Translucence - Finished. - Page 98

haha Satya seems cute as a button :-)

Edited my 2 dimes on pg 143.😃

should i say they are adorable...or can that creep out emily

okay i am really having this creepy feeling the meds are really messing with your brains!! OH EMM GEE first the chapter started out with a similar interaction like Maaneet although I knew it would be too early to conclude anything... i mean its Sookie what more to be said... anyways. back to the "interlude" as you wanna call it. it started out with the same situ where Maan comes home to meet Geet to spend time. Although Satya and Emily are on a much different platform than Maaneet ( I say this due to many reasons. One being Satya and Emily share a somewhat simple relationship as compared to Maan n Geet actually scratch that not necessarily simple but a more understanding one (eh i cant say that either but u get the point??)) Ah wait i got it Satya Emily's relation is more of open they say what they want to and let the other person know of each other's feelings while Maan hmm let's not get there...

Satily (heheh) are officially my favourite couple.

awesome upd...

Your writing is very much impressive and I love this story. I have started my own fan-fic "Remember Me". Plzzz do read it and let me know how is it. Continue soon. The link of my fanfic is

Sookie, are you sure that you wrote this? Cause it made
me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Normally your updates don't make me feel warm and fuzzy. lol But seriously, I loved the update. Haha Maan's plan failed, but you gotta love him. Thans for the update, Sookie!