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awesome update dear but no update today why😭?
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PART 15

After completing that conversation, when she is just about to her way back to the temple, suddenly hears a voice from her back..."GEET'...!!... it sounds quite a familiar to her. She turns around & completely shocked. It's Dev, standing right in front of her site. Geet can't say anything; she doesn't even understand how to react in this situation. Within a fraction of sec Dev rushes at her & hugs her tightly without caring anything else. Geet looks so very awkward with his gesture; she tries to hold herself back from his embrace. Dev is in tears.

Dev: Geet , kahan chali gayee thi tum, maine kitna dhunda tumhko...pata hai tumhe'.

Geet gets surprised'...main chali gayee thi, yah aap chod gaye the mujhe'!!...yeh shadi maine todi thi yah aapne'.!!

Dev: Kaya!!! Dev looks thoroughly shocked...kaya bol rahi ho tum'..!!

Geet: Jo sach hai, wohi bol rahi hun'..aapne apnii Maa se nahi kaha tha hamara rista todne ke liye'.!!

Dev looks stunned ...Geet maine Mom se aisa kuch nahi kaha'...aur main aisa kyun kahungaa'...jissdin se mujhe iish bare mein pata chala hai, tab se lekar aaj tak maine tumhe dhundne ke liye naa jaane kaya kaya kiya. U.S se maine tumhe kitni baar phone karne ki koshish ki'...par tumse baat nahi ho payee...'wapas India aaya toh tumhare ghar wale tumhare baremein kuch kahne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi the...tum hi batayo main kaya karta ...'kahan dhundta tumhe Geet'.!!

Geet: Agar aapne yeh rista nahi toda toh apni Maa se mangni wali anguthi lautaneke liye kyun kaha tha aapne'!! ...hain'..!! jawab dijiye Dev'?

Dev: Anguthi'...Ohh my God'he checks out his ring-finger.

Geet mera yakeen karo, maine uush ring ko ghar mein hi choda tha , socha tha key itni important cheez hai agar gum ho gayee toh'...main kyun lautaneko kahungaa ushe'...plzz believe me Geet. He inches forward to Geet.

Dev: Geet, mujhe maaf kar do, mujhe tumhe yun akele chod ke jana hi nahi chahiye tha...'meri wajahse kitna kuch sahna padha tumhe'...par aab aur nahi, aab main aa gaya hun'...aur hamesha tumhare saath rahungaa.

...Nahi Dev'...aap galat soch rahe hain'...Geet interrupts.

...main aapse pyaar nahi karti, aur naa hi aapse shadi karna chahti hun'...sayed aap sach kah rahe hain , par aab woh sab baaton ke liye bahut der ho chukki hai'

Dev : Der ho chuki hai...!!

Geet: Hain Dev, main kisi aur se pyaar karti hun'...aur woh bhi mujhe apni jaan se bhi jayda pyaar karte hain, mere liye uunhe chodna naamumkin hai'...hum bahut jald shadi kar rahe hain...Dev looks stunned.

Dev: Par Geet, main bhi tumse pyaar karta hun naa...mera kaya kasoor hai, tum mujhe chod kar... he is about to say something more but Maan's mom comes there in.

Maan's mom: Chale Geet beta.

Geet walks away with her while Dev stands there dumbstruck.

Dev enters into his mansion in drunk condition, shouting by taking his Mom's name. His Mom comes there in, servants are also there.

Dev's Mom: Dev, yeh kaya kar rahe hain aap'...sab sun rahe hain, apne kamre mein chaliye'...she signals all the servants to leave from there.

Dev: Sun rahe hain toh sune'...sabko pata chale key aap kitni badi dagabaaz aurat hai'...logon ko dhoka dena aapki aadat hai '.

Dev's Mom: Dev, jawan sambhal kar baat kijiye, aap apne hosh mein nahi hai '..she gets really angry.

Dev: Nahi, hosh mein toh main aab aaya hun'...mujhe laga tha Dad ke jane ke baad aap badal chuki hongii, apni galti ka paschataap kar chuki hongi , par nahi'...main galat tha'...naa hi kabhi aap badal sakhti hain, aur naa hi aapke galat iirade'

Dev's Mom: Humne aisa bhi kaya kar diya hai , key aap hum par aise bebuniyaad iilzaam laga rahe hain'...aise humein beizzat kar rahe hain'.?

Dev: Bebuniyaad iilzaam'!!!! Ha ha ha ha ha'..Dev starts laughing like a crazy man.

