OS!! MG - Living Without You!!Epilogue Pg20 19/8 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Sorry for being late Nazmaa... Was not able to comment on ur first part i m really sorry for that
well felling really sad for geet but dear i personally want maan to b alive pls pls u r nt going to kill maan
update soon
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
sooo sad
loved armaan
sooo cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
its awsm... 👏it md me cry😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
loved the update...
so is it maan she ran into...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
totally emotional update...
feeling sorry for geet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Hey Guys!!
Well Back With Another Part.. 😊
There Is Going To Be A Part 4.. Lol As i Went On Abit Too Much In This..
Soo Epilogue Might Be Small... Might Not Be..
Well As It Is Friendship Day I Am Going To Try And Update My Other FF's..
If Not Today Then Maybe Early Mornings Of Tomorrow..😆😆
Well Back To This FF I Want To Say Well Done !!
Nearly All Of You Said Maan Was Back OR Coming Back...
I'll Let You All In On A Secret...😳
Maan Was Always Going To Be Back... 😆

Thanks For All Your Comments..
It Really Does Motivate Me To Continue Writing...
Ps Beena- Update Yours Again... lol :)

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Part 3

This wasn't a wall or a table , it wasn't a door or even a window... she recognised this hardness... her back was against this hard thing ... the scent was familiar.. she recognised this scent straight after 2 and a half years... she closed her eyes picturing his ace ...

Maan She whispered...

It was a person.. she knew it was a person and not an object. she turned slowly as she moved her hand towards his chest and she felt his heartbeat.. tears started falling as she recognised this heartbeat... Maan... she said his name again.. she moved her hands to his face... she was happy... she felt her maans face.. her hand went over his eyes down his nose and rubbed his lips... even though it was dark she recognised it ... it was Maan.

Armaan started crying more now getting scared of the dark.. hiding under the table and Vicky trying to find him ... mamma..

This broke her train of thought.. just then the light came on...

Geet came Face to face with Maan... the Maan singh Khurana...

She smiled through her tears... Maan... she said.. still touching his face...

Geet ' tum sach main yaha ho... your really here... VICKYYY she screamed...

Vicky heard Geet screaming his name and came to her.. just then he saw something or someone that shocked him...

Maan Veerji .. he whispered... he couldn't believe it.. it was Maan.. stood there... he closed his eyes and opened them again.. still Maan was there.. slowly slowly he made him way to Maan..

He went to him and hugged him straight away...

Maan ' Vicky ... he said tears Forming in his eyes

Maan's eyes still on Geet...

Armaan still crying came to find his mamma ... Geet heard him crying and broke eye contact with Maan as she turned to see armaan running towards her.. she bent down to pick him up and she hugged him...

Geet ' sorry baby... mamma is here... mamma's here... she whispered..

Armaan ' mujhe dar lag raha tha mamma... he cried.. holding on tight he cried ..

Geet ' im sorry baby... mamma is here now... she whispered she hugged him...

Armaan ' I tried to be brave like papa... he said as his cries died down/..

Geet ' Its okay baby.. tum bohat brave ho... Just Like Papa.. she whispered...

Armaan moved back so he can see his mamma's face...

Armaan ' sach mamma?? He asked still unsure of her answer... how could he be brave If he was he ...thought ... his mamma was a little pagal he thought..

Geet ' haan baby... bilkul brave...

Armaan ' but mamma... You are a badhu...

Vicky turned around to Armaan...

Vicky ' tumne mamma ko badhu kyun kaha...

Armaan ' kyun ki... I was crying and I was scared of the dark tho phir main brave kaise???

Vicky went closer to him and bent down... he wiped his tears and said...

Vicky ' kyun kit tum Maan singh Khurana ke beta ho... isiliya...

Geet ' haan baby.. your brave... she said and smiled. Nodding her head to show she was telling the truth..

Armaan flung himself into his mamma's arms once again... I love you mamma he said...

Love you mammo... your both the best...

Vicky ' Love you too champ.. he said and ruffled his hair... he went out to ind dev, naintara and Daadi ...

As he hugged her he saw someone .. he looked upto see his papa...

