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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1

IMPORTANT NOTE

hello guys ,
i promised that i would be updating soon but i could not fulfill it yet again ... this time the situation got even more worse ..
my sister met with an terrible accident a week before .. a couple who passed on the way spotted her laying injured on road admitted her in hospital and informed us immediately .. she has injuries all over but thank god there wasnt any fractures ..
hope you all understand my situation .. i need to be with her helping around since she has problems walking due to the injuries .. she is now discharged but the wounds havent healed yet ...

another being my exams on may month .. am getting really held up with all these things ..

I wont promise but i ll try to update once in a while ...

Oops...Didnt know this...Extremly sorry! Howz your sister now...Keep us posted.
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating in 10mins 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1

updating in 10mins 😉



oh i seee😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello guys !! this is me durga . how are you all ??
i know am giving very very late updates .. wat to do ?? am becoming so lazy nowadays ..
my friends have strictly banned me from coming into IF for some days ..
i cant assure you about regular pms . i ll pm once am back ..
love you all :)

part - 15


It was Saturday . second day of their short family vacation . maan and geet had already planned on the places to visit and also arranged for a tourist van for travelling . first they visited some of the archaeological places like Arvalem Caves , Goa State Museum , Usgalimal Rock Carvings , Reis Magos Fort .. geet was totally immersed in seeing the culture and the way they ancient people lived their life . they got to see many rare pictures an rock cravings ..

On the later part of the day , they got to see the "Chapoli Dam" which was located near north-east of Chaudi in Canacona. The dam was located in a scenic spot extending westward from the Sahyadris. It makes it an excellent spot to take a break as it lies deep in the valley between hills. The place was filled with greenery that none would have a heart to leave the place . the fresh air devoid of any pollution was truly a bless to anyone . the next place they visited was the "Arvalam Waterfalls". The charming waterfall gave them a mind-blowing experience, with Rudreshwar Temple in its vicinity . the place had lots of greenery all round with fruit laden trees with various fruits such as bananas, bread fruits and coconut palms to name a few.

They reached the cottage around 8PM after having their dinner in a hotel near by . the day was really wonderful that none could forget easily . there was no tiredness but the sense of peacefulness and happiness was there in them . everyone sat outside the cottage . since it had a private beach , none was there to disturb them . arjun and maan set a bornfire while pinky was persuading everyone to play truth and dare game . at last after much pursuation , everyone agreed . pinky played the song from her cell while cushion passed from one hand to another . the song stopped and first person who got caught was arjun .

Pinky : so arjun bhaiya !! ready ??? truth or dare ??
Arjun smiled : I ll settle with truth .
Dadi whispered something in pinky's ear while she grinned : so arjun bhaiya your question from dadi is " when are you planning to give a baby annie or arjun to her ???
Annie and arjun blushed to a deep shade of red while other laughed out .
Geet : arey come one arjun !! you have to say the truth !!
Arjun blushed slightly : this year ..
Dadi laughed and said : I ll remember this ..
Annie did not know where to look while maan side hugged her .

The music again started and now the cushion landed on vaibhav hands .
Pinky : so pa truth or dare ??
Vaibhav : dare !!
Geet , maan , arjun and annie were whistling and hooting ..
Pinky : geet what can we ask him to do ??
Geet : pa sing a song for ma .
Chitra looked at her as if eyes would come out any time . vaibhav smirked .
Chitra : yeh kaisa dare hai ???
Maan : arey aunty !! see we have given you the opportunity to see uncles love . you have to encouraged him .

Chitra was utterly embrassed and looked at vaibhav . vaibhav smiled and sang a song for his wife while playing an artificial guitar in his hands .


mm hm hm, mm hm hm hm hm
dil ko tumse pyaar huwa, pehlee bar huwa tumse pyaar huwa
mai bhee aashik yaar huwa, pehlee bar huwa, tumse pyaar huwa
chhaayee hai betaabee, meree jaan kaho mai kya karu
mai bhee aashik yaar huwa, pehlee bar huwa, tumse pyaar huwa
chhaayee hai betaabee, meree jaan kaho mai kya karu
dil ko tumse pyaar huwa, pehlee bar huwa tumse pyaar huwa
mai bhee aashik yaar huwa, pehlee bar huwa, tumse pyaar huwa

((this song was suggested by my dear frnd Thabs . love you thabs for this :) ..for those who want to see the full song with english sub titles, please click this link . i dint know how to attach youtube video here .
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-3FxRR39Ik&feature=fvst ))

they felt the love and care in his song . geet and pinky hugged their dad and mom .
Geet : wow pa !!! what a style !!!
Chitra wacked her head : chup beshmaram .
The next round of play started and the person who got caught was maan .
Pinky : truth or dare bhai ???
Arjun said giving evil glares : why are asking him that question ??he ll take dare pinky . he loves challenges . you don't know that ??
Maan cursed arjun mentally . he was about to say truth but now no other option than to say dare : yea pinky dare .
Arjun : pinky I ll say what dare we should give him please ..
Pinky :with pleasure bhai !!
Arjun : so maan !! your dare is " you have propose some one from here"
Maan who was drinking water chocked and started coughing . dadima laughed silently thinking where its going on .
Maan gave him a look : are you serious ???
Arjun returned him the same look with : ofcourse am !!
Now he was caught !!! whom would he propose to ?? anniie or pinky ?? nahi both are his sisters . chitra and dadi don't stand a chance . the only one left was geet .

On the other hand geet was simply enjoying thinking whom he might propose to unaware that she was on his mind .
Maan got up and went towards geet . he kneeled down with one leg . he thought for a minute and said
"I never really knew you
You were just another friend
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.
I couldn't help past memories
that would only make me cry
I've fallen in love with you
and I'll never let you go
I love you more than anyone
I just had to let you know
And if you ever wonder why
I don't know what I'll say
But I'll never stop loving you
each and every day
My feelings for you will never change
Just know my feelings are true
Just remember one thing
I Love You! ""

by:megan langdale

( i took this poem from internet )

the time he finished geet was dumbstuck . it all felt so real for both of them . it was only when arjun crushed maan in a hug , they came out of their world .
arjun : wow man !! I gave this dare thinking you would back out .. but I never thought you would be such a poetic . it was so damn real maan .
geet just smiled and left the place saying she was feeling sleepy .
maan too left with the same reason ...
dadi and geets parents passed a knowing glance and soon everyone were back to bed for a peaceful sleep '..


precap : back to delhi .
do you guys think dadi ll keep quite ????




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Durga
Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

no one can escape from you thabs 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it loved the song loved how maan proposed and dadi and the light bulb just when on thanks for the pm awesome update loved it so cute
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


aww elderly love rockzzz...😳
aur yeh maaan 😲 kya kar raha hai ...
unbeliveable 😲

did he tell those word from his heart ..
that was so



wll i don think so dadi will be quite 😆..some crazy idea must be pickering in her mind...
well i have an hunch😉 ..let seee
tat was totally



update dear
do cntii soon⭐️ ...


Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed



aww elderly love rockzzz...😳
aur yeh maaan 😲 kya kar raha hai ...
unbeliveable 😲

did he tell those word from his heart ..
that was so



wll i don think so dadi will be quite 😆..some crazy idea must be pickering in her mind...
well i have an hunch😉 ..let seee
tat was totally



update dear
do cntii soon⭐️ ...



awww !! thabs !!! i would not have given this update if you had not pestered me yesterday 😉
the song you suggested !!! i just loved it !! ummah 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...how cute...😳





Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Durga, what a tease you are...itne din baad update kiya and a dare proposal...haye yeh dono kab realise karenge...
pls next time update soon

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