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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

hey it was a nice end to a nice story... sad that this kind of things still happen in society loved ur writing... do write more on kash 😊

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

that was really sad poor shilpa

great work

loved it

luv
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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

dat was awesome
loved it! loved AR!
thnx 4 pm

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Hello every one
how are you all hh??
well iam back with a short story
hope you like it...

MY Life

AR verion

Concept:

Well guys tradition is very important because it differs a peple from others people or city...But is it good we forgot our moral values.For the sake of tradition did we got the certificate to kill any one.
To burry a mother infront of her own son WHY???bcz she helps a inocent girl.A father kill his own daughter WHY?beczuse she gone against him!!!!bcz she wana study not to marry a man twice of her own age!!!!!A husband who loves his wife but have to chain her WHY???beczuse she dont wana live with him,she knows about ihs family and she wana go back to her family.A wife she has to run form the love of her life bcz she wana give a good life to her son.Not wana make him like his father,like other motheer wana make him engineer,doctor not to be a leader of some people who dont respect life,treat women like garbage.

we saw a uni a girl in hurry running very fast mummbling 2004456 2004556 ,plz god help me to find my class room this londin uni is very big plz help me.sudenly she bump into a guy.She quickly sits on floor and say soory to guy "iam so sorry iam in hurry iam so sorry'she starts crying.the guy to sits up on floor and says ssh its ok he make her get up.And say sweety now tell what happen why you running like you are in oluppics!!!!!!!The girl says today is my 1 day in this medcial uni but i dont know my class room code plz can you help me.The guy reply ok i will help you fisrt stop crying.i know where your class room.The guy quickly take her to class.Before entering the class the girl says welll my name is riddhima.nice to meet to you.thankx aot for your help.She says and enter in the class the guy smile and whisper "Riddhima"
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A girl sitting on the florr with a baby lying on the bed besides her.The girl is crying very badly and saying why i met you arman why????why you do this to me why??????

thats it for now
plz give m e your precious comment and hit like button plz
Foe ARSH version scrol down
maria!!!!:)

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Hello every one
how are you all hh??
well iam back with a short story
hope you like it...

My life

ARSH verion

Concept:

Well guys tradition is very important because it differs a peple from others people or city...But is it good we forgot our moral values.For the sake of tradition did we got the certificate to kill any one.
To burry a mother infront of her own son WHY???bcz she helps a inocent girl.A father kill his own daughter WHY?beczuse she gone against him!!!!bcz she wana study not to marry a man twice of her own age!!!!!A husband who loves his wife but have to chain her WHY???beczuse she dont wana live with him,she knows about ihs family and she wana go back to her family.A wife she has to run form the love of her life bcz she wana give a good life to her son.Not wana make him like his father,like other motheer wana make him engineer,doctor not to be a leader of some people who dont respect life,treat women like garbage.

we saw a uni a girl in hurry running very fast mummbling 2004456 2004556 ,plz god help me to find my class room this londin uni is very big plz help me.sudenly she bump into a guy.She quickly sits on floor and say soory to guy "iam so sorry iam in hurry iam so sorry'she starts crying.the guy to sits up on floor and says ssh its ok he make her get up.And say sweety now tell what happen why you running like you are in oluppics!!!!!!!The girl says today is my 1 day in this medcial uni but i dont know my class room code plz can you help me.The guy reply ok i will help you fisrt stop crying.i know where your class room.The guy quickly take her to class.Before entering the class the girl says welll my name is shilpa,nice to meet to you.thankx aot for your help.She says and enter in the class the guy smile and whisper "Shilpa"
*****************************************************************
A girl sitting on the florr with a baby lying on the bed besides her.The girl is crying very badly and saying why i met you arman why????why you do this to me why??????

thats it for now
plz give m e your precious comment and hit like button plz

maria!!!!:)

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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kashmayurfan

@kashmayurfan

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Nice part! Poor shilpa:( can't wait to read what happen next..cont.soon

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548252

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hey maria:)

wow that was just great concept and I loved it soo much. from where do get sooo good idea huh???😆 but really I can't wait to read more and now what has happened, so you better update soon.

btw I finally editet my comment on page 7, sorry I know it took me very long time

tnx for the pm

take care