SS/FF - With Or Without You - chp 38/pg144 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.yar,,,this is just too good.specially the end..wondering what will be nxt..and 👏 for all this rollcoster..5 chapters in one..i just read all of them,👍🏼very well written..plz keep writing..and in this speed too..i would love im to say even a single verse for khuhsi,her beauty or love..and everyone overwhelming to hear that as thinking that its for la..;;but loved it..thnx..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 25 was fab! The mehndi on the collar bit was cute and LOL @ buaji telling off Khushi as to why she's not teasing Arnav, that was funny. Aww I feel for poor Khushi :( Arnav needs to make his mind up! He's being unfair to both Khushi and Lavanya. Hoping he gets his act together asap...


Chapter 26... OMG. Loved this chapter. Felt so bad for Khushi again... poor soul. :( having to see Arnav about to get married to La... I can only imagine how she feels. Oh no she's hurt, I hope she'll be ok. Loved the part where Arnav sees Khushi walking down the stairs in her sharara and they can't take their eyes off eachother.. soo romantic. Loved the ending - the way Arnav ran to her, the way he held her in his arms, the things he said to her and the way he didn't give a care in the world about who else was there. It was so emotional. Arnav needs to realize that Khushi is the one and not go through with the wedding to Lavanya. Thank you for all of these awesome updates in one night! :D Eagerly waiting for the next chapter now.
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg 5 updates
u better other part today
otherwise i will surely kill you
ending part was really good
hope nothing serious happens to khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it again vrush!
liked how you described how khushi was feeling
and what is this?
khushi fell and has fainted?
oh hope shes alright
and awww arnav cares for her

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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoops 5 updates!!
It feels sooo good to read all the chapters back to back. All thanks to youuu 🤗
My..my..this was awesome!! At least Arnav isn't being rude to her now and oh no, Khushi fell
And Arnav said all those words front of the whole family? 😲
Oho i hope this incident is a life changing incident for them.
Poor Souls have suffered a lot lately.
They deserve to be happy. Please update the next parts when you get time. I cannot wait to read them since the story is getting sooo interesting!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Sharu


now you i think are getting too close to reading me..hai na??

hmm i wish i get to play with words too 😳

but..something's gotta give...
lets see kya hota hai?
waiting for the lines..

Are you going to update today too, i know i am asking too much but then i am curious

and yes..i get drawn by symbolism and inferences... be it in set up...paintings in the background... or nuances..in a series..which happened in Geet

i love the symbolism, this being a visual medium they have ample way to do this.
They can have subtality which is missing nowadays.


here it happens...but i am not talking about it much..for i like to see something profound rather than the obvious things..
though my writing is not that profound...

I am finding it very good dear not just good best 😳

lekin expectations ka kya hai
jitni lambi chaho utni lambi building
agar foundation theek hai to tikegi
nahi toh sarr par aa kar giregi

wah wah is all i can say, no sar paar
giregi here 😳 hope you had a good night sleep


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Posted: 13 years ago

My Two cents on this update


Struggle.

In an attempt to draw out the scenes
I find myself unable to think
of a worthy vessel for true means,
... of how to make sense of this new ink.
My dreams shine clear through infrequent sleep,
each action and wish mere thoughts away.
Yet open eyes draw dark doubts that creep
and reign through all hours of my day.
I wish for profound sounds to carry
each person to pure rapture and bliss,
but more weights strengthen on top of me,
and render brief happiness amiss.
My sole desire rests in others,
to move the way notes in me vibrate,
through my own loud message that covers
all ways to make feelings resonate.

It's poetry I wrote
I know this relates to Arnav's state of mind somehow So I penned it down for you
Awesome Job yaar

Lekha

Edited by -Destiny- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks all will respond... to all
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vrushali!

Read from ch 20-26 all together! Very nice details!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahh so the truth comes out!!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Updates
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

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