New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 39

Superb fantastic awsm.the way aryan speaks n his thoughts adds humour in this story.abhay n piya its like ''do dil mil rahe hain magar chupke chupke''bt wat to do abhay feels like ''teri meri meri teri premkahani hai muskil''abhay though he doesnt want to acknowledge bt he surely has softer side 4 piya.plz update soon.

Wow tanzie wht an update.1st Aryan ki halat sun kar hasi aa rhi thi.Abhay spinned his head.And wow Abhiya's were tempted 2 touch eacj other.Tht was hot.Abhay hurting Pia is common so it hardly effects but uff Abhiya were sizzling hot.I love last line of this update'Pia actally brought sunshine in Abhay's graveyard life'.Plzz continue.I m ager 2 know who is lady raichand & will she b as gud as aryan is wod Pia or not?😕😳

LUV U 🤗

Awww tanzie. . such a fabulous update...
I'm speechless...

Abhay ignores piya but The way he showed care...& brought clothes , food for her. . .very touching. .

Aryan is sho shweet !! always trying to cheer up, Pia ! Why do i feel dat aryan is going to bring abhiya closer!

The towel scene was super hawt. .
& those lines :
(Abhay supported himself against a wall and closed his eyes. His body was trembling as well. "You are going to be the death of me and yourself Piya...why?? why?? " )
when will this guy let his guard down & accept his love !!
I just hate the control he has over his emotions. .

The precap 'unexpected' looks damn interesting. .
Hmmm!! Wat unexpected things r going to happen?. . Hehe

Thanks for the pm & beautiful update
continue soon
tc

awesome chapter Tanzie!!❤️ Da AbhIya scene was beautifully described.😍 but is dis necessary 4 Abhay to hurt Piya everytym? 😡 Poor girl...

R u going to update da next chapter soon?😆

Brilliant chapter Tanzie...

lovely update
really abhiya scenes were damn cute😳
but he was seriously rude with her why he has to hurt her and himself so much😡
but the last line by aryan has really shocked me to the core😕
i hope he is caring for her just like a friend or more so a brother
please no love triangles here we already have jai for this in ur story
thanks for pm and please .update soon and clear my doubt regarding pia and jai's relation

wow nice story plz update soon

nyc dr... i liked d way abhay feel jelous n care 4 pia... lived d abhay room scene... n i hope abhay will be cool with pia soon... cont soon n thanks 4 d pm...