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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

awesome Sookie !..

hope things will be better between Maan n Emily..

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

i just loved it !!!

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Amazing update! I honestly loved it! Maan-Emily were cute :)

And I love the way Geet doesn't mince her words! :D

xoxo

Aanya

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

jeez how I loved this update! Thank God for these straight talking women.. The man had been self indulging for too long, and self pitying and looking for instant gratification.. (even in the last when he hopes Emilys solution works and hes a new 'him' in a week😆.. boy it did! in 30 seconds😆 )

wonder though how they keep their patience with him.. Damn I love how tight Geet and Emily are😆

You think they should together , one day, wash Maan off his lofty ideas thoroughly, their style😉. ?

Man, the smart quips and smirks will vanish so fast, he'd wear school uniform around these two, and trim his nails every week, and use a 'kerchief to wipe his nose..

😕

what am i saying ! ! sorry.. lots of cough syrup did me in..

update soon sooks!

Edited by ninand - 13 years ago

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Loved it 👍🏼

Eagerly waiting for the next ...😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

part 20
Maan is seriously an idiot...
hope things get better between him and Emily...
Geet is balancing everything...
making Maan to realize his mistakes...
cont soon dear...

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

awsome update luvd it

hope fings get sorted between emily n maan

plzz cont soon x

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Things that are damaged between two people don't fix that easily Maan. When one hurts another there is a whole process of coming in terms with it, dealing with it and then healing. Whatever happened between us cannot be forgotten but can be overcome. We both have to work towards overcoming it.

sometimes I read your updates over and over for gems such as this. needless to say, loved the update and as always, waiting for more. BTW is it true that authors love to get their words quoted to them, or do they feel slighted if only a certain part gets quoted and not all of it?

Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Damage between two people don't fix that easily how true such quote is...but some don't at all. Hope Maan is lucky enough to have these women overcome.

At least they talk with each other, and accept the fact and act on it.

Some don't even get the chance to do so or won't do it even though they know it.

Great one.

Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago