tru luv updated part 61 pg 170 - Page 63

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

i liked this poem the best too...............continue with yur stories...........they are gr888

thnx and i will cont as soon as possible

Originally posted by: me_iq

Luved urz every single poem my heart broke in to pieces by readin da parts(actually i wazz thinking that all dis has happened 2 me)


Iqra

aaaawwwwwwwwww 😭

Saniya darling i missed 3 parts but i caught up again.... gr8 job i luved all 3 parts ... n plzzzzzzz continue soon n i luv all ur poems ...i have no fave cuz all of them r gr8 n well written n thought out.... u r awesome saniya...plzzzzzzz continue soon n fast


Luv Puja

i luvd all the poems equally theyre all great! n the updates were amazing - cont soon!

Hi touchmenot... ur story is awesome.. ur r indeed a great poet also.. I just love ur poetry as well as ur story... Pl continue soon..

Originally posted by: touchmenot

thnx 😃

thats the best one!!

👏 👏 👏 the poems rocked!!!!! please con. soon 😛

I HAVE ONE WORD TO DESCRIBE UR POEMS...........BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! cont. soon.....

no words to tell how good it was
[Quote]You made me so happy
Happy at the center of my heart
No one made me feel like this before
I thought of having a new start.

Your smile made my heart laugh
And made my world brighter
Your eyes made my life shine
And made my soul stronger.

To me, your smile meant sunshine
And your eyes sparkled like stars
I felt happy to give up my dreams for you
But you left me, with so many scars.

With you gone, I am back in darkness
My only companion is loneliness
Though I still pray for you to return
But my hopes are lost in this Wilderness.

You came, got the best of me and left
You turned out to be like every human
But the sunshine you showed was different
Also you tore my heart and soul like no one.

With you, the brightness of stars was like never before
With you, the fragrance of flowers was like never before
With you gone, the darkness of night is like never before
With you gone, the pain in this heart is like never before.
this one rocked and it brought tears to my eyes 😭

Originally posted by: puja265

Saniya darling i missed 3 parts but i caught up again.... gr8 job i luved all 3 parts ... n plzzzzzzz continue soon n i luv all ur poems ...i have no fave cuz all of them r gr8 n well written n thought out.... u r awesome saniya...plzzzzzzz continue soon n fast


Luv Puja

u didn't missed any coz ek saath zyaada padne mein maza aata hai.