new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Awesome start... loved it
Pls continue soon

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Niharika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Thank you for the OS and you have nicely portrayed Maan's inner feelings...

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

awesome starting bindu👏👏👏👏. omg does not matter. maan can't resist geet hain. even in his ml stage he is attracted to her who seems to be married already. very very nicely written bindu. can't wait for next part pls continue.

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

🤣 ...she probably misplaced her husband too!! that was hilarious!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...but gosh...if only they'd show such a thing on the show,..can you imagine the morning after...how much Maan would hate himself for falling for and sleeping with a married woman!! haw!! 😲

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

OMG that was brilliant! :O So eagerly waiting for part 2 .. hayeee this is the kind of tension he should feel later on in the show too .. .although he knows she married to him .. but this was amazing!

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Awesome !!! 👏 👏 👏

So what if there are other interpretations on the ML track ??? You are always free to use your creativity .

I loved it ☺️

Superb writing 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It would have been nice if the actual soap had showcased similar track ...

Lovely update 👏 👏 👍🏼

Thanks for pm ...

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

congrats !!!!! 4 d new os ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Mehek25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

That was simply super. Brilliantly written. had me sitting on the edge of my seat reading it. Suits the situation perfectly and the title is most appropriate..."Forbidden Love"...Wow.

Part 1 itna mast hai to Part 2 kaisa hoga?????Waiting for next part. Thanx for the PM.