baba kio ro raha hai.She points towards riddhima ae angrazy mam to is kabela k sardar ki ma hai,ye bacha tera kam or is kabela ka ziada hai.is ka khial rakh or ye mat bhool k tu agar zinda hai to is bacha ki waja se warna to to ab tak,before she could say anything arman grab her haris from back side and say zuban band kijie apni agar ap mera baba ki dosri biwi na hoti to ab tak apko mai mar chuka hota.Apko koi haq nahe hai meri biwi se asa bat karna ka.Ap jaiya yaha se iska pehla k mai kuch bora kar do.Sehbena(armans choti mama present sardani hehe od their qabela obviously his father second wife) says hamey maff kardo amran baba hum to bas,acha tum gusa choro sardar sab apna pota ko dekhna k liye hum ko yaha bheja hai wo apna pota kodakhna chahta hai.Arman ap jaya yaha se mai AHAN ko la kar ata ho or dubara yaha ana se pehla or riddhima se asa bat karna se pehle yad rakhiya ga k jasa hi AHAN 16 ka ho ga riddhima is qabela ki sardarni ho gi to tameez se bat ki jiye us ka sath.Sehbena theek hai arman baba.
And she left!!!!!!Arman riddhima listen one thing remeber i love you no matter what you have to live with me in this house, with our son.I am leaving ri8 now Ahan ko bad mai la kar jao ga baba k pas,saying this he kissed her and ahan on their forhead and left.Riddhima hav a headache she wana take a shower but not no what to do with ahan.fisrt she change his clothes then try to make him sleep but he was not sleeping.When riddhima was trying to make ahan sleep a girl of nearly 29 or 28 in simple words more than 25 enter in the room.Riddhima saw her and and give her a smile,this and her mother in law are the only persons whom she like or talk in this house,yes she is her husbands 1 wife but she dont hate or dislike her bcz her condition is more worst than her.She was respected in this house bcz she gav this family a son,a new sardar but alia(armans 1 wife) she is treated like garbage in this house,she felt bad for alia.Alia smiles back and says riddhima tum kaho to hum ahan ko sula de.Ma to hum ban nahi sakta lakin ahan ko apni god mai utha kuch der k liye hi sahi per ma ka sukh to mahsoos kar la.Riddhima give her a teary smiles and say alia tum ahan ko jab chaha utha skati ho.Alia smiles and take ahan from riddhima hands and hugg him tightly ,riddhima smiles a bit and says tum iska dhyana rakho mai naha kar ati ho mera sir mai dird ho raha hai subha se.

For ARSH version scrol down
Thankx for the comment and apreciation
maria

you will get arsh version after crazzy for kash guys

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago