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Posted: 14 years ago
heartwrenchin update!🥺
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Writer Note

Thank u so much for ur beautiful comments and ur beautiful response🤗🤗means a lot to me.i m going toupdate next part ..i hope u ll liked it😳
Well as story will proceed further u ll get to know more about Mayank's
what was happened to him?
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Maria...remember me in ur prayers😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Intezaar

Because of feeling of guilt, pity or something else he did not know but he felt urge to see her where was she? as he did not expected her to awake early as she slept after midnight because of

'I came back at midnight and she was waiting for me'..'He paused a bit talking to himself and felt sharp knife cut his heart to remembered his rude words which he said to her and then her innocent face,her eyes which were filled with tears

'hum kisi ko kuch nahi bataye ge'

"I have hurt her" he felt guilt and his own words took him back to past

"You know Mayank you have a serious problem, you don't care about others feeling, you just think about yourself" her words echoed in his mind and he felt suffocated, he closed his eyes and took deep breath

"No. I do care for other feelings" he screamed and was saying these words again and again but her words were started echoed in entire room

"Please trust me..i do care for others feeling"

"You don't care Mayank'you are selfish,your are just think about yourself"she was saying sarcastically point inning her finger at him

Her voice was getting louder with each passing moment and Mayank kept his both hands on his ears to stop her voice to entered in his ears

But now she started laughing at him

"You are selfish Mayank'you are selfish"she was laughing at him

"I am not selfish'I do care for others''."words slowly coming out from his mouth he bent down on his knees and closed his eyes, her voice now getting slow

He was drenched in sweat, drops of sweat dripping from his face, his face got pale and his hands were trembling finally her voice fade away as he heard someone twisted the knob of door and let the air and light came into the room

He hurriedly stood up,Nupur who was feeling hesitate and nervous to face him again took step inside and Mayank looked up,he felt a wave of fresh air and he took deep breath to inhaled it in him and after many years something click in his heart, something new.

Nupur who was just entered in room saw him standing there lost in his thoughts,he was sweating badly and somehow she noticed his hands too trembling in spite he tried to hide it from her,his shirt was wet with sweat and he was taking deep breath..she rushed towards him

"ap theek toh hain" she hesitantly asked him coming closed to him it was true she was hurt and angry with him too but after seeing his this condition she could not able to control her emotions.

"main theek hoon"he replied in soft yet low tone and she could feel weakness and helplessness in his voice she felt urge to wiped off his sweat and give him comfort. she did not expect from him to replied her in soft voice after whatever happened in last night, before entered in room she was expecting he would behaved with her rudely but now she was surprised at his tone and moreover surprised at his condition

She did not know what happened to him suddenly

"ap yahan baith jayen"taking his hand in her hand she made him sit on bed and started rubbing his hands as he was feeling shivered yet and Mayank just stared at that girl whom he shattered her dreams but she was caring him like he was very precious to her

"ap yahan sir rakhain"

She said placing two pillows at his back and made him laid on bed in comfort position while her hand was still in his hand,

"apni aankhain kuch dair ke liye band karain..ap accha mehsoos karain ge"she sat beside him she slowly rubbed her fingers on his eyes and forehead and Mayank closed his eyes, there was some magic in her fingers, magic is in her he corrected himself. He was feeling content

"ap ko pata hai..mere uncle kehte hain mere haathon main jado hai"she said innocently she herself forgot at that time whom he was talking, caring was the same person who had hurt her but she knew one thing he was her husband and she had to spend her life with him..

"ap ke uncle theek kehte hain"Mayank said with soft smile and Nupur felt shiver in her body due to his words, she blushed and looked at him his eyes were still closed while his face now seemed content and she could feel comfort on his face

She smiled to see him smiling again,she was slowly pressing her fingers over his forehead and when she felt his breath getting deep

'He was sleeping peacefully'

She took off her hand and after adjusting his pillow without disturbing his sleep she got up and then she realized how much she was sitting closed to him and how she held his hand in her hand..she blushed to think about that but somewhere in her heart she felt new ray of hope'

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"beta Mayank udh gaya"Shilpa asked Nupur as she steeped inside kitchen..

