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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

i love chemistry among maan-emily-satya 🤗

the ease with which they talk to each other its awesome 👏

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

I am around Chapter 12 right now...my damned classes!!

Something is stuck in my mind ever since Chapter 4. Your Maan and Geet remind me of Tony Stark and Pepper Potts (movie-verse)...I don't know how it goes forward from Chapter 12 onwards...but I am loving it so far!!

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

Wonderful update...loved it...
waiting for the next...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

part 25
well thats nice Maan is getting somewhere in his achievements though they are like small but still getting his way...
liked the Satya Emily scene...
haye Maan is missing his time with Geet...
what is his mom doing here?
hope Geet arrives at the moment...
dunno how Maan is gonna take this this time...
cont soon dear...

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

thanks 4 the pm...it was a good one...ohhh nooo y his mother is here?may be it will give some piece to maan...finger crossed...no geet in update...😔...

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#926

OMG. I'm only on the 5th chapter at the moment, but I just peeked at the most recent comments, and Satya and Emily are here?! NO WAY! If I'm not wrong, they're from my favorite FF of yours - the mystery one. Damn woman, I literally failed all my assignments because all I did was read your FF instead of doing work! It was goood.

Anywhos, going to back to reading. Loving it so far!

I like that Maan likes Maggi. I like Maggi too! =D Hehe :P

Edit: Satya and Emily are boyfriend-girlfriend?! (Wow, I feel so childish saying that - boyfriend-girlfriend xD) HAHA WOW! I loooveee Emily! haha

Uuuggghh Maaan is sooo messed up in the head. so messed up. blahh. :P

*Goes back to reading :D*

Edit 2: *notes to self* - Maan is a freaking genius! Well at least, in the business sense. :P

"He isn't my boyfriend Mitalee," said Geet. "We aren't together." She said ignoring rest of Mitalee's declaration since it wasn't something new.

"He is even bigger idiot than I thought he was," Mitalee replied in disbelief.

Geet didn't know how to respond to that.

Hah. I actually laughed at Mitalee's line here. The ONLY time I will ever agree with Mitalee! Lol xD

Lord woman, how do you come up with all this?! Everything is so authentic, and seems so real and just os;AHJSGFH i'm just really jealous of your writing skills, your amazing brain that comes up these brilliantly twisted ideas, and how much you know about everything! MIND-BLOWING.

Oh, I'm almost catching up with all the chapters </3. I like it when I have many many chapters to go, so I won't need to stress about what's going to happen next. Anywhos, I'm going to stop my bakwaasss right now :P

Yay, now to Edit 3: :D I figured that I LOVE it when Maan and Geet are happy, because they make me happy! Hehe. :P

Snehaaa

Edited by -Aicha- - 13 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Loved it!
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#928

Nice part.

Thanks for the pm.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#929

I confess.. some of that money stuff goes right over my head. Haha.. What is maan's mom doing there? Poor Maan, can't even find time for his not-girlfriend.. Thanks for the update, Sookie!