''..aapne kuch nahi kiya hai naa''...kaya aap Geet ke ghar nahi gayee uunshe yeh kahne key liye key maine yeh shadi tod di hai...kaya aapne Geet ko woh engagement ring wapas nahi kar di...boliye'...kuch jawab hai aapke paas'..he is shouting like an insane.

Dev's Mom: Humne jo kuch bhi kiya aaki bhalayee ke liye hi kiya'.

Dev: Meri bhalayee'!! '.huh'..kissne yeh haqk diya hai aapko'...hain'?? maine aapse pahle bhi kaha tha naa key meri personal life mein interfere karne ki kosish mat kijiye.

Dev's Mom: Mujhe Mittal khandan ki izzat ki fikr thi'...iishi liye maine'.

Dev: Mittal khandan ki izzat...!!!..ha ha ha...woh toh ushidin chali gayee thi, jisdin Dad ne meri Maa ko chod kar aapse shadi ki'...ushdin aapne mujhse mere Dad, mera parivaar china tha, aur aaj mera pyaar'...meri khusi kabhi aapse bardast nahi hoti hai naa'...Mrs. Mittal'!!! he has got fire in his eyes.

Dev's Mom: Aab aap humari insult kar rahe hain Dev'.

Dev: Maine abhi tak toh kuch nahi kiya tha'... aab karungaa...'bahut sah liya maine'...aab sahne ki bari aapki hogi'...main aapko aisa sabak sikhayunga, key aap zindegi bhar yaad rakhengii'.

Dev's Mom: Hun par baras ne ke wajaye aapko uush ladke se baat karni chahiye thi, jisski wajahse Geet aapko chod ke chali gayee'...yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai key yeh sab kuch ek naatak tha aapko raste se hatane ke liye'...ho sakta hai uush ladke ke saath Geet ka pahle se hi kuch...Dev gives her a stern look.

aisa nahi ho sakta...aap ko kaya lagta hai, aisi baaton se main aapke bahkave mein aa jaayungaa'..!!

Dev's Mom: Thik hai, hamari baat mat suniye'...par uushke ghar walo ki baat toh maanenge naa aap...!! usshka bhai Brij, uushne khud humse yeh baat kahi'...warna aap hi sochiye kyun Geet ka pura parivaar Geet se iitni nafrat karta hai'...kyun uushka woh bhai Brij ne khud uushe dhakke maar ke ghar se nikaal diya'...woh ladki agar aapki zindegi mein aa jati toh siwaye mushibato ke aur kuch nahi laati.

Dev: Mujhe aapse Geet ke bare mein koi raye nahi leni hai'...jo bhi karna hai aab main karungaa...main bhi dekhta hun kaun mujhse meri Geet ko chinta hai'...Dev departs from there. His Mom is still there standing by, a cruel smile appears on her face.

Geet comes in Arohi's place. She tells her everything about her meeting with Dev in the temple.

Arohi: Tuhne jo bhi kiya bahut achha kiya Geet'...akhir tujhe bhi haqk hai apni zindegi jeene ka'.

Geet: Hain par Arohi'..mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai'...ek taraf woh insaan hai jisshne mere liye apni zindegi daaon pe laga di, aur ek taraf yeh jishke saath meri mangni huyee thi...'jisska hamesha saath deneka maine wada kiya tha'...main ek ajeeb kashmakash mein fass gayee huin Arohi'...jo kuch bhi huya uushmein naa toh mera koi kasoor tha, aur naa hi iindonoka'...par ab mere ek faisle se hum teen o ki zindegi badal jaayegi...'main naa hi Maan ko chod sakti hun, aur naa hi Dev ko chot pahunchana chahti. Mujhe Dev ka ateet pata hai'...uushke sare kareebee uushe dhoka deke chale gaye...aab main bhi uushi list mein saamil ho jaayungii'..main kaya karun Arohi...'main kaya karun'...she covers up her face with her hand.

Arohi: Yeh waqt ka faisla hai Geet, iishmein hum kuch nahi kar sakte'...yeh kismat ki hi baat thi key tuh Maan se mili'...aur sayed kismat ko bhi yehi manjur hai key tum dono ek ho jayo. Dev ke liye mujhe bhi bura lag raha hai, jo kuch bhi huya uushmein sayed uushki koi galti nahi thi'...par Geet ,faisla toh tujhe lena hi padhega naa'...tuhne iiish bare mein Maan se baat ki'?

Geet nods her head for a 'NO'.

Arohi: Tujhe sabse pahle uusse baat karni chahiye.

Geet : Pata nahi Maan kaise react karenge...'mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Arohi, aisa lag raha hai kuch bahut bura hone wala hai.

