The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

😲First of alll .. LMAO you and your fantasies of John Abraham.. honestly girl choose your pick .. are you Mrs. Phurana or Rampal or Abraham .. cuz you're always switching men .. Chi Chi Chi Babaji 🤣

And don't you DARE say that you have competition because you think Bipasha looks better -- EWWW! You've got to be the most gorgeous girl on the planet who has NATURAL beauty compared to someone who probably hits her cosmetic department thrice a week .. I mean come on...

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Well you thought right .. I am honestly turned off by Maan .. what a JERK! What an animal!! 😡 ... Like Geet even I am dying to know why he's turned into such a ruthless monster ..he just can't be human .. no freaking way.

He has a spazz attack seeing Geet climbing a pole and then goes onto to dismantle it from outside the house GOD knows why .. shows his weak side and then BAM goes missing again ..Is this corridor where he was for the first time he went away for a long time? Gosh he was still in the same house .. just in some creep-tastic corridor with a kajillion rooms .. what is with the architecture of the house .. could creep the hell out of anyone .. idk how Geet braved herself to do that but well she did ..

But what she had to witness was so brutal .. I've seen this happen in sooo many movies but it still seemed so much more impactful with the way you told the story .. and HOMGGG he has a tattoo 😲 .. I wonder what the tattoo is about .. I wanna know! 😆

But that is NOT how you treat a human being dammit! What was that !? Gosh he has the biggest ego in the world .. expects all men to be just like him ..all ruthless and devoid of emotions huh .. pfftt .. seriously a man is ALLOWED to show his weak side especially in such I'm-about-to-pee-my-pants circumstances!! If he can't take it from a man I wonder how he is able to take it from Geet ... good thing she rarely cries in his presence or else who knows what he would've done to her by now 😳

I think Geet proved she was different from the beginning .. the fact that she braved through two bullets and still didn't complain much says a lot .. I'm guessing he was partly impressed that she didn't cry her heart out like he thinks any normal girl would end up doing .. naaa Geet Handa is different 😎

But still .. what inhumane behaviour .. OWWW man burning a cigarette ... shiii ... that was horrifying .. and then I thought we were about to witness another cold-hearted murder but THANKYOU Geet for interrupting!! 👍🏼

Hayee I thought she was going to escape but this man is like the master of stalkers .. I knew she was going to fall into the pool .. it was destined .. but I thought she was going to not know how to swim or something .. but she did .. he still went in .. one minute ruthless .. next minute cares about a girl .. he could've just let her slip .. but the fact that he's affected by her is proven with him jumping into the pool ..

But his little ultimatum is disgusting!! Death or incarceration!!?!? I'm horrified at your use of words Sammy because I have read Incarcerated .. and that left major scars in my brain .. so idk what poor Geet is about to choose .. let's see how she challenges him .. but seriously she might as well choose death because being incarcerated in his home is probably equivalent to the other option! Don't know how much he will torture her for knowing and spying on his dealings .. I am praying for her safety!

Amazing update Sammy! Love ya 🤗 ❤️

Z

Originally posted by: jazz07_dh

it is the third time I'm typing this comment...

Yes you r right!!! For a minute... For one WHOLE minute... I was horrified by maan!!! I was scared... You might not believe me, but I had goose bumps in that scene...

I would not blame geet if she tries to run away from him... I would understand if she even begs him to let her go..that she won't open her mouth ever.. But I know he won't let her go... OMG what has her little curiosity landed herself into!!!

And u r sooo mean u stopped at such a worse cliff hanger... Now u better update soon...

Thx for the pm

PS: you might have an idea from my comment that how much I get engrossed into ur ff... If not, then let me tell u, that I get so engross in it, that I can seriously feel every emotion in me... I know I'm crazy right???

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

By my standards I do believe this update was quite fast. I mean I usually write between 2 weeks. This was actually only a week! 🤣 The chapter was quite long, more than a 1000 words to be precise. It's just that your so in love with me and my writing, that anything would seem short to you.

You do realize that if your thinking that your 3am threats of standing outside my window is going to work - then your absolutely correct. I'm petrified 😳

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

I have worst scenarios coming up. But I'm afraid readers are going to end up hating him! Oh well, I'm still going to do it !! 😆

And I know his single. But looking upon his past history of girlfriends, they are too pretty to compete with!

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

. I was also contemplating plans about booking tickets to India, knocking on his door and forcing him to fall in love with me. But then I remembered Bipasha Basu and her amazing looks, and I snapped out of it when I saw my own reflection. There is no way he could fall for me when I have Bipasha to compare too. OH far out why couldn't it be someone like Yash Chopra! I know I would win! 😳