new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12 - Page 28

4 ur future updates dear..⭐️⭐️⭐️... tons of ...4 u dear...😳 lov,❤️ Tama P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕 Note: guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

i LOVE that geet isnt wearing her ring any more...you go girl...put that khadoos MSK in his place...and i loved how she said that if someone had been insulting his wife the way he insulted geet...would he have taken it...know what i mean...at that time he didnt know geet was his wife...but now that he does...if someone said those things to geet...would he take it!? i think NOT!! munda toh would have had a fit!! ha ha...and..oh oh...does he have to keep saying that its all an act? sheesh!! im waiting for that one night stand to lead to a pregnancy...so typical i know...ha ha

lovely part...
grt dadi unknowingly did da job!! ; ) maaneet in same room...yahoo!
ab dkho maan babaji geet da sherni da kamaal!!! : )

Hope Daadima's planning will bring them together😉

Originally posted by: Madhukon

Hey..come on yaar.. It is the weekend .. Please give us an update .. Have been waiting tooo looonnnggg ;)😉

😳i'm ashamed to confess i've written a single word beyond what was already posted...i'd switch off surrogate this weekend and try to think only of Forbidden... so u'll get another update after the weekend😊

PART 4

5. Forbidden Bed 😆

His life was taken over by tormenting females. Sometimes loving someone deeply became the cause of all your miseries. Maan could only see that as the reason for his present state. His love for Daadi had made him bring Geet back into his home and slowly she was taking over his life. What was worst was that there was nothing he could do to change the situation. How could you avoid or ignore someone who shared your room. Awareness of her filled his waking hours. He blamed it on his curiosity. Who wouldn't like to watch and find out what was it about her that made him fall so deep in love with a woman that he decided to marry her. Especially so in his case because he remembered nothing about her...and whatever he had seen before the truth struck him, he wasn't that impressed. But everybody claimed that she had become his life, the reason for his happiness. And the little bit of snippets that he got from Daadi and dev regarding their romance had shocked him. He could for his life not imagine impersonating as a driver to win back Geet who had left him because he hurt her. Or that he had brought her to the wedding from the Beauty parlour on horseback, because there was traffic regulation!! Seeing the pictures and the video of his marriage he had felt like he was watching someone who though looked like him, was an entirely different person. If it was Geet who made him change so much that he could hardly recognize himself in the video of his marriage, then he had to find out what had made him fall!!

But now she was no longer the old Geet, who looked at him with sad expectant eyes and irritated him by being constantly around him, trying to take care of everything around him. She had sprouted independence all of a sudden. The sadness was replaced by determination and at times amusement and a knowing look that taunted him, almost as much as her actions taunted him. But when you think about it, whatever happened didn't happen because of her, she just had a unique way of manipulating situations that made her emerge victorious. It was always Daadi who was the instigator like the way she ended up in his room. 'His Room', he snorted thinking how she had used that phrase to her advantage. His lips stretched in reluctant admiration. He had to show his authority and try to assert whom the room belonged to and who was the unwelcome lodger...

Geet was sitting in front of the dressing table mirror removing her jumkas, preparing to retire when he came out of the washroom. He sat on the bed, leaned on the headboard and stretched out his legs. He tried making her uncomfortable by watching her, but she just caught his eyes on the mirror once and then continued with whatever she was doing. As if she was used to him admiring her. at least he hadn't lost his sense of beauty while he was out of his mind, which is how he wished to view that period of amnesia. She was beautiful even without the jumkas dangling from her ears and her face devoid of make up. She opened her 'chotti' to brush her hair. The dark curtain that fell around her face brought out the sharp contrast of her creamy white face, with the natural blush that added rosy tint to her cheeks. Her skin would smell of the gentle fragrance of her body wash, which had teased his nostrils when he had entered the washroom. Her skin was as smooth as silk and as warm. They would come alive under his hands and he could remember her gasps of pleasure when he..." He pulled back his thoughts but her presence still taunted him.

Geet stood to move towards the bed and looked at Maan uncertainly. Then moved to her side of the bed, and was about to reach for her pillow, when Maan mocked, " I hope you don't expect me to take the couch in my own room, so that you can sleep on the bed."

She paused, looked at him and retracted her steps to stand before him.

"Maan do you think you are a good host?"

" I don't know, but my guests do tend to sing my praises for weeks that follow when ever Khuranas throw a party. But then you should know, as you were married to me!" he said arrogantly.

"So you consider yourself a good host?"

"Without doubt!" he claimed.

"Aditi Devo Bhava! Have you heard of that phrase?"

Maan looked at Geet, wondering what she was trying to prove now, "And if I have?"

"You did say this is your room...then that would mean I'm the guest. So I get to choose where I sleep? Don't I Maan?" Geet smiled. She walked away from a trapped Maan to the other side of the bed. She adjusted the pillow and sat down on the bed, pulling down the blanket.

Maan stood up and jerked the blanket away from her, "if you think I'm going to take the couch, think again! This is my roomand I will sleep in my bed."

"Did I ask you not to?" Geet asked sweetly. "I don't have any problem if you want to sleep on the bed. "She sat up and pulled the blanket back and added, "...after all I'm married to you , though you don't believe you are married to me!"

Maan was in a fix, whatever he choose to do both meant her victory. But the thought of sleeping on the same bed with her was unthinkable. He didn't want to expose himself to further torture. So he stomped off to the couch and switched on the music system, increasing the volume so as to prevent anyone in the room to sleep comfortably. Music flowed:

Raat Akeli Hai, Bujh Gae Diye
Aake Mere Paas, Kaano.N Me.N Mere
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

Tum Aaj Mere Liye Ruk Jaao, Rut Bhi Hai Furasat Bhi Hai
Tumhein Na Ho Na Sahii, Mujhe Tumase Muhabbat Hai
Mohabbat Ki Ijaazat Hai, To Chup Kyuun Rahiye
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

Savaal Banii Hui Dabi Dabi Ulajhan Siinon Mein
Javaab Denaa Thaa, To Duube Ho Pasiino.N Mein
Thaanii Hai Do Hasiinon Mein, To Chup Kyun Rahiye
Jo Bhi Chaahe Kahiye, Raat ...

He switched off the system in a huff and thought he heard a whisper of laughter from the bed.

"Good night, Maan."

"Good night." Maan responded automatically before turning to glare at her. he saw her keep his photo back on the bed and then turn to look at him.

"Oh! Goodnight to you too ..." She said then added as an after thought, loud enough for him to hear, "... Dusht Danav!"

PART 6

Sorry sorry...long wait short update.😳..but will update another part soon to appease my buddies..posting as much as i typed🥱...let me check out the maaneet FF link...will send PMs together, after i post the next part too

Good nyt dusht... U know isuppose to sleep at dis tym but i m reading ur updation...lol...

Oh!!! i love the way Maan is getting affected by the indifference shown by Geet😉