Arohi: Kuch nahi hoga'...yeh sab tera waham hai, tuh bas Maan se baat kar, sab thik ho jaayegaa...'tuh kahe toh main Sammy ko bolun Maan se baat karne ke liye'

Geet: Nahi Arohi, yeh baat toh mujhe hi kahni padhegi Maan se, par abhi nahi, Maan ka selection ho jane de, abhi agar yeh sab pata chala, maloom nahi uune kaisa lagega.

Few days gone. The charity match goes very well for Maan, he has scored a half-century there with so many lofted 4s & 6s. The board-member was very much impressed by his performance. So now Maan is going to play for Delhi in this coming RANJY Trophy tournament. Geet is so happy for Maan. Today she is taking a fast for Maan , for his well-being , success & happiness. So far, she is not able to talk to Maan about Dev & her meeting in the tample. It's about 7 p.m in the evening. Geet went to the temple with Maan's mom for doing the Puja & breaking the fast. Samir comes there in Maan's house to meet him. Both are having good time but Maan repents as he missed that 100 on that match.

Samir: Chod na yaar, selection toh ho gaya naa'...next match mein 100 kaya 200 maar lena...Maan weakly smiles'...aur waise bhi jo bhi banda apne debut match mein century maarta hai naa'...ushki halat baad mein kharab ho hi jaata hai'..

Maan: Yeh statistics kahan se utha laya tuh'..?

Samir: Yeh sach hai boss...ek min ruk,tujhe main net mein search karke batata hun'..he starts searching the websites on his mobile phone'..Maan's eyes get stuck on to that mobile phone.

Maan : Ek min , ek min'...yeh naya phone kab liya tuhne'pahle toh nahi dekha tha'!!

Samir: Aare '...yeh toh woh''

'..dikha ,dikha'..Maan has snatched that phone from his hand'...baapre, badi mahengii lagti hai'.

Samir: Pata hai, iishmein kitne sare features hai, ek button dabane se sabkuch record hona suru ho jata hai'., aur yeh dekh, iishka aise angel bhi badal ke video shoot kar sakte hain'.yeh dekh'..he flips the handset, pushes a button on the phone for video recording, & put it down on the table a little far away from them'..dekhna itni durr se bhi kitnaa saaf picture aayegaa, yeh khud ba khud zoom in karke shot le leta hai, iishmein auto-zoom hai, aur sound clarity bhi iitni achhi hai key...

...bahut achha hai yaar'.. Maan stops him midway. ...kitne mein liya'?

Samir: Mujhe nahi pata'...mujhe toh gift mili hai'

Maan : Gift'!! Maan's eyes get popped up'...tujhe kisne iitna mahenga gift diya '!!

Samir : Arohi ne diya hai ...'Valentine's day ka gift hai''.. He smiles shyly.

Maan : Usshne diya aur tuhne le liya'.!!! aur kaisa Valentine , yeh November chal raha hai , aur Valentine's day February mein aata hai'.!!

Samir : Are , yeh aanewale Valentine's ke liye nahi , sare aa chuke Valentine's ke liye hai, jab hum saath saath nahi the'

Maan : Samir'...tuh bhi naa'..ladke gift lete nahi , dete hain'

Samir: Aare Waah''...janab ko jab Tie mili thi , tab toh kuch nahi kaha, sara rule mere liye banake rakhha hai ...'.hai naa'.!!!

Maan : Samir...he is trying to say something while gets interrupted by a knock on the door...dekh toh kaun aaya'...he ordered Samir, as he himself is sitting on the chair wearing a shawl all around him and Samir is standing pretty close nearby the door side.

Samir: Kitna kaam karwata hai yaar tuh merese...'he opens the door, its Dev standing outside. Samir looks quite surprised as he can't recognize Dev.

Dev: Kaya yeh Mr. Maan ka ghar hai?

Samir : Jii hain'...par aap?

Dev: Mujhe uunshe kuch kaam hai.

...hmmm, lagta hai media wale hain...team mein abhi tak gussa nahi key yehlog piche padh gaye'...Maan, teri toh nikal padhi'...Samir murmurs.

Dev: Ji, kuch kaha aapne?

Samir: Nahi, kuch nahi'...aayiye'.andar aayiye naa'...

Dev enters into Maan's room & greets him'..Maan also greets him back by saying 'a hello', avoiding hand-shake.

Dev: Hii...'myself Dev, Dev Mittal'...Maan gets a little bit surprised after hearing the name.

Dev: Mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baatein karni hai'..giving a weird look to Samir.