"nahi woh,,un ki tabiyat kuch theek nahi thi toh who aram ker rahain hain"she said hesitantly

"kya hua us se?"Shilpa asked in worried tone and Nupur hurriedly went closed to him and placed her hand on her shoulder

"maa who thora thak gaye the is liye aram kar rahain hain'ap pareshan methoon"she told her giving her assurance look and Shilpa cupped her face in her hands

"mujhe pata hai..ab mujhe pareshan hone ki zarrorat nahi ab Nupur aa gaye hai na"she said lovingly and kissed her on her forehead

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Mayank opened his eyes, whatever happened few hours ago again flashed in front of his eyes,he took deep breath and caressing his forehead he got up and sat on bed placing his head at the back of bed

He looked towards wall clock, it was 10, o clock he almost slept 2 hours he concluded after checking time, now he was feeling quite well,

" she has magic "he thought about Nupur and smiled appeared on his face

'how she cared him?how she gave him comfort'she indeed has magic..he thought feeling her soft fingers caressing his forehead..

"how she lessened my pain so easily and what I did with her?

"Ahem Ahem'can I come in"a voice came and Mayank looked at door .Samrat was standing there with mischevious smile on his face

Mayank smiled to see him

"I don't think you need any permission to come in my room"

"Mayank now its not only your room its bhabhi room to and I don't want to disturbed your private moment so I thought I should ask about it"he said naughtily and Mayank shook his head

"He can't change"

"so you were sleeping"Samrat said sitting beside him

"yeah..actually I could not'"Mayank could not complete his sentence when Samrat intruppted him

"I can understand" he said winking at him and received angry glared from Mayank

But Mayank too smiled at his teasing

"its not like that Samrat actually last night I .."Mayank paused a bit as he was feeling guilty due to his rude behavior especially after see her concern towards him

"what happened Mayank?are you fine"samrat asked placing his hand on his after noticing his worried face

"samrat actually last night I told her truth that I don't want to get married and because of maa I got married to her and."Mayank got up from bed and said taking step towards window..as he knew what would be after Samrat reaction after knowing what he did

"Mayank do you have an idea what you did?"Samrat said angrily shaking his shoulder

"I did not want her to live in false hopes"he said in stern tone

"That's why you have hurt her"Samrat said sarcastically facing him

"I know I did wrong..its not her fault its my fault but how could I forget''."he paused a bit and closed his eyes

"you have to forget Mayank..its better for you"Samrat said placing his hand on his shoulder while tried to control his anger as he knew Mayank's need time

"But how?...Sam.."he stopped as he saw her standing at door..

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here is next update ...plz do comments n press like tab if u liked it😳

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
🥳yyyaaayyy 🥳 me 1st

awesome update ya...😃😃
i loved it...😊😃😊
so now Mayank is smiling for Nupur...☺️☺️
n he thinks dat she has MAGIC...😳☺️😳
wow...i can really see d lil progress in der relationship...😉
awww Nupur is so caring...😊
i love my MayUr...😃
its awesome dear...👏👏👏
btw wht she heard standing at d door?????????😲😕
dat girl left Mayank coz she think he is selfish...😲
goddd its lil confusing...😕😕
bt i know u will clear everthing very soon...
love ya...🤗🤗🤗

ps: hello ji btw app bhul rahe hain ke apka ek aur ff bhi hain ""WILL LOVE U FOREVER"" jo apne bhttt din se update nhi kiya...😡😡
pata hain main kabse wait kar rahi hoon uska...😡😡
usse jaldi update karna warna...😈😈
u know main phir se tang karne a jaungi...🤣
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz for god sake plz tell the flash back i am thinking day n night😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was fantastic update
hmm its seems there was something bad happened in Mayank's past...wanted to know more about him.liked Mayur sense
continue soon

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