~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 31

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Part 12

Maine poocha pyar hain ke nahin

Tera dil bekaraar hain ke nahin?

The Khurana's were getting ready to attend an opening of a client's factory. Maan came down wearing a casual top with black jeans. His top was open showing off his toned chest. His biceps were oozing out of his tight short sleeves. His eyes searched for Geet but she was not down yet. He was wishing the night after maybe she had calmed down and he will be able to talk to her. He fiddled with his breakfast and was not eating much. How could he when his friend was not even talking to him?

Geet came to the breakfast table with no make up and puffed eyes. Maan intently looked at her. Her demeanour had changed. She was no longer her bubbly self. She refused to glance at Maan.

"Geet beta are you okay?" asked a concerned Kumkum.

"Ji Aunty ji, meri tabiyat teek nahin hain, Aunty you all go I will stay behind".

"Geet we were all going to Bombay for the opening of a clients factory, it will be for 4 or 5 days, you will be all alone".

"Aunty don't worry about me, I will be fine". Kumkum gave in and blessed her.

Maan listened to her intently. She was avoiding him that much was consistent. He kept signalling her to look but she avoided his calls. Singhania and Kumkum went to sit in their car. Maan followed Geet in the kitchen.

"Geet!" she heard him from behind and was about to ran out of the kitchen that he flexed his arm and blocked her way. She looked at his determined face. She made an angry face and tried going the other way and he trapped her from both sides. "Maan mera raasta choriye". Her heartbeat increased a thousand fold.

He flickered his eyes from her eyes to her lips. "Geet...meri baat toh suno...main.." Geet lowered her eyes and gulped her breath.

"Ab kiya bacha hain kehne ke liye aap ne suna kal raat ko kiya kaha John ne..toh please muje bakish de..muje main itni himmat nahin itna bara ilzaam sehne ke liye...log humare baare main kiya sochte hain ye aap ne sun liya ab kiya chahte hain?..main kuch dino ki mehmaan hoon yaha par aur pir se apne baba ke saat chali jao gi toh please muje apne haal pe chor de".

Geet broke down in tears. Maan was about to wipe them that Geet moved away. "people think we sleep with each other..I wish I died before hearing that". Geet ran off and Maan painfully looked on. His mobile rang, his parents were calling him outside.

Maan sat at the back of their car with tears in his eyes. He kept fighting his tears back and put his black shades on. How was he going to survive 4 days without seeing her? Meanwhile Geet rang her father. "Baba aaj aapki yaad aa rahi hain, haan main teek hoon, sab log ache hain...jaldi aana baba..I miss you...I miss teaching you and hitting you...I love you baba". She was fighting back her tears whilst talking to her father.

She sat down only to get flashbacks of what had happened the night before. She wanted Maan close to her. She got up to feel his presence in his bedroom. She saw Maan's photo in his room. She without thinking caressed the photo with her fingers. "Maan I miss you, I want to stay away from you but it is hard..its not good for us to have this friendship*. She began tidying up his room. She knew he liked everything in place. As she was cleaning she saw the cap on his bed. She picked it and hugged it. As she looked on the bed she saw a letter addressed to her.

Geet,

I am leaving you with a heavy heart as you are not listening to me. Ever since you have come to my life I have felt a special bond between us but nither you or I understood it. Muje nahin farak parta ke duniya kiya humare rishte ke baare main kiya sochti hain...par sach se moo bi toh nahin mor sakta...Geet Maine Pyar Kiya hain..tumse...koi gunah nahin kiya jiski tum muje saza de rahi ho. Tum kiya mehsoos karti ho ye janana mere liye bahut zaroori ho gaya hain. Geet I miss you.

Tumara Maan

He had left a present for her...Me to You teddy.

Geet looked at the teddy with shock and pain and then happiness. *Babaji ye kiya maine kar diya..I made him upset...when he only loved me...I want to call him back*

The factory client had kept a party in the evening. Maan's parents had to go somewhere so he had to attend. Maan met everyone with a glum heart. John and Sumaira smirked as they knew they had separated Maaneet. "Mr Khurana we have heard you sing good why don't you entertain us". Adi put his hand on his shoulder and Maan felt like letting his frustration and feeling out.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QJu-LDyXwYE[/YOUTUBE]

Maan painfully began singing with slight tears in his eyes.
Manzilo Pe Aa Ke Lootate Hai Dilon Ke Caaravaan-(caravan of hearts return just before the destination)

Kashtiya Saahil Pe Aksar Doobati Hai Pyaar Ki(-boats often sink just before reaching the shore)

All the people chorused "Wah wah".

Maan walked looking lost and hurt and continued.

Manzile Apni Jagah Hai Raaste Apni Jagah hain
Jab Kadam Hi Saath Naa De To Musaafir Kyaa Kare

(destinations are one thing, paths are another
when destiny itself fails then what can traveler do?)

He looked at Geet's picture in his mobile.

Yoon To Hai Humdard Bhi Aur Humsafar Bhi Hai Meraa , Badh Ke Koyi Haath Naa De Dil Bhalaa Fir Kyaa Kare, Manzile Apni Jagah Hai Raaste Apni Jagah

(in a way, i have a partner and a sympathizer with me
but even they don't extend hand of help, then what can a heart do?)

Maan started getting flashbacks of all his moments with Geet. He smiled at how happy he was with her.

Doobne Waale Ko Tinke Kaa Sahaaraa Hi Bahot, Dil Bahal Jaaye Fakat Itnaa Ishaaraa Hi Bahot, Itne Par Bhi Aasmaan Waalaa Giraa De Bijaliyaan, Koi Batlaa De Zaraa Yeh Doobtaa Fir Kyaa Kare, Manzile Apni Jagah Hai Raaste Apni Jagah

that heart may find solace, such sign itself would have been enough
then someone tell me, what can this drowing person do?)

As he was remembering what happened at the party and the state Geet was in he began getting emotional.

Pyaar Karnaa Jurm Hai To Jurm Hum Se Ho Gayaa
Kaabil-E-Maafi Huaa Karte Nahin Aise Gunaah
Sangdil Hai Yeh Jahaan Aur Sangdil Meraa Sanam
Kyaa Kare Josh-E-Junoon Aur Hauslaa Fir Kyaa Kare?

Adi hugged Maan with tears in his eyes.

Manzile Apni Jagah Hai Raaste Apni Jagah hain
Jab Kadam Hi Saath Naa De To Musaafir Kyaa Kare
Yoon To Hai Humdard Bhi Aur Humsafar Bhi Hai Meraa
Badh Ke Koyi Haath Naa De Dil Bhalaa Fir Kyaa Kare

The audience clapped and the client came to Maan "Wah lagta hain bahut gehri chot kai hai aap ne..bahut dard hain aap ki awaaz main". Maan shook their hand and went off. As he was walking towards his car he saw Handsome sitting on it. "Handsome what you doing here? Whats this..?" he quickly opened the letter that was tied to his neck.

Maan,

Maine Pyar kiya hain...aapse..

I'm sorry I did not understand you. Now I know why we were so close. I wish I understood the depth to our friendship. I am missing you and am feeling incomplete with out you

Maan ki Geet

Maan smiled and kissed the letter. He got into his Mercedes Benz and drove as fast as he could.

Precap; Maaneet come face to face.

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