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you should surely go into hiding now after this update because i am coming with "Geet's knife from Sookie's story" to kill uš
Jokes apart, last two updates were amazing. I should give my comment on both parts since i had thought of somethings which will not happen now that you have this new twistš”
Part 4:
One can always depend on Dadi to plot maan's downfall on the personal front...her clever conversation with Maan was great ... seems like now he has two ladies infront of whom he has to keep mum...loved it how Dadi asked if he has fired geet and later called her up to give naughtly instructionsš I also appreciated that she noticed and pointed out to Maan that he should not waste her sweat earned money.
Geet's reactions to maan were hilarious and so was maan's predictions of what she wanted to make him do as revenge for late working hours.i just hope i could make my boss do the sameš her expecting him to be not there, her imaginations of maan in different clothes...oooh ... š Maan's thoughts on if Geet wanted to seduce him and his views on participation were the icing on the cake...if you had not posted this part, i would have imagined that by the eod, it would have been maan who would have seduction on his mind š
part 5
btw love the pics of maan and geet you have posted. they look fresh and young š geet is like a multifunctional printer ...lol...your sense of humor amazes me.both of them opening abt their personal lives so simply was expected - they are so comfortable with each other after all - and maan is a real jerk - he caught her hand and asked her where does he spend his night ... š both their pasts were a revelation - two lonely souls š and then he asked what dress is she wearing !! his nerve...all subtle hints or plain flirting ?š
the way you ended is really sad..i thought 24hrs would be the story of their date...geet emptied her whole account on maan, so much of her personal life was depending on him...but loved it how she put her family above her own needsš³ i had half hoped that maan would offer to go with her...shud i still hope that geet in her tension will not be able to drive? shud maan go back and get a good thrashing from dadima for leaving geet alone? would he take her out again?
i am sharpening my knife...no hot choc and almond cookies for you unless you give the next updateš
loved both the amazing parts . i know you dont update so often but pls pls pls update soonš
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