Samir: Hain hain'..main chalta hun'..aap dono baithke baatein kijiye'...bye Maan'...Samir departs from there.

Samir is almost half-way to his home, suddenly he realizes that he has missed his mobile phone to Maan's room.

'Ohh God'...agar Arohi ka call aa gaya toh, nahi nahi'...babaji , badi mushibaat ho jaayegii''...woh Maan , saitaani mein expert hai'...Samir murmurs. Then he decides to go back there again & collect the phone. He is just about to enter into Maan's house, heard a huge noise of quarrelling both by Maan & an other person, that must be Dev, & then suddenly there is a sound of a gun shot. He rushes into that room, from where that sound is coming out & he has found a terrible scenario there.

PRECAPE: ANOTHER UNCANNY AGAIN !!!!! 😕

PART -14

PART-16

Guys, who are my FF-readers out here, i have a request to u all, plzzz do join my page in FACEBOOK, its We Love U Samir Sharma aka Sammy Sir.

Its not about DEV, its only about SAMIR SHARMA.
SAMIR Sir himself has joined us...plzz do join & make me happy & Samir sir as well😊😛


HERE IS THE LINK OF THE PAGE, PLZZ DO JOIN US GUYS...I NEED UR SUPPORT

Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
u were telling that dev is good in this FF now what he has come to maan's house to kill him and create a MU between maaneet dev can never be saint he has to be devil be he is a devil irrespective of what has happened in his past just want geet plz it's a request dont separate maaneet and send geet with devil and dont make geet to have any sympathy towards devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
u were telling that dev is good in this FF now what he has come to maan's house to kill him and create a MU between maaneet dev can never be saint he has to be devil be he is a devil irrespective of what has happened in his past just want geet plz it's a request dont separate maaneet and send geet with devil and dont make geet to have any sympathy towards devil

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just wait & watch dear...by the way its a MAANEET FF, so...i guess u get the hint...right ...i cant disclose much more now, coz then u can' t enjoy it farther 😊 & plzz join there in my page at that link given there, its not a DEV"s fan Page, but its all about SAMIR SHARMA.
Edited by 810Kankana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 810Kankana


just wait & watch dear...by the way its a MAANEET FF, so...i guess u get the hint...right ...i cant disclose much more now, coz then u can' t enjoy it farther 😊 & plzz join there in my page at that link given there, its not a DEV"s fan Page, but its all about SAMIR SHARMA.


yes dear i also adore samir sir a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


yes dear i also adore samir sir a lot


Thanks for joining , i appreciate that, & Samir sir will be very happy 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...👍🏼👍🏼

im happy fr maan...he will b playing fr delhi in ranji...three cheers fr maan...hip hip hurray...👏👏👏👏

hum soch rahe the ki humarein maan aur geet k zindagi mein khushiyaan zaada der tak kyun nehi raheti ?...ek khatam toh doosra ajate hai...im really pissed off...😡😡😡😡

abb ya naya kya natak hai dev ka...phirse maan n geet k veech mein agaya...pata nehi dev sach bol raha hai kya nehi?...usse trust karne ka mann toh hota hai...magar poora nehi hota...

aur yeah geet...why she is in dilemma...ussne maan k liye sab kuch chodke ayi hai...abb decision lene mein problm kyun ho rahi hai usko...dev is her past nw...wht promises she made fr dev is now past...so she should forget it...maan her present n she should accept it...😲😲😲😲

aur ek naya twist...kisko laga goli...humarein dil k dhadkan rook gaye...hey GOD plz dont do anything bad to my maan...plz...
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thank u for d pm kana...luv u...❤️🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
omg i didnt expect this to happen...
i hope geet will b with maan in all his ups and downs and she wont lose his trust on him...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar tu to shock de deke marwa hi dalega mujhe... update was awsmmm...Loved that Geet cleared everything to Dev... but precap is horrible ... hope both is saved ... pata nahi q abhi bhi mujhe lag raha hai dev ne goli nahi but but its his mom... whatever Maan save rahe bass...

btw it was an awsmmm update... n eagerly waiting for d next
Edited by sayaneegupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

yaar tu to shock de deke marwa hi dalega mujhe... update was awsmmm...Loved that Geet cleared everything to Dev... but precap is horrible ... hope both is saved ... pata nahi q abhi bhi mujhe lag raha hai dev ne goli nahi but but its his mom... whatever Maan save rahe bass...


waise me comment dene wali nahi thi... I was angry on u... u didnt pm me... huh... but I cudnt stop myself as it was an awsm update



kaya bolti hai, PM nahi kiya...maine sab ko PM ki hai, thik se dekh hogi

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