new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

It was a good one dear...
Maan's being so rude to GEET...
Buy thts not his fault,situations r...
Continue soon dear...waiting...
Tunic n keep writing...

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi...finally u updated lol...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. Poor Geet n Dadi! Maan nt accepting Geet as his wife. Dadi very upset. Maan thinking of Geet...firing her throwing her out of KM n KC. Glad Geet left. Will Maan find her? Btw can he b sure that she is @ the gurudwara. Please update asap

I don't Imagine Geet leaving him...she just wants to think thinks over, to calm her mind...
Maan is still connected to geet...he may not know it but at a time when he really needs to find her he knows where to search for her..he doesn't think abt it but he knows her habit

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Awesome update
Thanx for the PM

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

oooh!..i'm loving this!👏

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

nice part , atleast he knows the truth and that she didnt commit any sin having a night together

and hope he finds her soon

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

nice part...

finally maan knows that geet is his wife...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

wow ... this is just awesome!!!!!!!!!!! please continue!!!!!

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Awesome, beautiful part
loved it.
maan's out burst oh God

I guess maan's subconscious mind told him that she is in Gurdwara
continue soon

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Ben25
gr8 update. Loved your description of a angry, prowling lion a la maan, of whom the entire office was scared. Yes, maybe towards d end it did turn a bit cliche with geet overhearing and dadi fainting, especially considering geet had given maan a befitting reply in your last update. but its still good :-)

yeah, got bored towards the end, na? me too writing it😆...but geet wasn't run away as in GHSP...she just wants to think things thru' ...to calm her mind before she takes the next action...
she never expected that he wud reject her after knowing she is his wife!!