tru luv updated part 61 pg 170 - Page 64

Originally posted by: dream_kudi

👏 👏 👏 the poems rocked!!!!! please con. soon 😛

thnx

Originally posted by: nabz8888

I HAVE ONE WORD TO DESCRIBE UR POEMS...........BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! cont. soon.....

aaawwwwwww sho shweet

your fanfiction is going great pls write some more soon 😛 can't wait for more parts

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

no words to tell how good it was
[Quote]You made me so happy
Happy at the center of my heart
No one made me feel like this before
I thought of having a new start.

Your smile made my heart laugh
And made my world brighter
Your eyes made my life shine
And made my soul stronger.

To me, your smile meant sunshine
And your eyes sparkled like stars
I felt happy to give up my dreams for you
But you left me, with so many scars.

With you gone, I am back in darkness
My only companion is loneliness
Though I still pray for you to return
But my hopes are lost in this Wilderness.

You came, got the best of me and left
You turned out to be like every human
But the sunshine you showed was different
Also you tore my heart and soul like no one.

With you, the brightness of stars was like never before
With you, the fragrance of flowers was like never before
With you gone, the darkness of night is like never before
With you gone, the pain in this heart is like never before.

this one rocked and it brought tears to my eyes 😭

dun cry i dont wanna anyone to cry

Originally posted by: khushi19

your fanfiction is going great pls write some more soon 😛 can't wait for more parts

thnx 😳

awwww ur poems are really sad and has alot of meaning to it in this kinds of situations btw AK!!...plzz continue!!...

Originally posted by: angadlover<3

awwww ur poems are really sad and has alot of meaning to it in this kinds of situations btw AK!!...plzz continue!!...

thanx but only part no poems from now on

Part 35th
It was 3.00 am when kripa awaked angad and told him an she is hungry. Angad had almost forgotten to feed her and him. He got up and fetched some food and heated it.

He helped kripa to sit and fed her the food.

K: tum abhi so jao. Buhat raat ho gayi hai.

A: hmmm aapka hokum sar ankhon par.

Kripa gives a weak smile. Angad lies really close to her.

K: mujhse dur raho.

Angad was hurt he thought that she still is angry.

A: kyon

K: angad mujhe fever hai tumhein bhi ho jaye ga.

Angad smiled and was happy that she cared.

A: nahi ho ga.

K: angad plz

Angad hugs her and caresses her back.

A: kuch nahi hua. When I hug u I feel refresh not weak. u r my strength not weakness.

As he gets apart he sees kripa already asleep. He makes her lie and sleeps hugging her.


Next morning angad sees a figure in the front of him handling a tray of tea. It was kripa (obviously) her eyes were looking reddish (in fever). She was looking weak but was trying her best to smile. Angad jumps out of the bed in panic.

A: y the hell u r out of the bed.

K: main puja karne gayee thi

A: aur yeh chai kia bhagwaan ne di hai.

K: nahi main ne socha ke tumhein chai de doon.

A: thnx but ur health cums first.

K: I m ok now.

Angad checks the fever it was still high.

A: kia mere sir pe likha hai ke main budhoo hoon.

Kripa nods yes

A: shut up and sleep

K: mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai. subah ko sona achi baat nahi hai.

A: sleep

K: I m not sleepy at all.

A: theek hai main tumhein gaana sunna kar sulata hoon.

K: nahi phir main kabhi so nahi paoon gi.

A: mat so Koi baat tumne aaj tak maani hai jo ab maano gi.

K: acha pehle tum chai pee kar office chale jao uske baad mein so jaoon gi.

A: office main nahi ja raha.

K: kyon

A: tum bimaar ho tumhari care karne ke liye.

K: tum jao main theek hoon.

A: I have decided I m not going no more arguments I noe u won't take care of urself if I won't be here.

K: pa…..

A: ssshhh main breakfast le kar ata hoon.

Kripa makes weird face and angad leaves smiling. Kripa was bored so she decided to do sumthing so she switched the television. And start seeing a channel.

Angad come by then and sees kripa laughing he glances to kripa and sees her watching CARTOONS. Angad sees the childish kripa totally drowned into the cartoon

He sits beside her and puts his hand on her eyes. She tries to put his hand aside but she was unsuccessful.

A: bachi ho jo cartoon dekh rahi ho. Ye channel main ne apni babies ke liye book kia tha.

K: is mein tag nahi laga hua ke sirf bache dekh sakte hain. And wat babies ek hoga. Bas.

Angad removes is hand and again kripa gets involved in it.

that was really cute! Do cont. soon!

😆 i liked the last lines "what babies ek hi hoga" 😆 plz plz plz con. soon