~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 32

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Thanks for the update and PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
love letter are too good
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update
aww maan n geet confessed
luvd da way dey confessed it was soo cute
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon x 😍
Edited by soni4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. omg finally maan understood his feeling and made geet realize tooo. i am sooo happy for maaneet but nadiya can we have one more update pls pls yaar. plsss. i want to see what their reactions r. pls pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... loved part 12 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

perfect song ... loved it ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts!
I think we should thank the trio...just because of them maneet realize their feelings and confesse to each other!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 13


Whilst driving Maan took out his mobile "Uh kiya txt karoo?..uh haan ye teek rahe ga". He sent the message. Geet eagerly reached for her mobile. She was still laying in Maan's bed. She saw his name appear. She gulped and became nervous. Her palms were getting sweaty. *Babaji shall I open it?* she closed her eyes and pressed open. It read "Geet I am on my way". She jumped up *Babaji he will be here in a couple of hours what shall I do?*

She went down and with the help of Nakul, Shaam laal made Maan's favourite dishes; pasta and chocolate mousse. She ran upstairs to have a bath and get ready. She wore a shocking pink sari. She left her hair open. She looked lovingly at the mirror and saw that Maan would love her in a sari. Maan had bought her perfume called 'Romance' and she put it on. Her jewellery was minimal. Every now and again Maan texted her to tell her how far he was and how long he will be home by. Her breathing was increasing by the minute. She was excited to see him too. Maan was smiling that Geet was not replying as he knew she would be shy and embarrassed.

Suddenly she heard a beep..she knew it was Maan's car asking the watchman to open up. She got up and held her hyperventilating chest. "Babaji how will I face him? What shall I do? What am I suppose to say? Please help me". Maan threw the keys at the watchman and told him to park up. He ran inside.

Geet got up and was about to run in fear of what was about to happen. She was about to reach the steps that Maan called her from behind. "Geet". A sudden gust of wind felt like passed Geet. Her hair was flowing. She felt her legs were shivering. She clasped her neck. Maan eyed her curvaceous figure which he had failed to notice before. He wanted her to turn around but she stood motion less. He felt a strange desire of scooping her in his arms.

Maan inched forward in his ever so macho stride. He was wearing a smart party shirt which was shimmering black. His buttons were nearly all open. She gulped at his exposed chest. He slowly moved to her with intense eyes.

Maan came near her from behind and came close to her nuzzling her ear. She closed her eyes and sighed with anticipation.

The moment was silent between them..there was some kind of a tension. . Maan came infront of her and looked into her hazel eyes..reading them..seeing what they wanted..she looked down in shyness..he lifted her chin with his finger..she looked into his eyes...both felt emotional at all the accusations that were levied at them...both had tears in their eyes. Maan moved back and opened his arms. All she could see was his huge biceps and his exposed chest calling him..she ran into his arms and he enclosed her firmly..their chests were tight in a hug..once they were in a hug they broke off to look at each other and collided for a very long hug. Maan's arms were wrapped around her tightly and she pressed against him tightly.

She broke the hug and he lovingly looked at her. She put her fingers in his hair and he grabbed her close from the waist. Geet put her arms around his neck and tiptoed to hug him. Both were lost in the hug..smiling and caressing each other with their hands.

"Bahut sataya hain tum ne Geet..." he said with bedroom eyes.

She shyly put her hand on his eyes. "Maan don't look at me like that". He took her hand and interlocked it with his fingers. "Your mine and I can see you however much I want to". She nodded her head. "Maan let go of me someone will see".

"Uh-uh no one is here..the workers are asleep". Geet tried to avert his attention.

"Maan you must be hungry..I made you food".

"But I want to eat you..." he said with a naughty tinge. She blushed and he claimed her in his arms again. "Geet you look so gorgeous in this sari..I feel like..i feel like..well I think I better stop here".

Geet managed to break their eternal hug. Maan was not interested in anything but to embrace her.

"Geet I am only going to eat if you feed me"...she smiled and obliged. She fed him while he looked at her beautiful face. Each morsel she put in his mouth she felt a tinge of electricity going through her.

Maan was driving her crazy with his intense gaze. "Geet ye sab mere liye?" She nodded. He took the fork and fed her too. "I can't believe we are together...I'm so happy..Geet..your not getting cold feet are you?"

