new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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anks_ams

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

it was awesome.. loved it.. thanks for the pm.. cont. soon:)

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wow.. loved it .. really.

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madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

omg i am sooo over the cloud to see u have changed at my suggestion... wow i do seem to make sense sometimes 🤪

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Nandita5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Wonderful OS Bindu

Great creativity

Definitely want more of it

Thanx for pm.

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09
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Ah! at last i see the forbidden love... i actually think u should name it forbidden love (just a suggestion 😃) i always wanted CVs to turn it into this kind of treatment b/w maan n geet. as far as i rem the thing that stopped maan from claiming geet in the early days was his fear for her reaction n his own. n geet was because she was scared of her past. yet their passion, chemistry, n romance soared because everyone knew the fact it was forbidden territory to them. that was what always kept me on the edge n made me love geet... n i wanted that magic to repeat itself.

i badly wanted to see maan yearn for her n pine for her yet hate her just for the mere fact that she was geet n she was married to some1 else. that would bring his magic sexy back in action. although he would yearn for her touch he couldnt really do it because he hates going against principles. its great to see finally some1 pen it down so beautifully! keep it up 😊

i too had the feeling that that awareness that was there during the early days was sadly lacking with the memory loss...may be the fact that he became her savior had intensified there attraction during that time...but the spark has to be still there, after the way they portrayed Maaneet love...
which i think the CVs have ignored till now...
thank u for the title again🤗

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GBR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Its awesome n wonderful

Soo nicely written

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
thanx for sharing u'r take on amnesia attack. really luvd reading it

" He bend his head and kissed her with a combination of passion and rage, wanting to hurt her for making him feel this way."

i reread this sentence sooo many times. portrays his mind's confusion very well.

i wanted to have a go at it ever since the track came on...but then was confused if i shud, coz i was already into Surrogate, which may get slowed down and i did give the amnesia of Geet😆...
but then when the CVs had then in the suite alone and did nothing abt it...i just cudn't resist...nd aren't we still waiting for that passionate night b/w them

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Absoluv
SUPERB .👏..AWESOME .👏..dear...Perfect for the current track ...luved it...an OS to fit the track after a longgg time...Please do continue & PM me...😉

thank u...
that sizzling awareness is sadly missed in the current GHSP, na? hope we get it in the upcoming episodes...i want that Maaneet back...who makes the screen burn with their chemistry😭

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: maanhar
Thank you for the OS and you have nicely portrayed Maan's inner feelings...

i have a great model to base it on...the scene where Maan says i hate u to Geet, after knowing abt her pregnancy...wow, what a performance it was!!👏

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madhu.pmlist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: bangalores

i too had the feeling that that awareness that was there during the early days was sadly lacking with the memory loss...may be the fact that he became her savior had intensified there attraction during that time...but the spark has to be still there, after the way they portrayed Maaneet love...
which i think the CVs have ignored till now...
thank u for the title again🤗

i second that! its very badly lacking... hmm i just hope now that the old team is back they can bring the chemistry back!! 😳

aaww i am really happy i could be of some use as a reader 😃 ur welcome!