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arhiforever

@arhiforever

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#801

This part was simply awesome. Loved the way Khushi analyzes her feeling for Arnav and realizes that there is no longer any hate. Their arguments are no longer hurtful. In your fanfic she is starting to be fond of him. Hope she does that soon in the show too.

Arnav is so tuned to her that when she comes out with a half eaten jalebi he immediately knows she is thinking something and acts on it. He just cant bear to be away from her now...

I eagerly wait for your updates. Keep up the great work.

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#802

i'm completely in love with your ff and it just keeps getting better...and my god, another kiss...i'm still lost in it...love the detail you put into the writing...keep it up...and please update soon

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Each part is better than the last! I love the ending, arnav's smug look. ooo these raizada siblings are becoming naughties by the day. Keep it up janet, its always a delight to read ur work. Thanks 4 the pm.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#804

Heya Janet!!!

What an update!! I loved it. Progress and passion were both present in the update.

It was great to read. Its really amusing the way Arnav teases Khushi, and then gives her a smug look.

Thanks for the PM sugar, and I look forward to the next part!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#805

Great updates

i can't wait for the next part!!!!

thanks for the pm and please update soon

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Simply_Smart

@Simply_Smart

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#806

Janneettt!!!!! I get sooo excited when I see that you've updated!!

And you, my dear, definitely live up to the expectations!! This part was just FABULOUS!

At last, we get a glimpse of Khushi's thoughts! Two things about which I really liked:

- no "sirs" in her head...she refers to both Arnav and Akash by just their names!

- and Arnav was right! "She wondered why she wasn't shocked. She just let him do it and what's more, she hugged him right back...She tried to shut his actions out and thought about her own reaction to him." She is more shocked to her reactions to him than his forthcoming behavior...I don't think I can mention enough times how much I love your Arnav! 😍

The sibling rapport and chemistry is spot on once again! Both the brothers after their life partners...poor Anjali though, hopefully she doesn't get left behind.

As for the ArHi scene - Oh.Em.Gee! ☺️ Too cute, too hot, and just perfect! Arnav is soo cheeky with his "Lekin ye toh hum neeche nahi kar sakte the na" ...ugh! why does Anjali always interrupt?! But then again she is right too, wouldn't want anyone else figuring out what ArHi are up to hehehe

I don't know how you do it, but you are just brilliant!! I thought I loved the last part the most thus far, but this one is even better!

Brava girl! 👏

Please update soon because I'm officially getting addicted 😳

Best,

Smarty