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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Fantastic Update!!

I liked How Geet showed Maan that he needs to fix things.. Also, Emily is gonna try to help Maan.

Maan is so drowned in his life that he doesn't see anything else other than himself.. He really needs to fix that..

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krati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

it ws sweet... i cn imagine maan's cute face while talking to geet nd even more cuter thn apologizing emily... sweet cute update

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-pixie-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

This update just made me sad...it was heartbreak through and through...

Also to Mitali and everyone else who is berating Maan- Isn't succeeding in business as much a selfish reason as is avenging past wrongs? Who can judge what is right and what is wrong...Different people are driven differently and sometimes it does take an external push to identify the source of your drive and channel it more effectively!

Very well written, Sooks!

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

those lines sounded cool in my head

really nice

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imshveta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

I dont know what to say. Actually I think Maan is behaving more like a spoilt brat all the time. I don't find him doing any good at all so far. And I am not talking about Geet only. In the business front too.

I am taking this opportunity to comment on the previous part too. Was a bit busy yesterday.
I am still surprised how easily I agree with Mitalee. Maan is surely a lucky bas****. And I doubt if he knows that. One can't actually blame Mitalee and Vikram for feeling so much resentment towards Maan.

What happens next ????

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Fantastic update...

thanx for pm

Maan has to understand the true meaning of relations...to keep those people intact who thinks good for u...who want to be with u in any thick and thin

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: -pixie-
This update just made me sad...it was heartbreak through and through...

Also to Mitali and everyone else who is berating Maan- Isn't succeeding in business as much a selfish reason as is avenging past wrongs? Who can judge what is right and what is wrong...Different people are driven differently and sometimes it does take an external push to identify the source of your drive and channel it more effectively!

Very well written, Sooks!

Thats exactly what Pixie.. it isnt so much about who is in the right or wrong.. or that a little vulnerability makes Mitali likable(hell no!) .. what is tragic about Maan and disappoints is- hes so capable, and young , and has resources at his disposal, yet he chose to squander away his intellect, his time, everything..

Mitali , Geet, etc all are cognizant of the consequences of their choices in life, tough or painful doesn't matter, .. they are ready to bear its responsibility.

But Hes a man of 28 (isnt he?).. There is no way we should be feeling sorry for him at all ! and for that, He needs to stop feeling sorry for himself, and when that happens, failures or successes nothing will faze him as a man(as they should not).. at least not enough to make him give up.

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Fantastic update...
I really respect Emily because she has the guts to tell the truth right on the face...maan needs time to figure out his problem... ...eagerly waiting for the next part to know...

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

What is most interesting about Mitalee infact , is that the insight into her vulnerability tells us how negative/gray characters come about justifying their choices , and of course how so many men/women come to making wrong decisions in normal life.

Refreshing revelation of the 'more relatable ' side of a dark character.

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago