SS/FF - With Or Without You - chp 38/pg144

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Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl
OMG 5 updates... 😛😃
Vrushu i had asked for 1 and u gave me a surprise package of 5... wowie... yipee...

all 5 were amazing updates... the build up was superb...

the patch up between arnav - khushi post his realisation that aakash n payal r a thingie was awesome... arnav is forgetting that she is the daughter of the lady who ruined his life n whom he killed...

last part where khushi fell and became unconscious was really nice... arnav saying he wont let anything happen to her...she cant leave him like that ... n whole of his family and lavanya's family seeing all that...just awesome...

muah muah muah to u vrush...

Thanks so much Gouri...yeah..under promise and over deliver...that is what i try to do!! ;-)

has he really forgotten? i donno...he probably does have some quandry...within..for logically he says... she is not to be blamed but...somewhere the hurt is there... and she is in front of him as a reminder of that one person he hates..

thanks... i felt he would not tell how he feels unless there is an extraordinary circumstance..and i guess this was one..

my pleasure darling... muaah..to you for liking my story...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: Jes75
My God Vrushy ... bachhi (as in moi 😆) ki jaan legi kya ...itne saare updates ...and MY what fabulous updates👏 ...kitna kuchh ho gaya inn dono ke beech ...shagun ki mehndi bhi laga li dono ne , in their own interesting way of course 😆...and the lucknawi setting and sher aur shairi was just superb ...more like mesmerizing 😃 u know i knew something deadly was gonna happen and it did ...she fell and brought him to his senses ...the way he saw her falling and running to her overcoming the gaddis and takias...hai main mar jaawan ..😳 i can just about imagine the looks on the faces of all present there ...😲 😲
Vrushy ...do i need to tell u to update ASAP ...ab toh raha nahi jata ...😊

jessy james

hmm i try darling..to give as much drama as possible..

and some sizzle...of course..abhi ye banda..Maan ki besharmi tak nahi pahooncha...but who knows??

now update...let me see if i can today!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: sarach
wow.yar,,,this is just too good.specially the end..wondering what will be nxt..and 👏 for all this rollcoster..5 chapters in one..i just read all of them,👍🏼very well written..plz keep writing..and in this speed too..i would love im to say even a single verse for khuhsi,her beauty or love..and everyone overwhelming to hear that as thinking that its for la..;;but loved it..thnx..

i had thot of that... to give a moment but Arnav Baba shayar nahi hai... woh dance kar leta hai...

but i guess the sher i wrote was from his perspective for her... the ghazal singer has sung for the bride and groom you guys know who are destined right..so i told from his perspective...

may be kabhi kabhi..uske dil kuch khayaal aa jaaye aur woh ek ghazal ya sher suna hi de?

never say never..hai na?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: iHeartTVD
Chapter 25 was fab! The mehndi on the collar bit was cute and LOL @ buaji telling off Khushi as to why she's not teasing Arnav, that was funny. Aww I feel for poor Khushi :( Arnav needs to make his mind up! He's being unfair to both Khushi and Lavanya. Hoping he gets his act together asap...

Chapter 26... OMG. Loved this chapter. Felt so bad for Khushi again... poor soul. :( having to see Arnav about to get married to La... I can only imagine how she feels. Oh no she's hurt, I hope she'll be ok. Loved the part where Arnav sees Khushi walking down the stairs in her sharara and they can't take their eyes off eachother.. soo romantic. Loved the ending - the way Arnav ran to her, the way he held her in his arms, the things he said to her and the way he didn't give a care in the world about who else was there. It was so emotional. Arnav needs to realize that Khushi is the one and not go through with the wedding to Lavanya. Thank you for all of these awesome updates in one night! :D Eagerly waiting for the next chapter now.

Thanks Cuz Mac..

hmm i am trying ..though kabhi kabhi lagta badi filmy hoti jaa rahi hoon!!

now yes he has to make up his mind..lekin stubborn hai na

but may be who knows...one does the unexpected when faced with a crisis..

what if losing her will make him take a step that is not expected??

kuch toh already ho gaya...kuch shayad aur hoga??

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Posted: 13 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: kins103
omg 5 updates
u better other part today
otherwise i will surely kill you
ending part was really good
hope nothing serious happens to khushi

ah darling...

maar hi daalo...mujhe...

but i shall try...

thank you..so much..

hmm now lets see..mujhe bhi nahi pata injury kitni..hai??

doctor aayega toh pata chalega..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234
loved it again vrush!
liked how you described how khushi was feeling
and what is this?
khushi fell and has fainted?
oh hope shes alright
and awww arnav cares for her

sab tere kaaran dear girl

you keep asking for the next update..

so there..

now today hopefully i should be able to write more..

meri ungliyon ki thori toh kadar kar le..

bechaari..thakk jaati hain!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: sanj12344
loving it 😉😳😉

thank you!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#458

OMG!!!!! thanks for the pm's yaar! loved this whole seires of quick updates!!!!!!! at last arnav has finally figured out that akash likes payal. jeeezzz now he can stop picking a bone at khushi.

i love this FF tooo much! i hope arnav gets his kind in gear now.

you are an amazing writer!

thank you for the wonderful updates!!!!

xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: lwfw

yes and raring to go..after today's episode..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

My Two cents on this update

Struggle.

In an attempt to draw out the scenes
I find myself unable to think
of a worthy vessel for true means,
... of how to make sense of this new ink.
My dreams shine clear through infrequent sleep,
each action and wish mere thoughts away.
Yet open eyes draw dark doubts that creep
and reign through all hours of my day.
I wish for profound sounds to carry
each person to pure rapture and bliss,
but more weights strengthen on top of me,
and render brief happiness amiss.
My sole desire rests in others,
to move the way notes in me vibrate,
through my own loud message that covers
all ways to make feelings resonate.

It's poetry I wrote
I know this relates to Arnav's state of mind somehow So I penned it down for you
Awesome Job yaar

Lekha