The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

awesome...

n by that i mean ur rant b4 the update...🤣

i seriously have to think abt watching force now...🤔😆

n now abt the update...b4 i forget...

lovely...

i wish geet chooses death coz i want to c maan's reaction...😃😛

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Hmmm what a... lovly part... full of violence, exactly the way i love them 😈

After two "average" parts (as i told u on my last comment, average compared to ur usual ones ;) ) This one was one of ur best !

Loved it ! Geet thinkin that he must be far away while all this time he was few meters away...😆 then witnessing such violence poor soul... too bad geet u will ultimatly for for this cold murderer, but if u don't want him i will be MORE than pleased to take him 😈 ( tauba tauba.. girl ur maan is drivin me crazy...) Apart from me drooling over this murderer, this part is import for the story, we can expect something big, or at least lots of twits with this turn of event...

Now i would love to see the incarceration... but one thing i would love to see geet in dilema, as u shown us in this part, she is totally confused n scared as of now, so here i would love to hear geet say she wants death... then maan beung trapped on his turn coz he don't want to kill her... or at least i want u to give us a long discussion over this decision, where maan will scare geet saying if she chooses incarceration she will have to face lots of things...😈

Anyway these were just few ideas..it's up to u, and bdw thx for this quick updt ( compared to last one :p )

Love ya ! ❤️

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609931

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Geet turned 007, I hope she had a gorge pair of RayBans on her to complete the look
OMG Maan burned poor DeSouza, I accidentally burnt myself with an incense stick on my hand & thought I was going to die. I feel for DeSouza poor baby :(
Make Maan wear John Abraham style shorts while he walks out of his pool, I beg you!
Update sooonnn :)

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

loved the update dear...😊 lets c what she ll choose...

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

update soon i want to see what geet choose death or life ...geet should say death because i know maan can never kill her and as well as he think that geet is a brave girl ...

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

ohh i just loved it!..

i dont know what everyone thinks abt Maan in gangsters shoes... bt i m thoroughly njoying this Gangster Maan. 😍

pls update soon...

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Fantasies
ohh i just loved it!..
i dont know what everyone thinks abt Maan in gangsters shoes... bt i m thoroughly njoying this Gangster Maan. 😍
pls update soon...

Me too...he is so HOT!!!😳

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

OMG OMG...I srsly get dumbfounded whenever I read ur updates...but 2 b vry honest I guess this is the 1st time I was not even SMILING readin ur udates...I had a straight serious face all the while (which is very rare 😆)

Ok comin 2 the update...voila...at 1st I was a bit disturbed,then I was ok with it.This is bcoz whenever i read a story,I make it a point 2 think 4m the perspective of the characters,even if they r fictional...n that's wat I did here.

Well...even the Maan in my story is kinda similar...it's just that his oh-so-innocent wifey doesn't have a clue 😕...till now

I think this was 1 of the BEST update till now👏

Update...whenever u feel like (coz I can't tell u 2 update fast as I too take weeks 2 update)

Love

Shreya

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Samira...I love ur FF...this is awesome dear...

this update is completely opposite of earlier chapters...they had fun mixed but this chapter just opposite...Maan's evil side is really dangerous...now what Geet will choose...
Geet should choose death...let us see how Maan will react...but I don't think Geet will choose it...

thanx for pm

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soma kazmi

@somakazmi

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#350

very nice update...👏
looks like Maan try to keep himself busy to stay away from Geet...😲
Geet sneaking around...😆
Geet missing Maan...😳
Maan looking hot with tattoos and all...☺️
Maan giving her choice... die or live with him forever...😃
Guess geet will say that she will die rather to give him wake up call...😳
update soon n tnx ton 4 pm... 🤗

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