"Nahin main soch rahi ti ke humare rishte saaf ho gaya hain toh ab kya?"

"Ab? Well it will only get better" he said with a naughty smirk. They finished eating and Maan followed her to the kitchen.

"Maan why you following me?"

"Geet why do you think I am following you?" he had a smooth husky voice. "I want to spend time with you...leave all these chores". She moved backwards...he intensely came forward..she looked at his naughty expressions...he sexily removed his tie..."Ye kya aap kar rahe hain?" she asked looking at his strip tease...he slowly took his sexy long fingers and unbuttoned his remaining buttons..."Wohi jo muje bahut pehle karna chahiye tah"...she tried to escape he blocked her and she tried going the other way and he blocked her again.."Geet does this remind you of something? Well darling this time you won't escape"..he flickered his eyes from her eyes to her lips..."Maan ye kya kar rahe ho aap" she coyly looked down.


He reached his neck and took off his gold chain with the initial M and brought it around Geet's neck. She grabbed his arm and smiled. "Mere pyar ka pehla tofa..you know Geet my father gave this to me on my 5th birthday and I have never parted from it...until now...as you are so special to me I want you to have it". Geet rested her head on his chest and both walked up. Maan went to change and Geet changed into her nightie.

As soon as she was about to come out Maan startled her. "Maan! Ye kya jao apne kamre main". He twirled Geet and held her hand "Ab kise neend aye gi? Geet I missed you".

"I missed you too...but Maan I don't know anything about love",

"I will teach you..don't worry...as for now I am happy that you feel the same way about me like I feel about you". She nodded. "Geet what made you like me?"

"Mmmhhh...your smart, intelligent, witty, you got good sense of humour...uhhh your handsome...goodlooking...hot..your style... your physique...ooopss" she bit her tongue and covered her mouth. He smirked and came near and looked into her eyes. "Geet you find me attractive?"

He pulled her by the waist. "Ye bi koi poochne ki baat hain..I thought Maan Singh Khurana had big fat ego about himself". He pulled her closer. "I do..but Geet I love it when you say something nice about me". She put her arms around his neck "Mere Maan se pyara iss duniya main koi nahin hain".

"Acha? Tum nahin poocho gi apne baare main?". She shook her head. "Aapki ankhen jisi tara muje dekti hain muje bata deti hain".

"Kisi din tume batao ga...magar aaj keliye ye kaafi hain ke you are gorgeous".

Maan sat with till 2pm talking. Sometimes he would take her hand and look at them as if he was analysing them. Then he would smooth her stray hair. When they felt more awkward he hugged her and then wouldn't let go. There was a tension between them something was amiss.

"Maan its 2.30am jao so jao.." she got him up and pushed him out of her room. As she was going back he pulled her hair gently. She looked back. "Did I tell you before you have beautiful hair?" He pulled her close. Geet chest kept rising and falling. She knew being in love with Maan Singh Khurana was not going to be easy. He gently held her by the hips and hugged her. Geet was hugging him tightly. She felt she was melting in his embrace. He buried his face in her shoulder. She dug her nails on his back to bring him closer. "Heer I need to go..." she smiled hearing him call her Heer. He walked a bit further and looked back "Go to sleep now as tomorrow I need to say something important to you".


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gskWoOho3N4&ob=av3e[/YOUTUBE]


Precap; Maaneet's first tiff

Previous: Part 12
Next: Part 14

Press the like button and please comment..I hope I haven't moved the story fast..but it was necessary to move the story.


Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all I wanted to say that wohooo I'm first to comment after a very long time 😃

Okay WOW this was a phenomenal update!! I'm so glad that maan n Geet r in love with each other and I loved the way maan confronted her at his house ;)
The hugs were amazing wow I can imagine them so well!
Haha even I end up blushing and giggling when I read your updates 😛 😆

I loved it when they fed each other & the quality time they spent at night :) it's so cute! :)
Hehe Geet won't be able to escape much from maan from now on ;)

Can't wait for the next part
The precap is a bit :(
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Mwah
Xx
Edited by Maaneet.Lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it
cant w8 4da next
amazing maneet face to face wonderful

plz update soon
fabulous
maan confression in a letter wow just fab
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Posted: 13 years ago
yappieee

the confession!!!! BEAUTIFUL

waiting for them to come face to face
update soon

waiting eagerlyyy

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