The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

FANTASTIC UPDATE!!!!!

OMG this maan scared the eff out of me =| LOOOL

what is geet gonna choose?

PLEASEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@Oblivion007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

Amazing part!simply fantabulous!!loved the thrill associated with the update!can't jst wait for the next part,as u've finished it at such a cliffhanger:(not fair!
Eagerly and pleadingly waiting for the next part,hoping over hope that u'll be able to post the next part a little early!!

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Man, what a chapter! I kind of really, really want her to say death just to throw the cocky swine off.

But which girl is shameless enough to not be turned off by Maan even now? Yup, this one right here. *Bows head in shame*

I would say 'Poor Mr Desouza' except the creep shouldn't be selling drugs in the first place so no sympathy for him.

Hmm, wonder how long Geet will stick to her vow of hairy-ness? Keep us posted! Haha

Fabulous update, as always :)

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nehaagarwalv

@nehaagarwalv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

😆Loved it!!!!!

The updates are superb.Geet, stole the keys from the servant and is determined to find out about Maan's past as to y he is a criminal 😆 Her usual occupation is Stalking & meddling.😆Ofcourse Maan is a criminal/ganster this is what he do. Kills people and he have fallen for Geet 😆. Ofcourse he wants geet forever in his house😳 and she is all scared now.

I am sure in the next part Geet(-->U😉) is gonna give a very witty answer to Maan,which would make us laugh and laugh🤣 & for which i would waiting eagerly. Make it soon!!!

U really really write well, and i njoy reading it..😊

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Rocking part...
Superb...

Geet always lands up in problems...or should i say it her destiny to be their...with Maan...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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cloudflower

@cloudflower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

awesome update dear , you rocked again 👏

geet sneaked out to find about her gangster 😲

oh man she was an amazing detective 😆 * james bond tune playing in the background * 😆

first she stole keys , examined upper floors and then went to ground floor 😲

poor Mr desouza and alas geet saw the new side of maan , the rude gangster 😕

waiting to know geet's decision about her punishment 🤔

thanks for the pm and please continue soon

btw rumours said that bips and john broke up recently , i think you should reconsider your plan 😉

well their breaking up and patch up is a something which can't be understand by human brain 😆

oh yay hope your fascination over john in a beanie wasn't the reason for giving a beanie to maan 😉😆

Edited by udeshi91 - 13 years ago

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

dear God did you seriously end there 😡 i want maan to plant a kiss on her ☺️ in the water, is that possible 😃thanks you for the PM and hoping to see another one soon 😉