G/M SS: 24 hours.Thread 2.Chapter 8 The End, Pg 64 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Randomness- I'm watching the Ramayan on Imagine that has GC in it. You know, he never wore a proper shirt... He was less muscular back then..

Yes but he still managed to look handsome and cute!!!
I watch the series all the time on Youtube :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes but he still managed to look handsome and cute!!!

I watch the series all the time on Youtube :-)

It comes on at 11 every night. And my mom was watching it one day, she asked me if it was the same guy that played Maan. Hehe.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

It comes on at 11 every night. And my mom was watching it one day, she asked me if it was the same guy that played Maan. Hehe.

Haha my Mom saw him at the very beginning of Geet and she wasn't that impressed😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
WOOT WOOTTT 🥳
omg omg! thnx sooo much shaheda! i am greatly honored to hv this updated dedicated to me... well partly coz rachana took the other half 😡😛 but thnx sooo much dear 🤗
coming to the update...
it started off beautifully with maan noticing the def change in the geet he had seen in his office n the geet in front of him. way to go maan just keep treading the path u shall see more than a new geet u shall see a new maaneet 😳.

the ride on the boat oh wait i forgot to mention his question about the night... ☺️ had my hearting beating at an exponentially high rate. uff... yeh maan bhi na 😳 well when i was reading it i defo knew a sweet kiss was coming (haila madhu tu bhi kya kya sochi thi ho yaar ) n i went awww magar it was a surprise seeing maan ask such a question... naughty maan... 😆

the boat ride was emotionally high 😉 his past has been very cruel to him but its a huge step when he has shared it with geet. his internal emotions are at play, commanding and overpowering his behavior around her causing him to unconsciously let out the things he wouldnt normally even recall if he was around other people. that is indeed the first step in any relation; talking things u wouldnt normally talk around other people.

well maan u got that right u need to know her more for your heart knows a lot about ur subconscious feelings towards her n it wont be long before u accede to them. oi wait wait i think the subconscious did turn into conscious part when he decided to take her on a long walk by the beach. and his opinion of beach boardwalk is romantic... hmm ☺️ now the conscious feelings have to be voiced... 😉

i am reading until here n then i read the last part n n my reaction goes as follows: 😲 😡
i was shocked that something bad happened n was hoping nothing serious. n then angry that her sis had to have a baby 4 weeks before due date... seriously shaheda ugh ur writer's imagination had to kill my maan's romantic date... grrr
let that maan stay with geet varna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...
well now that u hv poured water on the fire i mean now that u hv spoiled the plans of the ahem romatic boardwalk i better see him make it up with something better n something sweet. 😳

lovely update on the whole. one again thx for such an early update i am indeed honored to hv an updated dedicated for me (i kno i kno its partly dedicated to me rachana grr... 😆 )but dedication is a deidication so thnk u sooo much 🤗

PS: its bad n greedy to ask for an update but u hv left at point where i would seriously go crazy without the next one soon. so just rem main update ke liye kuch bhi karoonga u name it 😉
on a serious note i am jk jk, i understand u hv other commitments n ur fasting so no compulsions 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: pushpi

Haha my Mom saw him at the very beginning of Geet and she wasn't that impressed😆

My mom plays it off, but I think she likes him. She watches Geet reruns instead of the news. That's gotta count for something, right? 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
loved the update!!!!!! It was nice to read that they are opening up to each other!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
They were both from different worlds
They both lived different lives
She could only afford simple things
Whereas he could buy the world and make it spin around him
Both lived with the memories of their painful past
While blinking tears from time to time
His life always revolved around his work
With not a moment spared for anything else
She had fallen for him in the last few months
And her life was filled with dreams of him and him only
The nights haunted her with his dreams
While the days made her restless working beside him
She wondered if she would ever get a chance to tell him
How she felt about him
She waited and waited hoping the day would come
Finally the heavens showered the blessings upon her
And gave her a chance, one chance
To make him see the world from her eyes
And to show him how much she cared
And here she was standing today in front of him
With a millon dollar smile while butterflies fluttered in her stomach
Thanking her stars for letting him be beside her
For the next 24 hours ... while seeing the world through her eyes!
--Rachana--
Shaheda,
Thank you for your dedication
Wonderful update.
Thanks so much.😊
Edited by Water. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Rachana, that was amazingly written! Love it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww,,,,bt not fair,,u left it incomplete,,,better update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Rachana, that was amazingly written! Love it!

Thank you darling.

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