He was stood there shocked... he recognised his papa only because Geet showed him his photos every night and to see him first time in the flesh was a dream come true... Geet never told him his papa had died.. she didn't believe it... still she thought he broke him promise... he wanted to edge forward and hug him but was unsure...

Armaan was confused.. will his papa like him, the look Armaan had was soo cute when he was thinking... he wondered I his papa knew he had a son... If he knew he was his son... he wanted to move Forward.. so he did.. well he tried.. he moved his right foot forward and then put it back in the same place as before ...

Armaan looked at Geet.. He Went Closer to Geet's ear and whispered something.. This Caused Geet to laugh...

Armaan ' does he always look like that... he whispered...

Geet laughed ' Haan baby..

Armaan ' mamma.. can I hug him...

Geet ' haan course you can baby... he's your papa...

Armaan ' does he know that?? He questioned confused..

Geet ' haan baby ... but why don't you introduce yourself.. hmm.. she said smiling and kissed his forehead...

Armaan ' Yeah... he said getting excited... he jumped up and down..

Armaan did the same walk Maan did...

He put the same attitude on his face, the same look.. he did his little walk...

Just then Vicky Came with daadima, dev and naintara... Daadima, dev, naintara and Vicky stood there with tears in their eyes...

Daadi ' Maan... she said quietly tears clouding her vision..

Dev ' bro...

Naintara ' Veerji... she said..

All were going to go and hug him when Vicky stopped them.. they looked at him confusingly

Vicky ' pehle vo dekho.. he said turning his head around facing Maan and Armaan...

All three turned to face Maan and Armaan .. watching the father son reunion...

Keeping in mind that he was only 2 years old, Geet looked at her son who acted as If he 10... she smiled at him and continued to watch him..

Armaan stopped in front o his papa... he moved a chair and placed it In front of Maan... he got up and looked at Maan.. Geet started to panic but knowing Maan was there she calm down... Daadi was going to rush forward to stop Armaan from falling.. dev stopped her...

Armaan looked at his papa up and down...

Armaan ' hi... Im Maan.. Maan Singh Khurana.. he said with attitude .. he put his right hand out waiting for a handshake.. Geet laughed silently while the rest chuckled...

Armaan waited for a few seconds and hit his head playfully...

Armaan ' Sorry Maan is just for mamma.. he said looking over at Geet... I'm Armaan.. Armaan Singh Khurana... he said correctly with the same amount of attiude...

His right hand still waiting for his papa to shake it...

Maan stood there looking at his son... he was exactly like him. Same attitude.. his nose was just like his... his eyes were a mixture of his eyes and geets but more geets he thought.. his son was just like him.. especially the attitude... he smiled a bit.. he bent down and shook his hand/..

Maan ' hi... im Maan... Maan singh Khurana... he said with the same attitude...

Armaan ' Can I hug you.?? He whispered..

Maan was shocked,.. not in a bad way but in a good way.. he soo wanted to hug his son...

Maan ' yeah... he whispered tears trailing down him face...

Armaan ' and can I call you papa.. he asked thoughtfully..

Maan ' yeah.. was all Maan could say... before long Maan sorry Armaan was in his fathers arms...

Maan hugged his son for dear life.. his son who he was seeing for the first time... he hugged and cried and kissed him all over...

Armaan moved out of the hug and wiped his face and said yuckkk papa... he giggled...

>>>>>>>

Daadima rushed forward to hug him... he saw Daadi after two long years.. how he missed his Daadi... he missed her hugs and her little taunts after she had caught him and Geet romancing in the house when they thought it was empty...

Daadi ' Maan... she cried tears of happiness...

Maan ' Daadima... I missed you...

Daadima ' I missed you too... she moved back to look at him... Dev then came to hug...

Dev ' kaha the bro... we missed you...

Maan ' I missed you too.. vo main... he started to say until naintara came and hugged him ... everyone stood around him asking him questions.. all talking to him and no-one realised Geet was missing... No-one noticed Geet leaving towards her room...

Precap '

Maaneet reunion... properly lol :)

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Final part page 14
Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Happy Friendship Day and thanks for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
yieepee
me first
loved the way the reunion of the family
like father like son
so cute is armaan

waiting for maaneet reunion

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Awww luvd the update
Haha armaan is so cute
Can't wait for reunion
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm

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