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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#901

STUPENDO FANTABULOUSLY FANTASTICAl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I had reread and reread and read to confirm to assure myself that what I was reading is not an illusion of my mind.

I hush my self shut...forget I said that...I mean i want to scream and tell everyone what you have done...its a record break Sookie...i'm sure you know that already...but then don't want to zinx it right?

Hope it continues where it was left or else knowing you...we might get a flash back or something in next chapter or later...Do continue plz where you stopped..

Or baggers cant be choosers...

Dime: Memsaab kuch milega?😔

Sooks: Fumbling in her purse and takes out 1 rupee...extends to Dime.😳

Dime: Makes a face in disgust upon seeing a rupee...and does not accept it.😲

Sooks: Raised a brow, not liking the attitude of Dime.😡

Dime: Kiya memsaab...ek rupaiya? Is mai to chai bhi nahi milega.😒

Sooks: She pulls her hand back and begun to put it away.😒

Dime: Accha chalega... shukriya memsaab...😳

Sooks: 😈

The moral of the story...I should be contain with what I get from Sooks no further more request...this is the most amazing update.

Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: ivre

hehe she must be drunk. Or feeling really generous. I don't think any of her works include these famous 3 words.

I beg to differ. You guys seem to forget that I have been here writing for more than two years and I mostly wrote lighter stuff back then! 😆 😆 😆

The supposed phamous three words - already written... meh ! 😆

The world has turned and left me here

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#903

R!!

New Reader says Hi!! New Reader says this is bloody fantastic⭐️. New Reader requests you to add her to your PM list if you do have one. :)

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#904

Moi simply loves idyllic stuff like that - and realisation of that oft mentioned turning point called "love"😳

Here it struck just like a plainative thought -not just some "eureka" discovery 'n' thats whats so beautiful😃

For a change moi likes Maan being made fun of and the so far unresponsive Maya making a response -while we already have a very nice-nice bonding of potential jeeja-saali 😛

I thought Tara would poke a fast one at Geet - but she knew some of her sis -she didn't ignore her or anything

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#905

Hola! :)

Sookie, I've read your stories, and I've LOVED them. I just came across this one, and didn't want to read it, just because I KNEW I'd be addicted and obsessed - but then I did make that mistake (hehe more like, ) of reading it, and now, I'm hoooked. I just read the first chapter, and I'm happeeeh that I have many more to goo! Me loves :)

I'm adding you as a friend so that I can get PMs from you when you write new stuff, and so that I can totallly fail at school because "I'm too busy reading Sookie's Fanfictions!" Hehe :P

Anyways, will come back to this - to commenttt and likeee and yeah :)

Loving it so far! :)

-Sneha

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#906

Was I the only one cringing when he felt he was in love with her? Dude, your life is so messed up, your family is messed up, your businesses are all in a mess, in fact your total life is a huge mess right now; could you have waited a little to get sorted out instead of dragging her in this mess? Ah the selfishness of those in love. Geet is not going to have an easy time with this guy, he is still a work in progress.I love both of these characters a lot and am enjoying their journeys. Coming back to this update, I loved Maan getting the treatment from maya and tara; also how Geet rejected all his options. Seriously who shows up at 7am on Sunday morning...loved how they made lunch together. They are like an old married couple in so many ways. Acceptance of each other fully is an ideal for so many and they already have that.

Thanks for the update.

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#907

pls add me in ur pm list...it is really good...all r in mess...i just love emily and satya...maan is really confusing...i hated him when he said he like vaidhehi...i felt he stabbed geet's heart with knife...maan's past is painful...geet is my sweetheart in this ff.

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#908

updated comment on page 129.

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#909

I loved the latest update! It brought a sort of tranquility with it...with what all that business and cut throat competition and all! :D

The part about the doctor-patient fantasy was funny 😆

I also adored the way the realization that he loves her, was brought on. It was so simple and completely perfect for them <3

Fabulous work, I really admire you for the way you write! :)

xoxo

Aanya

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#910

part 24
of all the updates i just loved this one dear...
very soothing and also very lovely...
right from the first word to the last...
good finally Maan realized his feelings for Geet...
hope he sticks to this, this time forever...
cont soon dear...

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